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craziekudi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

ashuuu

that was awesome...u are an awesome writer ( i told you so😉)

the saree.. was awesome...😳

not happy with little pecks and all i know u will bring more in the scene ( our secret)...

need more aashu need more... and i know u will give!!!

sabar ka meeta hota hai hain na!!

☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

liplock was so good...☺️

loved it!!👏

SO happy maan's jeep is back...

jeep ka saath juda hai maan geet ki love story!!!

rem geet trying to ride the jeep!!

ha ha h

love u to

DIL khush kar diya tune aaj!!!!

aage keliye...

crazie deepz

Edited by maneet1985 - 14 years ago

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sumona28

@sumona28

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

AAsh dear I am blushing and suprised . Ye tumne kya likha ...so adorable so passionate so romantic maine kya bolu...I am speechless. I don't believe that its your first OS . Maaneet are romancing in the car wo my God you wrote the OS so unique and use so hard english dear mera ta halat kharab hone wala tha ...

Aash good job dear ...you are a good writer . All crazies are good writer except me . Loved your OS so much and love you...continue soon...

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am_sweet_pari

@am_sweet_pari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

awsome os

continue soon

plz pm meee

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craziekudi

@craziekudi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: esha143
Kaminiii...shoulder pe ek peck...lips pe ek peck...in sab ko mila ke tu VVHHWWKs bolthi hai😡...u only showed one nice kiss in here thats it...so I'm still waiting...u better make it meet my demand or I'm not going to talk to u really...n haa tu ne kya kaha tah ye baat bhool kar bhi kahi bolna mat...maar khaayegi kamini mere haathon...

Okay all the gaalis said...they are out of my system for now...😛😆

Aashuuu..meri pyaari MKK...u r brilliant darling...awesome piece...I just loved how u detailed every emotion that took place...n made it beautiful...lovely work honey...I'm soo proud of u...I already added this to our kamini land😛...even before reading it😃...I just can't wait for more now...Maan's anxiety n his reactions on remembering Geet leaving him was understandable n u wrote his pain so well...totally loved it !!so here u go...🤗
all for u from me n all our kaminis...u rock girl !!!

oh esha... poor aaash dhamki mat de usko... likhegi aashu par vishwaas rakh!!!😆

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ahujatanvi

@ahujatanvi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

superb 👏👏👏

aashu u should be given such sazaas quite often 😉😉😉 😆😆😆😆

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anks_ams

@anks_ams

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

wow. loved it...

pls add me to ur pm list.. cont soon.. cant wait for the update:)

Ankita:)

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mansijani21

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

awesome
loved it...update soon..
plz add me to ur pm list

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: tanya94
waaaooo...simply awesum...a very sweet😛 start...n ya it was very romantic...their dialogues made it very romantic...can u pls pm me...would be waiting for the next part...and ya just a small suggestion during their sr pls add some nice dialogues😉 as well instead off just describing their actions which we have read in many oss...hope u dont mind...fab job once again👏

hi tanya..

thanks for the kind words!!

me def planning for some dialogues n romance more than the deed itself...*but dont tell that to anyone else*😆😆😆😆😆😆

and i welcome the suggestion tanya😳😳

wud def PM you when i update😳