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savie_

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Posted: 14 years ago

gyz ..!! dis is shivika ..and dis is my first one shot plz..do comment..

hey dis is shivika ..plz..plz..do comment dis is my 1st one shot...

plz..plz...

maan is in the hall..where he practices his tai-chi...

he thinks of a prank wid geet...[loving prank...]

he hidess his towel somewhere around ...

location changed...

geet was sitting in the hall wid dadima and aniie....

(delete maan from dis pic ..and imagine..)

having girly talks...and she was having her tea...
location changed...
maan practicing his tai-chi...full of sweat...

he shouts geet...zara suno toh...
geet was busy in hall...unable to listen his voice...
jst den nakul comes and says - maan babu kuch chahiye tha apko..??
maan - geet mamesahb kahan hai..
nakul - ji voh toh dadima aur annie baby ke saath hall me bethi hai...
maan - accha jao aur unhe bolo ki maine unhe bulaya hai...
nakul - ji sahb ... and he leaves..
location changed...
nakul reaches to the main hall...
nakul - ji geet mamesahb ... maan babu apko bula rhe hai...
geet - thik hai...geet thinks maan ko kya kaam tha ..ki voh khud nhi aa sakte...
geet - dadima mai abhi aati hun...
dadima - ji beta...
geet carries her cup wid her
location changed..geet reaches to maan

maan was standing dere only..thinking how to bring geet close...
jst den he hears her footstep...geet enters
geet - kya hua maan ..?? kuch kaam tha kya ??
maan - han voh geet...mai na apna towel andar hi bhul gaya plz..lado...
geet - toh apne mujhe isliye neeche se uppar bulaya ...maan voh toh aap khud bhi la sakte the na..ya nakul ko bhej sakte the...
maan - han ...han...geet voh... [geet thinks inhe kab se problem ho gaye apne baat kehne mai ]
mai pehle gaya tha...maine pura room check kiya ..par mujhe nhi mila...ab mujhe nhi mil rha hai toh nakul ko kaise milega...toh maine isliye tummhe bulaya...jaldi jao lekar aao...mujhe chahiye...
geeet - ji..
[geet keeps the cup of tea dere only...and leaves]
maan smiles...
maan was roaming dere only...his eyes catch the cup...and den he remembers dat geet was drinking it...he again smiles...
he takes the cup...and stares it...
den takes a sip of tea...
maan - not bad...
jst den geet enters...and sees maan drinking tea..
geet comes closer to him ...maan doesnt notice dat she is here..
geet keeps her hand on his shoulders...and says-maan apko kab se chai pasand aane lagi...
maan - tum mera towel leaye...do mujhe..
maan keeps the cup back ... and takes ,towel and den wipes himself...
geet picks the cup and sees dat it is empty...
geet murmers...inhe kab se chaye pasand aane lagi...inhone toh aaj tak chahye kab tak pee he nhi...fir aaj..puri khatam kardi...
maan listens wat she was murmering...
he takes his towel...and pulls geet wid the help of towel...
now geet's back was sticked to maan's bare chest...
mujhe chaye tabse pasand aane lagi jab se maine usse tumahe hont chuthe hue dekha...
[he softly rubs his fingers to her lips...]
he holds her through her waist ...and takes the cup from her hand and keeeps it dere on the table...
he moves her hair..and make dem rest on one side of her neckkk...
den slowly moves forward...his breath starts falling on her neck...and while feeeling his breath geet starts hyperventilating...

geet keeps her hand on maan's hand dat were dere on her waist ...
maan comes close to her ears...and kisses dere...
geet - maan plz..mujhe jaane dijiye...[geet tries to remove his hands from her waist..but his grip tightens..]
maan softly bites her ears...
geet moans maan...koi aa jayega...
maan doesnt listens to her...
maan kisses her back ...softly...
geet - plz ..maan mujhe jaane dijiye...dadima mujhe bula rhi thi...
maan in a twist makes her turn...very fast but softly...so dat she doesnt get hurts...
geeet looks up in maan's eyes..jisme shararat ke alava kuch aur nhi thi...

geet hands were on maan's chest ...and maan 's hands were on geet's waist...he slowly tightens her hands to bring her more closer and to vanish the distance between dem...
both of dem staring each other...
maan moves his head forward...and rests his head on geet's forehead...

maan's grip around geet starts loosening...
geet suddenly runs...but maan holds her hand ...

and pulls her and sets her in a corner...pins her hands on the wall...
maan - ab kahan jaogi ...
geet - maan samajhne ke koshish kijiye ... koi aa jayega ... dadima mera intazar kar rhi hongi ...
maan - tumhe dadima ke intazar ki fikar ... aur mera kya ??
geet bends her face ... - voh...voh...
maan brings his face close to her face...his breath falls on her face...
on resisting dis or feeling it...geet uppers her face...and both of deir eyes meet...
as near as maan's face comes to geet she starts closing her eyes...
maan 's loosens geet's hands...and passing through shoulders...touching her back...
his hands move to her waist...
and geet's hand on maan's chest...
deir faces more near...more ...more...more...

and finally a small lip kiss...
maan removes his lips ...
her cheeks turning in pink in blush...
maan stares geet and den geet opens her eyes ..finds maan staring her..
she gets lost in dose sweet , shararat se bhari eyes ...
both staring ech other (( MAHI... going on in back ground ))
maan - toh geet tume yeh choti si kiss acchi lagi na ...
geet- han ... (( geet was so lost in maan's eyes dat she herself was not aware of wat she was saying ..although it was true..))
after some time she realizes wat she said..
nahi voh......geet lowers her head of wat she said
maan has a wining smile on his face
he places his index finger on her chin and makes her face him ...
now both staring each other ...
suddenly dey hears dadima calling geet
dadima- geet bete aap kahan hai ...jaldi aayie..
geet - maan dadima mujhe bula rhi hai plz..mujhe jaane dijiye .(( geet trying her best to loosen her grip from maan's hands...))
suddenly maan leaves her hands..
comes more closer to her face and says
maan- agar tumhe jaana hai toh jao...
par meri ek baat yaad rakhna ... aaj raat ko tum sirf meri hogi sirf meri...
saying dis maan winks to geet ...and gives a small peck on her left cheek..
den geet leaves and plays wid the corner of her dupaata due to shyness...
and goes downstairs ...find sdadima sitting wid annie..
and talking about something...
geet goes and sits wid dadima and says...
geet - ji dadima apne bulaya
dadima- han geet beta voh annie ko kisi party mai jaana hain aur unka dress code saree hain aur annie ko saree pehni nahi aati ..kya aap plz..unhe taiyar kar dengi...humne annie ko kaha tha ki voh parlour chali jaye..lekin aaj monday hai isliye sare parlour band hai...
geet - han...isme pz.wali kounsi baat hai dadima.mai abhi jaati hun aanie ki help karne...

geet goes in annie's room..and finds her struggling to wear saree...

geet - aree aree aniie ruko..mai tumhari help karti hun...

annie- accha hua geet tum aa gaye...mai toh iss saree se pareshan ho gaye ...kab se koshish kar rhi hun...par thik se band hi nhi ri...plz..jaldi pehnao na...mai late ho rhi hun party ke liye..

geet - oho !! annnie tum eteni tension mat lo...mai abhi panch minutes mai pehna dungi...

after 5 minutes

geet- dekho tum toh anvayin hi tension le rhi thi ...band gayi saree ..btao kaise lag rhi hai

annie hugs geet and says- thank u thanksu so much ..

geet brings aniiie downstaris...

annie and geet reaches downstairs...and finds dadima and maan siting dere wid arjun...

arjun was dere to accompany annie in the party as it was couples party..

dadima and arjun cant remove deir eyes from annie

dadima and arjun stands... dadima comes near annie and says kahin humari hi nazar na lag jaye ...bilkul pari lag rhi hai ...

maan and geet sees arjun staring annnie...maan comes and stands in front of arjun blocking his view to annie..geet giggles seeing maan possessive about his lil sweeet sister...

annie - accha dadima mai aur arjun chalte hain hume late ho rha hain...chale arjun..

arjun- han han chalo...we r getting late ..tum jaldi aao mai bahar car mai tumhara intezar kar rha hun...

annie comes and sits in the car..and says chale arjun...

den arjun and annie leaves for the party ...

here dadima also leaves for her room as she was tired and want to sleeep...

here geet and maan are still in the hall..

maan comes near geet ...geet sees dis and starts moving backwards..

geet is cornered ...

geet-maan yeh aap kya kar rhe hain...

maan hold geet from waist

geet-maan chodiye mujhe...

maan lifts her

...and takes her to the room...((geet still fights to loosen his grip))

closes the door wid his leg ...

geet- maan plz..jaane dijiye mujhe...geet tries to get up...

but maan makes her lie again and says ....maine tumhe kaha tha na ki aaj raat tum meri hogi sirf meri ..aaj koi nahi aayega humare beech mai...

maan moves closer to her face ...and kisses her left cheek..raises her head to see geet's eyes closed...den moves towards right cheek kisses it softly den bites it softly..nibbling it ...

geet moans in pleasure maan.

geet holds maan through his neck wid both of her hands...

and pulls him closer for more...

he puts her face in the hollow of her neck ... geet moves her neck liitle bit to make some more space for maan to enter ... maan softly kisses dere den bites and niibles on it ...and den moves towards her shoulder ..slides her cloth from shoulder and kisses dere ...den moves towards her oher side of the neck ..and did the same on the other side ..den looks at geet's face her eyes were still closed and her cheeks were trunung red and red and red...

He broke into an open mouth kiss and deepened it. His tongue was playing around with hers. They tasted all the flavours and suddenly both began sucking each other's tongue. Maan moaned with pleasure. Maan pulled her tight and she could feel his manhood aroused. He picked in one swift movement and took her to the bed.
He took his shoes and helped her take hers off. He stripped her naked. He pushed her on the bed and began vigorously kissing her and bit her lips and gave her passionate love bites. Geet curled her toes in desire and left scratch marks on his back.

Geet brought her lips at his exposed chest and began giving him small kisses. She opened his button and slid his silky shirt off. She could see his perfectly toned torso and she admired it with her hands. Maan kissed her all over, taking his sweet time. He kissed her shoulders. He nibbled her ears. He sucked her b****** and fondled them. He kissed her n****. He pleased her further down. She rolled on top.

She helped him take his belt off and unbutton his trousers. She slid his Armani boxers and kissed his neck and gave him a deep French kiss. Maan lost all control and rolled on top. Both looked at each other for a second and Geet placed her arms around his neck and invited him in by kissing his lips and he eased into her. Both complimented each others lovemaking. Both moaned all night long and for the first time Geet shouted his name "Maan" in pleasure

after 3 hours ..

maan moved a liittle bit side gasping for air..and sees geet breathing heavily trying to regain energy..moving her hands to hold the blanket so as it does not slide down ...tears of happinesss rolling down her eyes ...

maan again pullls geeet closer through her waist and says kaisa laga...

geet- thank u maan ...

maan - thank u kisliye...

geet - yeh raat meri zindagi ki sabse khoobsurat raat thi...

maan sees some hairs of geet disturbing his view to her face ... he tucks dem behind her ear ...

geet sleeps becoz of tiredness...and maan sill keeps staring at her beautiful and angelic face ...

and he also dozes off after some time...and again gets up after some time

when he get up..sees geet sleeping keeping her head on his chest and his hands r around her waist holding her tight ...not aloowing her to move away from him..

den he dozes off again...

dey had the most beautiful nyt of deir life ... and became one soul...

the end...

plz..plz...gyz...do comment..

shivika is waiting for the replies...

MY ff

Edited by shivikasavvy - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

😃😃😃😃 Totally Awesum... & u have made me 2 w8 for ur nxt 1 tooo...Keep up the gudd work...❤️👏😊👏❤️

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mandymore

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Posted: 14 years ago

wonderful update beautifully written n cmpletely describe maaneets passion,nobody can say its ur 1attmpt,u r a fantastic qriter.do keep on writing.god bless u.