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Index...😊

Parts 1 to 13...Pgs 1 and 2...

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Hi everyone……………well thanks a tonnn for all those who voted for the title of this FF!...Hope u all like it………It will begin eighteen months after the scene where naku roams around like diwanis finding dutta and calling out his name……………..And one thing more…………Iss mein…………….Nana sahib is a Positive character and not after naku…………….😊

Sooo lets begin…………..

Eighteen months later………😊

It's a scene in the patil niwas and u see everyone is roaming around in the hall………getting ready for the pooja……….

As baji keeps the thaali of diyas given by leela and moves up u see he was placing it in front of dutta's portrait…………….

Baji walks around the room and reaches a corner after making sure all preparations were done for Dutta's first shraad…………….

He calls the driver to ask where they were and just then…………..Pandit jiss come in with guru jii and sit down to make all the taiyaaris for the pooja…………..

Two months after that fateful day……..when naku and dutta had gone to seek blessings in the temple and naku had asked dutta to go and take the round of temple and come back to have tilak…………and after which he never returned…………..Naku had seen him taken away in the van…………

Naku had tried to find him everywhere and when she returned back home to tell everyone……each of dutta's people went out in search of him but in vain…………….

Even Nana sahen and his men used all power and money in vain…..dutta could be found now where………….

Two months later………………a body did come to PN…………..of the same physique as dutta……….with all his belongings on him……….the cahin……watch …..ring everything was dutta's but the face of the corpse was charred!...

That day……….Life seemd to have come to a stand still for the Patil's…………….THEY ALL FOUND IT HARD TO BELIEVE IT WAS THEIR BELOVED dutta's corpse…………….

But when naku walked in…….broke down her bangles………..removed the vermillion from her forehead and cried bitterly kneeling by the body'a side……………taking off her MS too…………..SEEING THE WOMAN WHO HAD FOUGHT ALL ODDS TO GET BACK HER LOVE ………..GIVE UP!...the other members too GAVE IN!...and accepted…………..THAT THE VERRY FOUNDAION OF THEIR FAMILY……………Their dutta had left them forever………….😭

Roops walks upto baji and says----main aayi sahib ko leney jaa rahii hai baji….tu jaa waheeni ko bulaa laa…………….

Baji nods his head and walks away when guru jii calls out to him……………..

Upstairs in dutta's room…….u see naku stands in front of dutta's portrait smiling at her………

She stood dressed in an off white saree……………All these months she was ALONE EVEN WITH THE WORLD AROUND HER MOVING AHEAD……………SHE JUST WANTED TO STAY WITHIN THE WALL SHE HAD BUILT AROUND HERSELF!...😭

Like dutta she fulfilled all her responsibilities………………she was a perfect daughter in law………..a perfect sister in law……….a perfect aunt……..infact almost like mother to leela's daughter Mihika and kishore's son Anay………………😳

But not for once did she LET THEM SEE THE IMMENSE PAIN she hid in her heart………………

Not once did she let them feel that she was all SAD……BROKEN and LONELY WITHIN……………….

She always kept that sweet smile on her face intact………….BEHIND WHICH EASILY SHE HID…………..her own grief trying hard each day…………..TO NOT LET dutta's family FEEL HIS ABSENCE!...😭

Naku stares at the thread in her hand which she had to tie on dutta's wrist once he returned from the parikrama………….and then looks up at dutta's pic and says softly-----SABB AAPKEY BINA APNI ZINDAGI KII EK NAYI SHURUAAT KAR SAKEIN…………….PICHLII BAAR KII TARAH……………PHIR WAHII UMEED AUR WAHI BHAROSAA UNKEY DIL MEIN NAA RAHEY………ISLIYE Uss LAASH KO apnaa kar mainney iss safed jodey ko apna jeevan maan liyaa………………LEKIN AAJ bhi……………(tears well up in naku's eyes as she says on…………)………..aaj bhi yeh sirf AAPKI HAR DHADKAN KE SAATH DHADAKTAA HAI!...KYUNKII YEH JAANTA HAI………….KII EK DIN AAP WAAPAS ZAROOR AAOGEY……………..Ek din inn nazron ko aapka deedar aur iss BIKHRI ZINDAGI KO USSKA KINARA ZAROOR MILEGAA…………..Phir chahey wohh din meri zindagii kaa aakhiri din hii kyun na ho………………😭

Naku takes in a deep breath and sobs silently…………..

There Nana sahib walks in the hall and baji greets him……………He asks him---nakusha kahaan hai?...

Baji says---upar kamrey mein hai………….main bas jaa rahaa thaa naku ko laaney……………….

Nana sahib says---tu yahiin kaam dekh……MAIN jataa hai…………..😊

NS makes his way up the stairs as baji goes to leela who was calling him………………😊

Naku takes in a deep breath and sobs silently…………..

There Nana sahib walks in the hall and baji greets him……………He asks him---nakusha kahaan hai?...😕

Baji says---upar kamrey mein hai………….main bas jaa rahaa thaa naku ko laaney……………….

Nana sahib says---tu yahiin kaam dekh……MAIN jataa hai…………..

NS makes his way up the stairs as baji goes to leela who was calling him………………

Naku tries to hold back he tears as she recalled the fateful day when that body was brought into PN……………and Nana sahib had walked into her room…………and told her………….that in the last two months he had used all power and money………….Leaving no stone unturned …………to find out dutta but in vain………..

Naku had remained silent then…………….as nana sahib had folded his hands and said with tears in his eyes-------wohh mere liye bete se bhi badhkar tha……….jaan tha meri…….aur main jaanta hai………tu nahin maanegi kii wohh laash dutta kii hai………..main bhi nahin maantaa……..MAGAR AAJ AGGAR HUM CHUP RAHEY………TOH AYI SAHIB …..BAJI…..DUTTA KE SABHI GHARWALON KO UMEED RAHEGI……KII WOHH LAUTEGA……AUR ISI UMEED KO ZINDAGII KAA MAKSAD BANAA KAR………ZINDAGI MEIN KABHI AAGEY NAHIN Badh payeinge………..dutta ko yaad kareinge……….toh unkey chehre par muskurahat nahin……….aakhon mein mayoosii ke ansu hongey………..😭

Flashback ends and as naku stared at the tears rolling down her cheeks in her reflection……..on dutta's portrait………….naku could understand……….nana sahib had been right……..naku had wondered how could his loved ones move on in life without him……………..for naku………DUTTA WAS THE ONE AROUND WHOM HER WHOLE WORLD REVOLVED………..AND NOW WHEN HE WAS NOT THERE………….THERE WAS NO LIFE…………SOO MOVING ON IN LIFE SOUNDED ABSURD………..😲

However now……..she was glad………that she did what nana sahib had asked her to do……….she became the widow of the man she could still feel was alive and breathing somewhere……….because it as almost going to be two years since the day dutta went missing………and still there was no sign of him……………😭

Today as the whole patil family had accepted that their beloved dutta was gone…………they moved on in life with dutta's fond memories close to their hearts……….and consoled that he was wtchig them from somewhere in heaven…………..AND IT WAS ONLY NAKU…….WHO AS SHEDDING TEARS OF HELPLESSNESS STILL CLNGING ONTO THE LITTLE HOPE THAT ONE DAY………DUTTA WOULD RETURN………….

NAKU…….it was nana sahib standing at the door calling out to her………

Quickly wiping away her tears naku closes her hand around the thread and says softly-----jii nana sahib……….😕

NS could feel all the anguish he saw on naku's face as he too still nurtured the hope in his heart …….that one fine day he would find dutta and those who were behind all this……….

He could feel tears welling up in his eyes and says clearing his throat------sab aa gaye hain……..pooja ka waqt ho raha hai……..chal neechey chalein……..

Naku nods her hed and together the two walk out as nana sahib says------bahot bahadur aur samajhdaar hai tu nakusha………uss din merii baat nahin maani hoti toh yeh……..yeh naumeedi ke ansoo……yeh mayoosi unn sab ke chehre par hotii………😭

Naku walks down the stairs and as nana sahib's words echo in her head she finds……..ayi sahib sitting with anay and mihika………….baji was helping suds with the ok……….while leela and roops were putting diyas in front of duttas photo…………..😕

She walks upto the two sisters while nana sahib walks upto baji and suds……..

Picking the matchstick……… naku lights the diyas as with the other she still held onto the thread………..

In the burning flame of the diyas………….NAKU COULD FEEL HER HEART MELT AWAY……….

SHE FELT ALL HOPE MELT IN TOO……..

THE WAIT TOO SEEMED TO BURN AWAY IN THOSE FLAMES………….

AND A SINGLE TEAR WHICH FELL INTO THE FLAME VANISHED AWAY TOO………….😭

NAKU CLOSES HER EYES AND RECALLS DUTTA SMILING…………and the realization dawned onto her…………there was one thing that remained……….INTACT……..UNBEATEN……..UNCHANGED………..AND BURNING LIKE THE FLAME……….⭐️

IT WAS LOVE………..NO HELPLESSNESS………NO LOSS OF WAIT……….NO ADVERSITY……….NO BROKEN HOPE …………COULD EVER DESTROY IT………….

Nothing could take it away from her………..not even death could steal her love for dutta from her……….👏

And as naku sits for the pooja holding to the thread even more firmly……..for JUST LIKE THE THREad AWAITED A HAND TO TIE AROUND……….NAKU AWAITED OR DUTTA TO RETURN……….AND HIDING HERSELF IN HIS ARMS……..TELL HIM………WHAT HE MEANT TO HER……….😛

P.S. ………Jii mein aata hai tere daaman mein sar chupaa ke hum rotey rahein……….rotey rahein………teri bhii aakhon mein……..ansuon kii kamii toh nahin………tere bina zindagi se koi shikwa toh nahin……..shikwa nahin……..😭

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Part 3...Beetey lamhey...

In the burning flame of the diyas''''.NAKU COULD FEEL HER HEART MELT AWAY'''.😕

SHE FELT ALL HOPE MELT IN TOO''..

THE WAIT TOO SEEMED TO BURN AWAY IN THOSE FLAMES''''.😭

AND A SINGLE TEAR WHICH FELL INTO THE FLAME VANISHED AWAY TOO''''.

NAKU CLOSES HER EYES AND RECALLS DUTTA SMILING''''and the realization dawned onto her''''there was one thing that remained'''.INTACT''..UNBEATEN''..UNCHANGED'''..AND BURNING LIKE THE FLAME'''.😳

IT WAS LOVE'''..NO HELPLESSNESS'''NO LOSS OF WAIT'''.NO ADVERSITY'''.NO BROKEN HOPE ''''COULD EVER DESTROY IT''''.😛

Nothing could take it away from her'''..not even death could steal her love for dutta from her'''.

And as naku sits for the pooja holding to the thread even more firmly''..for JUST LIKE THE THREad AWAITED A HAND TO TIE AROUND'''.NAKU AWAITED OR DUTTA TO RETURN'''.AND HIDING HERSELF IN HIS ARMS''..TELL HIM'''WHAT HE MEANT TO HER'''.

Naku sits staring blankly at the burning havankund'''.and vividly recalls all the beautiful moments spent with dutta'''.😳

The song veeraniyan plays in the background'''.and as the flames rose higher''.the smoke kept on hurting her eyes''''leaving them red and watering😭'''..and even through the blurred vision''''.naku could clearly remember'''.dutta''..smile''..frown''..and shout''.gaze and grin at her'''''.

U hear naku's voice say in the background'''😳

Unn dinon''.jabkii tum the yahan''..

Zindagi jaagi jaagi sii thi'''

Saarey mausam badey meherbaan dost the'''

Raastey'''dawatnaamey the jo manzilon ne likhey the zameen par humarey liye'''.

Pedd'''baahein pasarey khadey the hummein chaanv kii chaadar udhaney ke vaastey'''

Shaam ko sabhii sitaarey''.bahot muskuratey the jab dekhtey the hummein''''

Unn dinon''.jabkii tum the yahan''..😭

The pooja ends'''slowly everyone get up and naku touches aayi sahib's and nana sahib's feet and they bless her''''.

Naku goes to seek the priest's blessings too'''.

Later that evening''''.u see everyone Is around the dinner table''''''

Leela and roops serve the food to everyone while naku keeps on watching baji and roops busy gazing at each other''''.😆😉

Over these months''''.the two had fallen in love''''and they both confided in to naku''''''and naku too let AS know about it and she was glad to know too'''''

Naku says-----aayi sahib'.kuch baat karnii thii aapse''''..

AS smiles---haan bolo na naku''''..

Mishika comes in and sits in naku's lap saying---aayi hum sirf bua ke haathon se khayeingey''''.

Naku smiles and leela too grins as she knew how fond her daughter was of naku''''''.

Naku feeds the little one as and says----agley haftey madhu bhi chutiyon ke liye aa jayegi''''.isliye''main soch rahii thii''''..kyun naa hum achcha saa mahurat dekh kar baji aur roops kii sagaayi karvaa dein?...👏

Baji is shell shocked and roops is blushing hard as AS nods saysing----yeh toh bahot achcha khayaal hai naku'''''hum kal hii guru jii se baat kareingey''''''

Kishore and suds tease baji while leela grins at her little sister knowingly'''''and naku too smiles seeing everyone laughing and enjoying'''''.

Later in the night u see everyone is fast asleep in PN'''''..

Naku walks out into the hall and reaches the door'''''

She opens it and is taken aback to find nana sahib standing there''''.

She says lowly---aap?...Mere ko lagaa''''aap'''..aap bhool gaye''''''

NS smiles----AISA KAISEY HO SAKTAA HAI?...Pichley kitney maheenon se har haftey tu isi din''''jis din tunney dutta ko khoyaa thaa'''.ussi jagah jaati hai jahaan se wohh gayab ho gayaa tha!...AUR HAR BAAR MAIN TERE SAATH AATA HAI''''..ISS UMMED MEIN KII SHAAYAD''''SHAAYAD TERI TARAH main'''''..BHI USSEY WAHAA MEHSOOS KAR PAYE magar nako''(NS grins a little'..)'..aisaa kabhii nahiin hotaa'''''.(he raises his hands and putting it on naku's head says blessing her)'''''..Tu meri zimedaari hai''''''dutta kii amaanat hai mere paas''''''..ABB CHAL''''..waqt rehtey waaps bhi toh aana hai'''''..

Naku nods her head and the two sit in the car and reach the temple''''..

NS stays in the car while naku gets down and goes up the stairs reaching the main hall of the temple''''''😊

The cool breeze blows across her face'''''.AND SHE COULD HEAR DUTTA WHISPER TO HER-----MAIN WAAPS AAONGA''''''

The wind made the bells in the temple collide with each other and make noise''''''.AND NAKU COULD FEEL DUTTA WATCHING HER!...Moving towards her''''as she could hear his footsteps too!...😳

The sky above was brightly lit canvas by the stars and as naku stared at the dark night '''''.SHE COULD SEE DUTTA SMILE AT HER!...😊

And as the clouds moved and the moonlight fell into the whole place lighting it up''''''.NAKU COULD FEEL DUTTA OPEN UP HIS ARMS TO EMBRACE HER!...

Yes'''''.this place where nau last saw dutta''''''the place where she lost him''''''REMINDED HER OF HIM EVERYTIME SHE WALKED IN!...⭐️

ALL THE FORCES OF NATURE SEEMED TO ASSURE HER''''''.that her love''''.her dutta sahib was fine''''..and AND SOMEWHERE waiting to unite with her''''''.😊

ALL THE FORCES OF NATURE SEEMED to know'''''..THAT ONE DAY THE TWO LOVERS WOULD MEET''''''and NAKU WOULD FIND ER DUTTA'''''''and dutta would get his naku'''''.IN LIFE OR IN DEATH''''''.ONE DAY THE TWO WOULD BE TOGETHER AND THAT TOO FOREVER!...😍

Part 4...DESIRE...

NS stays in the car while naku gets down and goes up the stairs reaching the main hall of the temple………………😕

The cool breeze blows across her face…………….AND SHE COULD HEAR DUTTA WHISPER TO HER-----MAIN WAAPS AAONGA………………

The wind made the bells in the temple collide with each other and make noise……………….AND NAKU COULD FEEL DUTTA WATCHING HER!...Moving towards her…………as she could hear his footsteps too!...

The sky above was brightly lit canvas by the stars and as naku stared at the dark night …………….SHE COULD SEE DUTTA SMILE AT HER!...😊

And as the clouds moved and the moonlight fell into the whole place lighting it up……………….NAKU COULD FEEL DUTTA OPEN UP HIS ARMS TO EMBRACE HER!...

Yes…………….this place where nau last saw dutta………………the place where she lost him………………REMINDED HER OF HIM EVERYTIME SHE WALKED IN!...

ALL THE FORCES OF NATURE SEEMED TO ASSURE HER……………….that her love………….her dutta sahib was fine…………..and AND SOMEWHERE waiting to unite with her……………….

ALL THE FORCES OF NATURE SEEMED to know……………..THAT ONE DAY THE TWO LOVERS WOULD MEET………………and NAKU WOULD FIND ER DUTTA…………………and dutta would get his naku…………….IN LIFE OR IN DEATH……………….ONE DAY THE TWO WOULD BE TOGETHER AND THAT TOO FOREVER!...😳

The cool breeze blows across her face…………….AND SHE COULD HEAR DUTTA WHISPER TO HER-----MAIN WAAPS AAONGA………………

The sky above was brightly lit canvas by the stars and as naku stared at the dark night …………….SHE COULD SEE DUTTA SMILE AT HER!...

And as the clouds moved and the moonlight fell into the whole place lighting it up……………….NAKU COULD FEEL DUTTA OPEN UP HIS ARMS TO EMBRACE HER!...

Yes…………….this place where nau last saw dutta………………the place where she lost him………………REMINDED HER OF HIM EVERYTIME SHE WALKED IN!...

ALL THE FORCES OF NATURE SEEMED TO ASSURE HER……………….that her love………….her dutta sahib was fine…………..and AND SOMEWHERE waiting to unite with her……………….

Taking a deep breath and letting the air refresh her………….Naku walks around the temple………..and as u see flashback of the scene where dutta had gone around the temple for the parikrama……………u see tears well up in naku's eyes as she recalls it all!...

She wishes…………..If only SHE HAD NOT LET HIM GO THAT DAY!...If only she had not insisted him to go around the temple that day!...IF ONLY HE WAS THERE BY HER SIDE TODAY!...IF ONLY………….LIFE RETURNED HIM TO HER ONE LAST TIMe!...She won't let go off him ever again………………….😳

IF ONLY………….(naku slows down as she is about to complete the round)………….IF ONLY IT WAS HIM AND NOT THESE IFS as her companion tonight!...

She stops as she reaches the temple corridor again………………she enters the main hall and feels the cool breeze blow across her face……………….and it was then that she heard him…………..

KAISI HAI naku…………..😛

A smile crosses naku's face as she turns around…………..her eyes CRAVING TO GET A GLIMPSE OF HIM and there he stood………………smiling at her…………….dressed in the same black pathaanai naku had last seen him in…………….😛

Naku remains silent and JUST LIKE A THIRSTY MAN IN A DESERT GULPS DOWN WHATEVER WATER HE FINDS………………she keeps on gazing at him…………………wanting her eyes to keep on watching him like this forever!...

Dutta steps closer to naku and slowly puts a hand on her shoulder and makes her sit on the temple stairs and seats himself too next to her………………

Not once did naku take her eyes off him…………Not once does she blink……….fearing that he might leave…………………..☺️

Whenever naku felt…………….lonely……alone…….broken…………..hurt……..sad………………or whenever she longed to see him……………..He always used to come………………

Today she felt nothing still he was right there!...with his presence he seemed to COMFORT HER THAT HE WAS ALWAYS AROUND HER…………..

Dutta speas at last in his soft husky voice breaking the silence-----Aye naku…………..Kya hua?...Aaj baat nahiin karegii mere se…………………

Naku smiles and says softly--ayi sahib se baat kar li mainey...agley haftey madhu bhi aa rahi hai achchaa sa mahurat dekhkar roop aur baji ki sagayi karva deinge...(nakus voice trails off)... Dutta could see tears welling up in nakus eyes and even before naku could realise that she was crying dutta wipes them away and says--inn akhon mein ansu gavara nahi hai mere ko naku...teri inn nazro mein main sabki khushi dekhna chahta hoon...tu royegi toh unhein himmat kaun dega?

Naku says slowly--meri zindagi ki kami aapke pyar ka intezar karti rahegi...laut aao na saab...meri khatir laut aao... 😭

Dutta mover his face closer to naku and she closes her eyes as dutta kisses her on her forehead and rays--aaonga...ek din main zaroor wapas aaonga... 😳Naku opens her eyes and finds herself staring at the empty temple and dark sky!

She finds it hard to curtail her anguish and cries her heart out sitting on the stairs and u hear nakus voice say in the background—

~~HAKEEKAT NAHIN ABb SIRF EK EHSAAS HAI TU... ZINDAGI JEENEY KI AAKHIRI AAS HAI TU... JEE PAAON TERI bahon KI PANAAH Mein YEH HO NA SAKAA... Phir Bhi HAR SAANS TERA INTEZAR KARTI HAI... Aisa pyaar hai tu...~~ 😍

naku reaches the car and silent she sits in the car...as nana saheb drives back to patil niwas... Naku gets down and turns to say to NS--SHUKRIYA... NS nods his head and says--thak gayi hogi...jaa thoda aaram kar ley... Naku smiles and walks in and closes the door after getting inside...as nana sahib stares at the empty doorway...

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Part 5...The Lion returns...😊

Naku looks into duttas eyes and sobs--iss sab mein main aapki kami kaisi poori karegi? Dutta takes nakus hand in his and says pressing on them gently--jaise aaj tak karti aayi hai...apne pyar...apney vishwas apni himmat se... Naku says slowly--meri zindagi ki kami aapke pyar ka intezar karti rahegi...laut aao na saab...meri khatir laut aao... Dutta mover his face closer to naku and she closes her eyes as dutta kisses her on her forehead and rays--aaonga...ek din main zaroor wapas aaonga... Naku opens her eyes and finds herself staring at the empty temple and dark sky!😭

She finds it hard to curtail her anguish and cries her heart out sitting on the stairs and u hear nakus voice say in the background—

Nana sahib stares at the empty doorway and thinks to himself--mere bas mein hota toh kabhi tere ko iss tarah udaas nahin rehney deta naku...par jab mera hi dil yeh maanney ko taiyar nahin hai ki dutta humarey beech nahin raha toh tere se kaise keh dey ki ab woh kabhi nahin lautega?!...😭

NS recalls the day that corpse was taken for the last rites all broken and shattered naku had cried--kismet mere sath aisa khel kyun khel rahi hai? Main...(naku had fallen to his feet) main kya karey...kiske paas jaye saab ko dhoondney kahan jaye (ns had brought up naku to her feet and she had cried foldng her hands) aap...aap toh bahot taakatvar hai na...sabki madad kartey hai mere...mere saab ko dhoond do main unke bina nahin ji sakti! 😭

FB ENDS nakus cries were still fresh in nana sahebs mind as he taker in a deep breath and thinks to himself----bahot HO GAYA DUTTA! Abhi MAIN TERE KO USS BACHCHI KO AUR SATAANEY NAHIN DEGA...TU JAHAN BHI HAI TERE KO DHOOND KE LAYEGA! ...with that nana saheb drives away into the dark nght...👏

Upstairs in patil niwas naku was all alone in her room...

it was in these silent nights when her inner self too fell silent...naku missed dutta the most and the loneliness seemed to engulf her heart from everywhere!...

her eyes fall on her scarred wrists and the next instant she gets up and opening the drawer takes out a knife...she goes to stand in front of duttas portrait and stares at her reflection in it...

YES SHE HAD DONE THIS BEFORE...SEVERAL TIMES WHEN SHE FELT BROKEN and the sufferring became unbearable...

she would give herself superficial cuts...and would leave them to bleed...Tonight too she goes to sit on the bed and stares .at the knife longingly...😲

A heartbeat later she raises the knife and gives her a superficial slit in one fluid motion and her wund begins to bleed!...😭

NAKU WINCES IN PAIN ONLY TO REALISE THAT THE PHYSICAL PAIN WAS NOthing in front of her aching heart...and as the blood flowed the hurt seemed to lessen and naku falls back on the bed!...😭

NAKU CLOSES HER EYES...HOW EASY IT WAS FOR HER TO END THE SUFFERING ONCE AND FOR ALL...A LITTLE DEEPER AND IT WOULD ALL BE Over as she wo uld bleed t death...

but NO NAKU COULDNT KILL HERSELF! She had people to look after...she had promises to keep and responsiblities to fulfill...

HER chain OF THOUGHTS IS BROKEN AS SHE FEELS A WARM HAND TOUCH HER FACE...😳

She opens her eyes and finds herself staring into the eyes THAT MADE her world go round!...😛

It was dutta looking down at her worriedly...his eyes were wet and expression grim.. He gazes at nakus pale face and says taking her bleeding wrist in his hands---KYUN KAR RAHI HAI AISA NAKU...KHUD KO ITNA DARD ITNA DUKH MATT DEY...MAIN TEREKO ISS HAAL MEIN NAHIN DEKH SAKTA!...

A slight smile crosses nakus lips as she slips in and out of consciousness...and she mumbles--mere ko dard mein nahin dekh saktey...dukhi nahin dekh saktey toh laut aao na...laut aao na meri zindagi saab...TIRED...WEAK AND WORN OUT NAKU FALLS unconscious……………..

U see naku's cut wrist bleeds while away in Mumbai…………in ahuge mansion…………you see a man dressed in a pair of blue denims…….blue shirt and a white coat…………….sits on a huge chair……………in his office…………..and is busy fiddling with the knife…………..

The ltl BG music plays and u see that by mistake the knife grazes past his hand and falls to hit the ground leaving him wincing in pain with a bleeding hand!...

Angry at his own carelessness……………the man turns around in the revolving chair…………………and u see its no one but a FROWNING DUTTA!...⭐️

U hear dutta's husky voice say in the BG……………😛❤️

Zindagi Kitni Khubsurat hoti,
Agar teri chahat adhoori na hoti,
Kuchh uljhane khuchh majbooriyan hoti beshak,
Magar pyar mein itni dooriyan na hoti…..😭

Naku's voice says in the BG……………

Intezar rehta hai har shaam apka,
raatein katti hai le kar naam apka,
muddat se baithe hai ye aas lagaye
ki aaj aayega koi paigaam apka…😭

The screen splits and on one side u see naku lying on the bed sleeping with a bleeding wrist…………..while on the other side Dutta glared at his bleeding hand…………………..😳

Part 6...Sands of time...

A frowning dutta glares at his hand...and the next instant he folds his hand into a fist..wincing as his wound hurts even more...the phone rings and pickng it up he almost shouts...MAIN EK BAAR BOLA NA? Baar baar dohrandy ki aadat nahin hai mere ko...ab kuch hua na toh teri arthi nikalwaney mein mere ko waqt nahin lagega! ( Masha allah gussa waisa hi hai saab ka lol ) dutta slams down the receiver and just then u see a woman walk into his room...dutta looks up and his face brightens up as he smiles-- tayi!.. tu kab aayi? Its kala ...dressed in a green saree and very little make up which is very unlyk her lol.

Kala smiles and asks him -- bas abhi ayi.kya hua bhau..kis par naraz ho raha tha? Dutta says-woh sala gaikwad...bola main usko ...chod tayi...tu inn lafdon mein matt padd...teri tabiyat kaisi hai? Kala says--main theek hun ab tu yeh kaam chod aur chal khana kha ley Dutta nods his head and gets up when kalas eyes fall on his hand bleeding and she rushes upto him...taking his hand in hers she says--bhau...yeh yeh kaise hua? Chot kaisi lagi? Kitna khoon beh raha hai... Dutta tries to speak but a worried kala makes him sit...and as she rushes to get the first aid box dutta says-galti se chaku lagg gaya... Kala makes dutta sit and as she attends to duttas wound and as he winces in pain tears well up in her eyes...HOW MUcH DUTTA KEPT ON CRAVING FOR KALAS LOVE ...WHILE SHE KEPT ON SHOWERING HATRED...AND KEPT ON BAck stabbing him!... But now that she realised her mistakes...dutta was a changed man! With no memory of his past...kala was all he had...she was his family...and he loved respected her...not knowing what havock that woman caused to his life and loved ones!

Kala still couldnt forget the fateful day when...ARGHH dutta winces in pain and breaks kalas chain of thoughts...she goes on careful not to hurt dutta anymore...After she is done she looks up at him and dutta smiles...seeing his sister he says embracing his face--tayi xeh kya? Tu kyun parerhan ho rahi hai? Tera bhau sher hai...itni si kharonch kahan dukhegi? Main theek hai... Kala manages a slight smile and says--chal ab khana kha ley... The two reach the dining table and sit to have food as kala asks-deshmukh ji ka kaam kara diya na bhau? Dutta replies-ho tayi aadmi bhijwa diye hain poori zameen khali bhi karwa deinge...aur kabza bhi dilwa deingey... Kala watches dutta and thinks...he might have forgotten his past and his family...but the habit to flaunt power and enjoy to rule the world of crime with principles and truthfulness...was in duttas blood...and soo in no time he Becamd A GODFATHER OF ALL TOWNS ARound mumbai AND the legacy OF DUTTA BHAU SPREAD AROUND QUICKLY!

After dinner kala warns dutta t6 nt wait till late and retires to sleep in her room...SLEEP...SELDOM CAME EASY TO KALA ...after all her misdeeds the regret of them didnt let her sleep...and as she lay awake in the bed she knew til she sets her mistakes right she wont find peace...BUT SHE KNEW THERE WAS STILL TIME .BEFORE SHE COULD LET DUTTA FACE HIS PAST...

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Part 7 Kismet Ka Khel

Kala knew there was still time before which dutta could return to patil niwas and face his family and his past...she lies staring into emptiness and all the memories of those dark days came flooding her mind...SHE vividly recalls those days after dutta returned from the hospital escaping the almost fatal accident ...with a wounded body and lost memory...EVEry now and then he used to see hazy figures and flashes from his past...and he would be awakened in the middle of the night...sweating and insomnic! WHENEVER kala saw dutta lyk that she hated herself for being behind this trouble...infact she would feel terrible realising she was the reason behind almost all troubles in duttas life! KALA knew she should have made dutta return to patil wadi but she no...not when dutta was an emotional wreck...this was not the dutta kala had stolen from the patils ...and soo it was not this dutta that she would return to his loved ones!

Kala knew she wont be able to bring back his memory...but she certainly didnt want to send a physicaly damaged and mentally disturbed dutta to patil niwas...GETTING UP kala begins walkng around the room...most of the flashes dutta had were that of the woman whose face he couldnt see clearly... He would wake up startled and as kala was always there by his side he would tell her how that woman ran upto a man and hiding behind him cried for help...how she hugged him and attended to his wounds...how cruely that man behave with her and ofcourse...how always she would address him saab...DUTTA always ended up wondering how he was related to them and kala always felt lyk telling him that it was him and his wife but remained silent...and since kala had told him she was the one who saved his life and hid how signifpicant a part she was of his past...he never bothered to ask her who was that woman who's presence in his dreams felt heart warm..ing...but kala uery. well knew who it was.

kala goes to stand by the window and stares at the dark night...she knew there was only one woman who could help dutta recall everything... There was only one woman in whose company dutta would find happiness and peace...and only her love could heal him completely..."NAKUSHA" kala had long accepted the fact that...nakus love was strong... Unconditional and true...now kala didnt want Dutta To merely accept it when she told him that the woman he saw in flashes from his past was the vital force that had made him learn to love and even changed him as a person...SHE DIDN T Want DUTTA TO SIMPLY LISTEN wHEN SHE WOULD SAY--woh ladki nakusha hai...teri patni jo tere se bahot pyar karti hai...KALA WANTED DUTTA TO REVEAL THIS BEAUTIFUL PART Of HIS LIFE HIMSELF...AND THEN UNDERSTAND how much HE WAS LOVED BY HER! ... Kala walks out of her room and reaches the kitchem...she makes haldi wala milk for dutta and makes her way to duttas room...as she climbs the stairs she thinks to herself-- Kismet ka khel bhi bahot ajeeb hota hai nakusha...EK WAQT THA JAb MAIN TUJHE BHAU KI ZINDAGI SE DURR KAR DENA CHAHTI THI...LEKIN AAJ MUJHE USS DIN KA INTEZAR HAI JAB MAIN TUJHE TERA PYAR LAUTA DOONGI...AUR TAB Teri Madad se bhau apni pehchaan zarur wapas paa lega...JUST as kala reaches outside duttas room she hears him scream--nakusha! Kala stopped stunned...and stood frozen as she WONDERED HOW THAT NAME FOUND DUTTA'S VOICE!

Part 8 When Love Connects

Its a scene in dutta's room...he is busy with some files...his hand had begun to hurt now soo closing everythng he gets up and goes to sit on the rockng chair in his room.. .he stares at the cloudy nght frm the nearby window and then at his wounded hand...too tired to thnk anythng else he leans back a little in the chair and soon falls asleep...THERE IN PN in tashas room u see naku stirs...slowly she opens her eyes and looks around the room...IT WAS EMPTY! The last thng she could recall was dutta embracing her worriedly asking her not to hurt herself anymore...taking in a deep breath and gathering all strength she gets up and moves to the nearby drawer...she feels giddy and holding onto the side table for support...she drops the idea of attending to her hurt hand and walks out to get some fresh air instead...

She finds herself standing at the edge of the staircase and staring at the dimly lit hall of the patil niwas...she recalls how the first tym she came to patil house and dutta sat on the sofa alone in black and listened as she told her name to aayi sahib! A smile crosses nakus face...she vividly recalls how she served dutta food at the dining hall and rushed back to kitchen and dutta had food with others and appreciated it to baabi while naku hid behind the kitchen door and listened! Nakus smile broadens...It WAS IN THE DARKNESS OF THE NIGHT THAT THE LEAVES FROM THE PAST RUSTLED THE MOST...AND MADE NAKU REALISE THAT THE VOID AND Emptiness that dutta had left in her life...in her heart was Huge!

Just as naku steps fwd and is about to step down the stairs she feels dizzy all of a sudden...there in duttas room u see him stir and sweat violently when he wakes up screaming--nakusha!...IN PN naku who is about to faint...loose balance and fall down the staircase...hears dutta calling out her name and holds the sidewall just in time...startled she regains her senses and looks around franctically...but there was no one there!...ALL THESE DAYs she had always felt dutta was around but tonght...as she stood alone in the deadly silence of the nght...trying to figure out what just happened...she felt dutta closer than never before...turning around she rushes back into her room...

Strong wind blows as naku walks upto dutta's portrait...embracing it she recalls how dutta had called up and said------tunnry kaha tha naku...KII MAIN TERE KO AWAAZ DEGA TOH TU AA JAAYEGI...TUJHEY SUNAYI NAHIIN DETAA...MERA DIL KAB SE TERE KO PUKAAR RAHA HI...

Naku doesn't stop the tears streaming down her eyes as she sobs-----deti hai saab...sunayi deti hai...main jaanti hai pichli baar kii tarah...aap...aap mere ko yaad kar rahey ho...
Naku rushes to the phone at the side table and clinging onto the photoframe having dutta's pic kept there...and thinking like last time dutta would call again...SHE WAITS...

And few heart beats later...the phone rings...

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Part 9 Remember Me

"NAKUSHAAA" dutta wakes up with a start and stares at the empty room around! He could feel beads of perspiration streaming down his forehead as he could still hear his scream ring in his ears--NAKUSHA...dutta takes in a deep breath trying to catch on his senses...all of a sudden his mind had given him a name and somehow dutta felt a feeling of calmness as the name still repeated in his brain...the phone rings and dutta goes to pick it up and says an instant later--woh aise nahin maanega...tu ruk main baat karega uss saaley se! Dutta bangs down the phone and fiddling with the gun he picks it up in his hand from the sidetable and taking the phone in a hurry dials two digits wrong in the actual number and the PHONE RINGS IN PN...IN tasha's room! ( I knw kaafi dramatic and chance se aisa hoga lol but when it comes to dutta and naku...kuch bhi ho sakta hai ;) sahi kaha na? )

Naku feels her heart beat stop as the silence of room is broken by the ringing phone...tears flow down naku's eyes and with trembling hands she picks up the phone...SILENCE...AN INSTANT LATER Just as dutta is about to speak naku sobs--SAAB?!...DUTTA feels the ground under his feet give way.. .of all the voices...hearing this one he could never mistake it! It was the same girl's voice from the flashes he used to have and ofcourse the word Saab!...dutta remains silent as naku sobs--saab...main...main aapki nakusha!...baat nahin karogex mere se?...Dutta tightens the grip on his gun as... he felt dizzy... suddenly...he hears the door of his room flung open and in a confusion a disoriented dutta slams down the reciever again and finds himself staring blankly at a worried kala standing at the doorway...

Kala had heard dutta scream out naku's name and stunned she stood outside the door and then gathering her senses...she walks into the room and finds dutta standing with a gun in his hand...he was sweating and looked dazed and disturbed...and as kala saw him like that...all the memories of that dreadful night came back to kala's mind ...THAT NIght...it was almost a week since dutta had returned from the hospital...and with each passing day his condition was worsening...sleepless nights and nightmarish days with all sorts of unknown dreams were troubling him terribly...

And that night kala was finding it hard to sleep and soo she was sitting alone in the hall when she heard noises from dutta's room...kala had rushed in and found dutta in todd phod mode...he had broken almost everythng and anythng that came his way ...and as kala entered the room she froze as she saw dutta stand with a gun pointed to his forehead! His eys were closed and kala could see he was tired...worn out and desperate to get rid of himself by ending his unknown life!...a stunned kala had rushed upto him just in time and moved his hand...for the first time that day KALA WAS SCARED FOR HIS WELLbeing...AND FOR THE FIRST TIME SHE SLAPPED HIM TOO!

Once again as kala entered in listening to dutta scream out nakus name she saw him looking distressed and with a gun in his hand...kala drops the glass in her hand and rushes upto dutta and snatches away the gun shouting at him--yeh kya kar raha hai?...PAGAL HO GAYA HAI BHAU?!...(dutta remainr silent and dazed as kala makes him face her and says on) dekh...dekh meri taraf...tu...tu jaanta hai na ki mere liye tu...(kala sobs) tujhe kuch ho gaya toh main...main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahin kar paaongi...

Dutta embraces kala's face and says-tayi...main theek hai...aur main jaanta hai ki main tere liye kya hai...tu...tu ro matt main khud ko chot nahin pahoncha raha tha...KALA LOOKS AT DUTTA as he wipes away her tears...and as she watches him she wondered howcome in all these years her hatred for him didnt let her appreciate and enjoy the care and tenderness he always bestowed upon her!...NExt U see dutta kneels by kala's side as she slept on the couch in his room as she feared leavng him alone...slowly after making sure that kala was asleep dutta gets up and goes to stand by the window...he stares at the moonlit night...there in patil niwas naku too stood by the window gazing at the moon...dutta takes in a deep breath and says--NAKUSHA...THERE NAKu enjoys the strong wind blowing through her hair and softly says--SAAB...the screen splits and u see dutta on one side...feeling the warmth of taking this newly found name from his past...and a sense of belongingness dawns onto him...and naku on the other feeling calm as her hope of finding dutta reached a new dimension.

The screen merges to focus on naku as u hear dutta's voice say in the background from his naku's side--~~ASHKON MEIN JAISE DHUL GAYE SAB MUSKURATEY RANG...RASTEY MEIN THAK KE SO GAYI MASOOM SII UMANG...DIL HAI KI PHIR BHI KHWAB SAJANEY KA SHAUK HAI...PATTHAR PAR BHI gulaab uganey ka shauk hai...BARSON SE YUN TOH EK AMAVAS KI RAAT HAI...ABB ISKO HONSla Kahun ki ZIDD KI BAAT HAI...DIL KEHTA HAI KI ANDHEREY MEIN BHI ROSHINI TOH HAI...MAANA KI RAAKH ho gaye umeed ke lau...ISS RAAKH MEIN BHI AAg kahin dabii toh hai!..

.hope u all liked...

Part 10 Waits Do End

Naku stands staring at the moon she says softly--MERA CHAAND...DUTTA SAHIB...she feels someone touch her shoulder and turning around she finds dutta looking at her...tears well up in her eyes as dutta takes her to the bed and making her sit attends to her wounded wrist...he does it gently lest she might get more hurt...and naku just watches him...dutta looks up at her and sees a tear roll down her cheek...he remains silent and makes her lie down with her head on her lap...she takes his hands in hers and as she drifts into sleep...she mumbles--MAIN AAPKO KAHIN NAHIN JAANEY DEGI SAAB...kahin nahin...aa jao na saab...laut aao na ...apni nakusha ke paas...DUTTA embraces nakus forehead lovingly and says--aaonga naku...bahot jald main wapas aaonga...aur iss baar...humeshaa ke liye. ...he bends his face and kisses nakus forehead and her lips curl up into a smile...

There in mumbai u see dutta stands wide awake...still gazing at the moonlit night...he felt odd...to his unknown existence another name had been added...But...to his own surprise...HE DIDNT FEEL AN URGE TO find out how was he related to the name...INFACT IT FELT LIKE IT WAS WITH HIM ALL THIS WHILE...and as he stood awake late in the nght...his inner self seemed to be calmed...AND IT FELT LIKE HE MUST NOT SLEEP AS HE HAD SOMEONE TO WATCHOVER!...and there in patil niwas u see naku sleepng all alone with a smile on her beautiful face...THE SCREEN BLACKS OUT.

NEXT MORNinG...dutta is busy talking to someone on the phone when kala walks in...she sits on the dining table waiting for him to join in for breakfast and wondering how was he coping up with this new discovery frm his past...her thoughts are interrupted when she hears him shout--AYE GAIKWAAD...BAHOT SHAANA MATT BANN...NAHIN TOH APUN WAHIN PATIL WADI MEIN AAKAR TERE KO TERE bill se nikalega! Kab tak chipega tu dutta ki nazron se?!...KALA Wasnt listening anymore...patil wadi?! ALL THIS TIME THIS NAME HAD NEVER COME UP...BUT YESTERDAY NAKUSHA...AND TODAY PATIL WADI?!...KALA WONDERED IF IT WAS TIME FOR DUTTA TO RETURN?...she looks at dutta as he walked upto her smiling...after disconnectng the phone...

Kala smiles too as dutta sits for breakfast and thinks to herself-- Abb waqt aa gaya hai bhau...ki tu apne apnon ke paas laut jaye...teri iss muskurahatt...tujhpar jiska hak hai unhein saumpney ka waqt aa gaya hai bhau...AUR JO LADKI TERE LIYE DUNIYA SE LADII...HAR GHAM Ko sehtii rahi...uska intezar khatam karne ka waqt aa gaya hai...DUTT says--tayi...kya soch rahi hai...

Kala had made her decision and she says-- bhau...jo gaikwad ne jo kiya hai woh maafi ke kaabil nahin...main chahti hoon ki tu khud ja patil wadi aur Puraaney hisaab chuka aa...DUTTa Reamains silent for a while and says--theek hai tayi...jaisa tu kahey...main aaj shaam ko hii nikal jayega Patil Wadi ke liye...KALA NODS HER HEAD AND SMILEs to herself as she knew very Soon MANY WAITS WERE GOING TO COME TO AN END...

Its late in the evening...naku is ready to leave for airport to go to recieve madhu...she gets into the car and after some distance the car comes to a halt...naku asks the driver as to what happened and he gets out...checks the car and tells that the car had broken down...naku gets down when her phone rings...it was nana sahib...he asks--nakusha ...woh aaj zameen dekhne chalna zaruri hai...tu bhi chal? ...NAKU TELLS him how she was stuck...and nana saheb asks her to wait and that he would come there...naku says a yes and the driver leaves to get help...all of a sudden strong wind blows and u see dutta drive in from the far end of the same road where naku stood all alone...

hope u all lyked...😳

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Part11 Hum Tumse Ik Bar Mil Na Sake

Naku stands waiting for nana saheb to come...she just wanted to reach the airport in time afterall madhu was coming...overcoming all old bitterness and with time Dutta had finally accepted her as his sister and like he had last asked her to madhu visited patil niwas in her holiday...AND ALWAXS SHE LEFT WITH A HEAVY HEART AND TEARY EYED...AS SHE MISSED THE MAN HIMSELF...THANKS TO WHOM SHE GOT A LOVNG FAMILY and a caring mother she always craved to have! NAKU HEARS A HORN BLOW BUT LOST IN HER thoughts she doesnt move aside and walks in the centre of the road...she recalls how she and dutta had walked along the same road when they came out of the jungle alive thanks to jagtaap dada...tears well up in nakus eyes as she feels sad at how all her dreams and her life had come to fall apart...ever since dutta left!...

U see dutta approachng naku and seeing her not listening to his blowing horn he gets all the more irritated and frowning he speeds up the car while naku just walked...tired and heartbroken u see her think to herself--DIL SUNTAA HAI TERI SADAA...AA RUBARU AB Toh zaraa...bechain sii meri zindagi...SUNNKAR TERI KHAMOSHIYAN...JEENA MERA...AASAN KAR...TU MILKE YE EHSAAN KAR...KAHIN KHO GAYA CHAINON SUKUN ...TERE NA HONNEY KE DARD KO AB JAANKAR...

Naku sighs...and tears stream down her face and her thoughts are broken when she hears a familiar voice shout at her--ANDHI HO YA SUNAYI NAHIN DETA!...naku looks to her side just in time to get a glimpse of dutta as the car sped past her...JUST ONE GLIMPSE AND A WORD OR TWO WERE ENOUGH FOR HER TO KNW IT WAs him!...without thnkng twice naku begins to rum after the car calling out tn him--SAAB...SAAB...but dutta who was driving at full speed was far ahead of her...with the sum shining bright above her hf naku went on to sprint when she tumbles over a stone and falling she hits the ground! Her elbow gets hurt as she sobs findin the road empty ahead! NO...THIS CANT BE HAPPENING WITH ME...naku thought bitterly...

Wreching sobs make it impossible for naku to think anything and she just keeps staring at the empty road when a car comes to a halt nearby...nana saheb gets out of the car and is walking towards naku when he sees her go down on the ground and the next instant he hears her scream out in pain-SAABBB!...NAnasaheb quickens his fnotsteps and reaches her side ...he bends down by her side and tries to console her and asks what happened...but naku doesnt talk...she keeps on weeping and seeing her miserable nanasaheb makes her stand up to take her back home and ask her what happened but just as he makes her get up naku slumps back unconscious and startled nanasaheb catches hold of her in time and picking her up puts her in the car and drives away to take her to the hospital...

Its a scene at an old outhouse and u see dutta bring the jeep to a halt he gets out and loads the gun in full dsp style...inside u see a man stands alone talkng on the phone saying-aap chinta matt karo ...dutta aap tak kabhi nahin pahonch payega...yahan se zinda niklega toh aayega na aap tak...someone knocks hard at the man's head and wincing in pain he falls to the ground and u see dutta stand there with a satisfied expression on his face as he picks up the goon's phone and says-KAB TAK BHAGEGA APNI MAUT Se gaikwad? Tere paltu kuttey iss sher ko tera shikar karney se nahin rok sakeinge..ab tu bas apni ulti ginti shuru kar dey!...Scared the man disconnects duttas phone and a slight smile crosses duttas face as he turns around to find a dozen of goons...ready to charge at him!...ITS A SCENE IN THE HOSPITAL...everyone is gathered outside the room and the doc walks out when nanasaheb asks him as to what happened and the doc announces with a grim expression that out of trauma naku had lost her voice! Everyone look on in shock as aayisahib cries and madhu and roops try to console her...all wondered when would fate end nakus misery and suffering!...

Part 12 Ik Mulakat Zaroori Hai Sanam

Its late in the nght...Naku lay fast asleep in the hospital room...u see her having flashbacks of seeing dutta and how he shouted at her...naku wakes up with a start...beads of perspiration streamed down her forehead as she looked around and found no one there. ..she was thirsty and seeing baji stand outside the room talking with roops...naku tries to call out to him! But NO! Naku heard no voice! It seemed she was talking to herself! NAKU gets up on her arms and TRIES TO SPEAK AGAIN BUT IN VAIN...she fell back on the pillow...tears rolled down the sides of her eyes...as she realised that she had lost her voice!...baji and roops who had come inside had reen naku fall back in bed crying and the UNDERSTOOD SHE KNEW! Roops walks to naku and embracing her forhead she says--bhabhi aap chinta matt karo...aap zaroor theek ho jaogey...NAKU SMILES NODDINg her head...and after a while when baji left to drop roops back at patil niwas on naku's insistence...NAKU LAy ALL ALONE...STARING AT THE dark night from the nearby window...

Naku lies alone staring into the dark sky visible frm a nearby window...tired she feels her eyes heavy and closes them...lost her voice...and left challenging her sanity after seeing dutta...naku felt her heart ache more than ever before! And as she remembered vividly all the moments spent with dutta the song Janiya plays from the movie haunted...TUJHE PAA LIYA YA Kho diya...ISS BAAT PAR DIL RO DIYA...TUJHE RAKH LIXA INN XADON NE...IK PHOOL SA KITABON MEIN...ISS DIL MEIN TU RAHEgA sadaa aur mehekega inn saanson mein...raaton mein tu jal jaata hai...CHEHRE MEIN TU Dhal jaata hai...taara hai tu mujhmein toota saa...neendo se jagaa deta hai...PALKON KO BHIgo Deta hai...DARIYA HAI TU MUJHMEIN DOOBA SAA...HAR WAQT KHWABON KI TARAH TU AATA RAHA JANIYA...JANIYA O JANIYa...DIN KYA RAAT KXA AAHAT HO KOI TOH LAGTA HAI SADAA...KI TU HAI WAHAN JANIYA...

The song ends and Soon naku falls asleep...wishing lyk always That she wouldnt have to live another day without dutta...its almost midnght and the guards outside naku's room had gone to have some tea and baji had yet not returned...the hospital staff was gone too except for a nurse who was busy sleeping in her room...a black sedan comes to a halt outride the hospital and u see dutta gets out...holding his shoulder and a gun in his hurt hand he opens the back door and throws out a man all beaten and bruised...he glares hard at him and says--CHAHOON TOH YAHIN TERI KABAR KHOD sAKta hoon Gaikwad...par nahin...TUJH JAISE DHOKEybaaz KO ZINDA CHOD RAHA HOON ...TAAKI MERA DIYA HAR ZAKHM TERE KO YAAD dilaata rahey ki tunney kitni badii galti kii hai...the man falls unconscious...and dutta turns to sit back in the car when he feels dizzy...he stares at his bleeding arm and realises the Knife wound which he had sustained while fighting all the gundas was quite deep and he had lost quite blood too ..dutta tries to gather all strength and decides to go into the hospital and attend to his wound first and then set back for mumbai...and after he is gone in u see the other man take out his phone and say--woh...woh bach gaya aur andar haspataal mein hai...the phone falls from his hand and he falls back unconscious knowing In NO TIME MORE OF HIS MEN WOULD COME...SAVE HIM AND CAPTURE AN INJURED DUTTA EASILY!...

Inside dutta walks along the dimly lit passage of the hospital...he was beggining to feel the pain all over his body...and staggering in between he kept on moving ahead hoping to find some place where he could find the right things to look after his injuries...JUST AS HE reaches outside nakus room...he..STOPS...HE COULD HEAR FOOTSTEPS BEHIND HIM...THEY WERE QUICK...HURRIED FOOTSTEPS...AND DUTTA WAS LONG ENOUGH IN THE buisiness to understand what was going to happen next! IN A REFLEX HE OPENS THE DOor behind him and entering the room he closed the door behind him...ONCE INSIDE HE LOOKS AROUND THE ROOM AND FINDS his gaze fixed at NAKU LYing in the bed...

The flute music plays in background as dutta reaches naku's bedside and found himself staring at her beautiful face and lost in her child like innocence as she slept like an angel...he found it even hard to take his eyes off him...he notices a window behind her bed and bending over her headside he tries to reach the window ...and wincing in pain he moves aside the curtains to look outside with his injured arm...SOME OF HIS BLOOD DROPS ON HER FOREHEAD AND SMUDGES ACROSS IT...while dutta looks out to find a dozen of jeeps and he clenches his jaw in anger...as he drew back the curtains...he steps back to see if he had woken up the girl but what he saw left him stunned...THERE WAS HIS BLOOD FILLiNG UP THAT GIRL'S MAANG...AND TO HIS OWN SURPRISE...DUTTA WASN'T CURSING HIMSELE...HE FELT WHAT HAPPENED WAS RIGHT AND THAT THE GIRL BELONGED TO HIM!...

Part 13 Dil Ka Rishta

Dutta stood gazing at naku as she slept like an angel...he wondered why he felt like he knew her...and as he stared at the blood filling her maang...horrified he realised something!... turning his head around and finds drops of his blood spread all across the floor...upto the door from where he had entered! A wave of giddinesr hits him as he realised unkowingly HE HAD LEFT A TRAIL BEHIND FOR HIS FOES! Shocked dutta turns back to naku and THE THOUGHT OE PUTTING THAT INNOCENT AND ILL GIRL'S LIFE IN DANGER...made him feel terrible...frantic he looks around the room...he knew he couldnt leave her alone in that room with his blood around to trace and run away...RUNNING AWAY WAS SOMETHING DUTTA HAD NEVER DONE AND WOULD NOT DO TODAY TOO...he takes in a deep breath and gathers whatever strength he was left with...and decides to fight and finish them all!...

Dutta bends over a little and taps on naku's face...she stirs a little and dutta looks at her expectantly...he wanted her to wake up quickly soo that he could hide her in a safe place...he knew time was running out...he taps on her cheek twice...this time he could see her eyes move...he felt relieved as rlowly naku opened her exes and could see someone stand by her side through blurred vision...BLINKING TWICE SHE COULD FIND HERSELF LOOK INTO THOSE EYES...WHERE SHE ALWAYS FOUND COMFORT AND LOVE...A HEARBEAT LATER SHE REALISED IT WAS DU Tta looking at her worriedly...

Tears stream down naku's face as she felt helpless to even call out to him like she always did "saab" and tell him how much she missed him...naku was still groggy thanks to the sedatives...she could see dutta indicate her to get out of the bed but didnt understand why?...she could feel dutta help her stand to her feet but didnt get what was in his mind...infact naku was finding hard to believe it was him...she still felt like it was another dream...but in her dreams dutta always embraced her lovingly but this time round HE HAD NOT EVEN ACKNOWLEGED HER PRESENCE!...Naku could hear dutta say something but she was too disoriented to understand his commands...meanwhile dutta who was asking naku to go hide in the side room...sees she was too dumbfounded to move...why he didnt knw...and that time he didnt want to know it too...

Irritated and confused by naku's behaviour Dutta holds her by her arm and begins to make her walk upto the side room next to the door and as naku stares at dutta's hand holding hers and feels calmed at his touch...she realises...IT WAS NO DREAM!...AND AS THE TWO WALK ACROSS THE ROOM...U SEE NAKU VIVIDLY rECalls how he had held her arm and take her to that lake and told abt his painful past with seema...and how when supriya ditched him...blaming naku for it he held her arm and dragged her to the mandap and married her...and the same nght he again dragged her to his room holding her arm! TONIGHT TOO DU TTA HELD HER BY HER ARM LEADING THE WAY...AND NAKU WALKED...After him...no questions...no reasoning...SILENT...she followed the path he showed like she always did!...

Just as dutta is about to push naku into the room the door opens and two men open fire inside while a stunned naku hid behind dutta as the two stood behind the open door!...after a while the two stopped firing as they had run out of bullets and...clenching his jaw in anger dutta comes out from behind the door...glares at them and in one fluid motion breaks their neck and they slump to the ground dead...dutta turns around to find naku stand a few steps away from him...there was shock in her expression and she looked paler than before...and dutta felt bad to put her through all this...

Part 14 Ek Ajnabee

Naku stood staring at the dead goons when she hears dutta almost yell at her before he closed the door- -ANDAR HII REHNA...JAB TAK MAIN NAHIN AATA...baahar matt aana...THE door closes and naku realising dutta must be out alone fighting the rest of them...rushes to open the door...only to find it closed! Worried she leans against the wall and closes her eyes...TRYING TO MAKE SENSE OF THE THINGS HAPPENING AROUND HER!...NAKU KNEW HER LOVE ...HER DUTTA...WAS A CRIME LORD WITH A HEART OF gold and bloodshed had become a way of life for him!...ONCE AGAIN...MEETING HIM IN A SIMILAR SITUATion...where naku had often found herself...being with him...SHE REALISED IT WAS ALL REAL FOR SURE!...WHAT SHE didnt understand was why didnt she saw the love she... last saw in his eyes ...the night before they went to temple and lost him!...why did he seem to be different...why wasnt he acknowledging her...naku wished all her fears were wrong...

Naku opens her eyes and notices her reflection in the mirror...her heart stops beating as she walks upto the mirror to take a closer look at herself...she stares at the redness in her maang and then at the blood spread all across...she recalls dutta wincing in pain as he had closed the door...and as she realises it must be injured dutta's blood...a smile crosses her face...and a sense of relief calms her...NAKU KNEW FOR SURE THAT IT MUST BE HER DUTTA SAAB!...just then a series of gunshots are heard outside...colour drains off naku's face as a wave of nausea hits her...thinking dutta might be hurt!...she rushes to the door and begins to bang on it hard ...desperate to get out and make sure dutta was fine...

Outside dutta is busy fighting all the goons...inspite of all the pain he keeps on beating them hard...when he hears one of them call out to him--iss ladki ki jaan pyari hai toh ruk jaa...(lol this gunda has no idea ki dutta ko iss ladki ki jaan kitni pyari lol)...dutta turns around and seeing him hold naku at gunpoint...makes him dead angry...he leaves the man he was beating and walks upto the gunda who held naku hostage... The goon laughs with his fellow men about how true a lover dutta was...and doesn't realise when dutta reached him and kicking him hard he frees naku...making her stand behind himself...he snatches...the gun and as a horrified naku watches on...dutta guns down all of them in one go!...

Turning around dutta glares hard at naku almost wanting to kill her...he shouts--PAGAL HO KYA?...MANAA KIYA THA NA?!...MANA KIYA THA BAAHAR AANEY KE LIYE TOH KYUN AAYI!...the goon had heard naku bang at the door and decided to hold her...naku remains silent and dutta notices tears well up in her eyes...and he finds all of his anger melt away as he says softly--APNI GALTI KI WAJAH SE TERE KO KUCH HO JAATA TOH MAIN...MAIN APNE AAp ko kaise maaf karta?...naku still doesnt speak...seeing her quiet dutta asks her---kya hua chup kyun hai...theek toh hai?...naam kya hai tera?...NAKU FEELS THE GROUND Under her feet give way...as she feels dutta's last words bore her heart like a dagger"NAAM KXA HAI TERA"...AND THE REALISATION TORE HER APART!...DUTTA DIDN'T REMEMBER HER...AND WHAT SEEMED MOST LIKELY...HE HAD LOST HIS MEMORY!...AND NAKU COULD FEEL WARM TEARS ROLL DOWN HER COLD CHEEKS AS SHE FELT HELPLESS THAT SHE HAD NO VOICE TO TALK TO HIM TOO...

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Edited by Ashima_Mishal - 14 years ago