PASSION AND OBSESSION

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s. dios
i was thinking of posting my first ff ever on PKYEK i am posting for first time so i request all of you to not comment harshly on my crap material...i will be posting with in four hours...
my ff continues from the current story...

Voy a intentar mi mejor dame una oportunidad gracias de antemano




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OK HERE I GO :
DOBRIYAL HOUSE:

PIA AND MISHA PLAN TO GO TO DANCE CLUB FOR REFRESHING THEM SELVES MISHA DRESSES UP IN AN OLD SHAGGY WRINKLED EVENING GOWN AND IS WATING FOR PIA

MISHA- (her eyes wide opened,starring pia as pia comes down the stairs wearing a red coloured middy shining with sequels) PIA!! MAN!! look at you yaar! you look so changed...hot...i really miss the older pia at least she didnot take 2 hrs for dressing up.

PIA-mmm...MISH look at you ..cmon we are going out and you are dressed up like this

MISHA-cool na

PIA-yes very cool now let me give you a make over

MISHA-(in a timid tune) w-w-a-wait a sec. PIA did you mean mine makeover?

PIA-Yes miss your make over

PIA FORCEFULLY TAKES MISH TO DRESSING ROOM AND COMES OUT WITH A BRAND NEW MISHA WHO WAS LOOKING LIKE A FASHION MODEL

MISHA-(looking at mirror) PIA what have you done?who is this?where am i?

PIA-cmon DRAMA queen you are looking great.. now lets go

THEY GO OUT AND MISHA CALLS OUT FOR DRIVER IN AN ANGRY TUNE ..THEY BOTH SIT IN THE CAR AND HEAD TOWARDS THE CLUB MISHA DOESNT TALK TO PIA DURING THE TRAVELL

OUTSIDE THE CLUB
PIA AND MISHA COME OUT OF CAR AND EVERY ONE STARES AT THEM

MISHA-PIA... look around yaar this place is filled with dumbos..lets go back

PIA-no bloody way

PIA FORCEFULLY TAKES MISHA INTO THE CLUB
AND THEN THEY START DANCING NORMALLY...BUT AFTER A WHILE PIA NOTICES THE MAN WHO SHOWED HER THE WAY TO COLLEGE,STARRING AT HER SHE FEELS UNEASY BUT IGNORES HIM AS LONG AS POSSIBLE BUT SHE FINALLY HEADED TOWARDS HIM LEAVING THE HALF DRUNK MISHA DANCING

PIA-(to the man)Hi..

THE MAN -Hi PIA

PIA- thanks for showing me the way to college that day .. i am really thankful

THE MAN-ohh thats just okk

PIA- what is your name?

THE MAN--jay khurana

PIA- nice

jay-shall we dance

PIA-ya sure why not?

THEY DANCE NORMALLY BUT PIA FEELS UNCOMFORTABLE IN DANCING WITH HIM .SOON THE DANCE GETS OVER...ALL HEAD TOWARDS THEIR RESPECTIVE HOMES

DOBRIYAL HOUSE:

THEY BOTH ENTER THE HOUSE MISHA GOES TO HER ROOM AND FALLS DOWN ON THE BED WISHING PIA A GOOD NIGHT SHE SLEEPS BUT PIA GOES TO HER ROOM AND STARES OUT THE WINDOW AS SHE RECALLS THE EYES SHE SAW ON THE STAGE

PIA-Pia cut the crap why i am thinking about that idiot who hurt me..my brains have also accepted the story that MISH told but why my heart and soul refuse to accept that story...?why my heart beats so fast when i think about him?

THE CURTAINS ON THE WINDOW START WAVING.THE WINDS BECAME FASTER AND FASTER.

PIA-.it seems like the forest is calling me... the winds are calling out my name...i think i should go and check out the forest otherwise i wont be able to sleep or eat or do any thing.but just think about ABHAY AND THE MYSTICAL FOREST

PIA GOES OUT OF THE HOUSE WITH OUT WAKING UP ANY ONE
IN THE FOREST:
PIA-why is this place so familiar why?(she goes towards the centre of the forest and suddenly feels that there is some one spying on her)

PIA-Hello?who is there?(she continues walking in fear and becomes sure that someone is following her but forgets all about it when she reaches the place where she fainted)

PIA SITS DOWN NEAR THAT COLD PLACE AND SUDDENLY FEELS AN ANONYMUS 'PASSION AND OBSESSION' BUT SHE DID NOT KNOW FOR WHAT THE FEELING WAS...SHE LIES THERE AND REALIZES THAT TEARS WERE ROLLING DOWN HER CHEEKS SILENTLY WITHOUT HER CONTROL...THE FOREST BECOMES TOTALLY QUIET WITH NO MORE WINDS BLOWING NO MORE BIRDS CHIRPING

PIA- why my heart is going all sentimental?(SHE ASKS HERSELF THIS QUESTION AS A N ADDICTING AND HYPNOTISING TUNE PLAYS IN THE BACKGROUND)

PIA- i think i should go now this place is too weird

SHE HEADS TOWARDS HER HOUSE AND REACHES THERE SAFELY
ELSE WHERE IN THE FOREST:

jay-(on the phone)bro..i think pia will overcome her amesia very soon we should do some thing,NEEL

NEEL--BHAI i have full faith on you...you will come up with some plan very soon.now please excuse me i am on a date with PANCHI
bbyee

jay--Huh BYEE

PIA'S ROOM:

SHE WAS LYING ON HER BED WITH OPENED EYES TRYING TO MAKE SENSE OF WHAT HAPPENED

PIA-What just happened?what was that ?ohhh gosh feels like i am just getting down and down in a quick sand...GOOD NIGHT PIA DOBRIYAL.GET THESE THOUGHTS OUTTA YOUR MIND..I SAID GOOD NIGHT

SHE FALLS ASLEEP WITH ABHAYS THOUGHTS IN HER HEAD.THE NIGHT PASSES WITH QUIETNESS LIKE THE WHOLE FOREST WAS SOBBING .

TO BE CONTT.
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PRECAP:RITWIK FEELS SOME THING FOR PIA AND PIA FEELS SOMETHING FOR ABHAY AND SAMEER FEELS SOME THING FOR MISHA AFTER PANCHI DUMPS HIM JUST IN 1 EVENING!!!!!!!!!!!AND OUR DEAR MISH FEELS SOME THING FOR...
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s. dios

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ff closed... i cant write it...i knew i dont have the potential of writing any thing i can only write freely in spanish but than no one understand :-(


Estoy tan triste que nadie me puede entender. Siento que mi Ingls clases eran slo vano

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