AR.Main Hoon Na |Part9 - Updated| 6/10

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Medha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Hey! That was an awesome part! OMG! Riddhima is a courtesan? I really wasn't expecting her to be that, but oh well. The way you've written the part is just awesome! I wonder what will happen now. Please update soon and thanks for the PM.

-Medzi-

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Syed Shuridh Rahman Khan Mijan/Shuridh.

@mijanur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

excelent part.finally ar met.thats good.pleas update soon.thanks for pm.

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S.B.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

LOVELY PART..😊

Edited by zigzagway - 14 years ago

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Shivani Dhawan

@shivi17

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

awesome part, but can pls request something.. pls don't make it a sad ending like devdas... i loved the movie but becos of the ending i never desire to watch it again.. i really love this fanfic but pls don't make it like devdas...

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jasmine ansari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Very nice part buddy.
Thanx 4 d pm.

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Usha

@alaipayuthey

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

awesome part...

i really like the way this story is going but i too didn't expect riddhima to be a courtesan...

continue soon!

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aLicious

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Part 3

Its four in the morning when the guys came to Riddhima's house to come pick up the girls.They decided to rent a van so they all can be comfortable during the trip.Riddhima sits on the passenger next to Armaan because she started whining when Rahul sat. Rahul was too sleepy to be annoyed so he moved to the back.Armaan shakes his head at his crazy girlfriend and starts driving.The beach is about six hours away so they'll reach their by ten.Which is good cause they'll be able to rest and enjoy their day and the rest of their trip.The whole way Armaan drove because Atul and Rahul weren't awake."We're here!" Armaan yells and blasts the music in the car, jerking everyone awake."Abbe, awaaz kam kar!" Rahul yells and leans forward to turn down the volume."Hotel aa gaya!" Armaan yells."Tum chila kyun rahe ho!" Muskaan yells."Kyun ke saare raste maine gadi chalayi aur yeh kameene uthe nai," Armaan said, referring to Atul and Rahul."Kya kaha tha tum dono ne ke don't worry Armaan hum uth jayege phir hum drive karle ge," Armaan mocks them.Atul and Rahul look down guiltily."Guys, andar chalte hai na," Anjali said.Armaan looks at Riddhima and sees her still asleep."Yeh abhi tak so rahi hai?" Armaan said, surprised she is still slept through the loud music and their yelling."Isko uthana bohut mushkil hai," Anjali said, laughing."Tum sab andar jao main mahrani ko leke aata hoon," Armaan said.All of them got out of the car except for Armaan and Riddhima.Once Armaan saw all of them inside, he leans over and kisses Riddhima on her lips hard.Riddhima wakes up and looks around with pout on her lips and her hair messed up with her eye squinted because of the bright sun.She turns her head and sees Armaan looking at her with his charming smile.Riddhima leans her head back with smile on her face."Chalo,hotel aa gaya," Armaan said, unbuckling his seat belt.Riddhima groans and closes her eyes."Maine nai uthna," Riddhima said, whining."Riddhima, kamre main jaa ke araam kar lena.Aur waise bhi tum aur main ek kamre main hai," Armaan whispers the last part in her ear.Riddhima smiles and kisses Armaan's lips."Really?" Riddhima said in excitement and Armaan chuckles and nods."Really." Riddhima jumps out of the car and holds Armaan's hand as they walk in the hotel.

Armaan and Riddhima are in one room, Atul and Rahul in another, and Muskaan and Anjali in another.

Riddhima stands out on the balcony and looks at the ocean that could be seen from their room.She feels Armaan's arms wrap around her waist and his hot breath on her neck.Riddhima's breathing increasing as she shivers.Armaan feels her shiver in his hold and smirks.Armaan's hands soon, creep up her shirt and caresses her stomach.Riddhima feels her knees weak and starts to fall but Armaan held her tighter to himself."Armaan, main gir jaogi," Riddhima whispers."Main aisa hone nai doga," Armaan whispers back and picks up Riddhima.He lays her down on the bed then gets on top of her.Riddhima giggles as Armaan lightly tickles her.Armaan smiles hearing Riddhima giggle.He leans down and kisses her lips and breaths, taking in her fragrance. Armaan sits on his knees and pulls his T-shirt over his head then lays back down on Riddhima.Riddhima feels his bare torso against her body makes Riddhima shiver and turn her head away. Armaan turns her head back towards him and kisses her lips. Riddhima kisses him back and bites his lip.This arouses Armaan more so he kisses her harder making Riddhima part her lips. Armaan, happily enters her mouth and presses his body on Riddhima when the ring of Armaan's phone broke them away. Armaan looks at his phone and sees whose calling so he cuts it. "Who was it?" Riddhima asks with her eyes closed as Armaan kisses her neck."No one that you should care," Armaan replies and continues to kiss her.Riddhima feels Armaan's teeth take her skin in between his teeth.Riddhima hisses and turns her head further away from him, trying to get his teeth to stop biting her. Armaan sucks and licks the place where he bit Riddhima on her neck.Riddhima's mind came to the phone call that Armaan had. He didn't answer it and she shouldn't care but it made Riddhima care.Armaan felt her not responding to his touch so he pulls back and looks at her face."Riddhima, tum theek ho?" he asks with his hand on her cheek.Riddhima looks at him,"Kisne tumhe phone kiya tha?" Armaan sighs,"Riddhima, koi bhi nai tha.Tum khama kha aise hi behave kar rahi ho." Riddhima pushes him off. "Agar koi nai tha toh kyun nai baata the ke kaun tha phone par kya THI," Riddhima said.Armaan couldn't believe Riddhima is accusing for cheating on her."Tumhe lagta hai ke mera chakar kisi aur ke saath chal raha hai?" Armaan asks, angry."Haan," Riddhima says and stands up fixing her clothes."How can you think that?Agar mere saath kisi aur ka chakar chal raha hota toh phir main iss trip pe kabhi nai aata," Armaan said."Shayad woh ladki yehi ho," Riddhima yells.Armaan shakes his head at Riddhima and walks in the bathroom.Riddhima sighs and sits on the bed.He just left without saying anything so that did mean he is cheating on her.Riddhima hears Armaan's phone ring,"Hello." "Hi, main office se bol raha hoon aur mujhe Armaan sir se baat karni hai.Maine abhi thodi daer pehle bhi phone kiya tha lekin cut gaya tha" said a male's voice.Riddhima couldn't believe she blamed Armaan for cheating on her.She is such a fool."Woh abhi yahan par nai hain," Riddhima said, trying to control her tears and hangs up.Armaan walks out and Riddhima looks up at him. "Armaan, I'm sorry," Riddhima says, standing up.Armaan doesn't say anything and walks out of the room."Armaan!" Riddhima runs after him and grabs his arm."I'm sorry, please mujhe maaf kardo," Riddhima begs."Abhi mera mood nai hai tumse baat karna ka," Armaan says.Riddhima just watches him walk away.Riddhima felt like an idiot.She blamed the person who loves her the most and who she loves the most as a cheater. Riddhima knocks or actually bangs on Anjali and Muskaan's door. Once the door opened, Riddhima pushes Muskaan in because she opened the door and walks in herself and slams the door shut.

"I can't believe tumne usse accuse kiya," Anjali said, shocked. Riddhima rolls her eyes."I know maine bohut badi galti ki hai aur yeh tum paanch baar bol chuki ho.Kuch aur bolo jisse mere madat kare Armaan ko patane ki," Riddhima said."Lekin Riddhima you shouldn't have done that in the first place," Muskaan said."I know!" Riddhima said.Riddhima walks over to their balcony and looks down at the beach.She sees Armaan, Atul, and Rahul with girls and standing really close to them."Armaan!" Riddhima yells. Armaan looks up and sees Riddhima looking a them.Armaan looks at the girl and walks away with her with his arm around her. By that time Anjali and Muskaan had come and saw everything. "Dekh woh Rahul kaise uss ladki ke saath chipak raha hai," Muskaan said in anger.Riddhima and Anjali look at Muskaan. "Kya?" Muskaan said.Riddhima and Anjali shake their heads. "Agar woh ladkiyon ke saath flirt kar sakte hain toh hum bhi ladko ke saath flirt kar sakte hain," Muskaan says."Nai main kisi ladke se baat nai karogi aur flirt karne ke chakar main ladke mujhe haath lagaye ge aur sirf Armaan ka haq hai mujhe chu ne ka," Riddhima said."Awww," Anjali and Muskaan tease.Riddhima looks at them.

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Part three updated.If you need to edit your comments you can.

Edited by aLicious - 14 years ago

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Niharika

@Altaira

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

nice start ...plz do pm me ..:)

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Medha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Hey! That was an awesome part! I just love Armaan and Riddhima's dialogues. They're just awesome! I wonder if Armaan will ever be able to fall out of love he has for Paro. Can't wait for the next part. Please update soon and thanks for the PM.

-Medzi-