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@Courageous_Leo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#261

Poco...I confess tht Im jealous of ur writing...pls dnt take me wrong...u write sooo well...koi bhi j Hoga Dude...😉😉😉...

Ok nw lets start...with Abheer...jisne saare villains ko peeche chod diya...I Hate him...I mean it...bt Im love 2 hate him...a player, who knows hw 2 move n achieve his goal...still wondering wht he is upto...

Mishu...daring in a way...bt I dnt think tht she acutually knows the fact tht wht kind of creature Abheer is??????????????

Abhay...Im scared...scared of Bad Abhay...scared hw he will deal with his lovedones esp Piya...metz fading...piya in...

Haseena...no words ...wonderful mom who knows her son ...very well

Piya...no matter how hard she tries 2 hide her feelings...it comes automatically which creates doubt in Abhay's mind...gd thing ...

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Nidz

@NIDIZ

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#262

Heyya Poca...

OMG..Phew...I finaly..I completed BOOK-2..

I know me too late to comment on that ..i see alot has been spam already..😆 I liked the way u gave those twists..

n now I'm all set to read BOOK-3..

So..I wuld be reading what all happened btw Abeer n Misha..n awaiting to read abt Abhay's memory back..n even Sam n T..Metz..n Anushka..It's very intersting..dear..!!

This seems too exciting..!!

BTW...

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Meeko

@Meeko

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#263

omg poco! i was to review after another part of urs, but cldnt stop myself...

🤗for writing such wonderful parts frst.

next abheer!!😛 he finally got it why abhay was behaving this way.. but i didnt... is it just coz his birthday is nearing, and the 2 abhays inside him are colliding???

btw, abheers such a charm to read, and thn he is a pest too😆 but wht a pest😳 poor mishu, she just went with the flow, and hugged him.. it was nice tht he didnt lie to her bout t, and shearctually believed him without thinking twice... itd be great to read abheer falling for mish, and then mite be he- the confusing master, is all confused to whts happening to him.. tho i knw abheers not the kinds, but u never know :D

abhay pias convo was to touching too.. he knws pia's hiding stuff from him, he himself feels emptiness inside him, he knws there r some chapters of his life r missing.. and thn he understand the pain in pia's voice too when she talks to him.. i so feel for this couple, and nw the condition wil worsen wen pia herslef will tell him the truth.. plz dnt make tht sad poco... after i handled abhy's memory loss, i dnt expect this to be a heartache... abhay wont hurt her verbally right?? pias gone through lot of shit uptil now, i hope this'll go easy on her.. and abhay too.. its nt tht he hasnt suffered at all...

poco update soon!!

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ROMEO_FOREVER

@ROMEO_FOREVER

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#264

got a query.what are players capable of

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TheBlackJaguar

@TheBlackJaguar

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#265

PRECAP :

Tanushree regains consciousness. Sambhav is behaving very aggressive with everyone. Daksh gives Pancchi the stake to kill Haseena. Abheer has found a way to expose Piya and Anushka's little secret to Abhay at the party. The party begins. ❤️

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Sabina_Ansari

@Sabina_Ansari

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#266

awesome precap...

Cant wait for update and party to begin...

Wen r u updating????

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_Klaroline_

@_Klaroline_

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#267

LOVELY UPDATE

CONTINUE SOON

LOVE U

RENUKA

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I-love-Roses

@I-love-Roses

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#268

OMG! I hope abhay doesn't lose his temper on Pia for keeping his memory erasing as a secret. Hope Haseena remains safe. Update soon!

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ROMEO_FOREVER

@ROMEO_FOREVER

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#269

poco pleas reply for my question

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sonu.p

@sonu.p

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#270

O MY GOD!!

i cannot believe that just happend...sam used to be my fav character...and i know that he has been wronged by T...but i just wish he had heard her out first...

cannot believe he would ever do that..

such a beautiful love story came to such a brutal end :(

i feel especially terrible for T...she hasnt seen anything but pain in her life so far...forced to be a blosh...forced to be evil...forced to manipulate sam...and when she was finally a little happy with sam by her side...this happens to her...i cannot possibly imagine her pain right now...

please update soon cos i dont think i can wait too long to see the aftermath of this...

o but i have to say...u write beautifully...this scene especially was truly heartbreaking...it was almost too real for me...u portrayed the pain and the emotions vividly...:)

update soon poco!

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