MG ff - FAIRY...TAIL???!!!! Thread 3

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#351

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

me feeling sad 4 sweetu ...

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#352

wowww loved it

loved swati's poem

maan is so busy in his life that he didnt even care to call her once n tell her that he won the match

geet moving to london again

but what happened tp jasmeet

i think that will postpone her shifting to london

poor geet she has become all alone no MK n now her parents r also sending her to london

precap is awesome

Edited by hinal_maaneet - 14 years ago

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Hima

@Ramhari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#353

sorry for the late comment
The part was beautiful yet painful.
Kate had to tell Maan that sweetu had called and he didnt even regret it 😲
He seems to have totally taken her for granted now that success has also come to him.
i so loved the strict Daadi. perfect match for our MK.
Finally looks like its all over mostly for now between them.
Maa is so full of attitude nothing more can be expected from him.
Sweetu also seems to have come out from her imagination and dream that may be they are still somewhere connected.
It seems to be very difficult for her to block his thoughts
poor thing had to face so much first was Mk and now her parents seem to be more and more disturbed.
Wow she is going to london.
Good since may be she can get her MK back.
Her fondly recalling all their past memories together was so beautiful.
OMG what's wrong now?? why did her mom scream
Hope everything is alright.
I still dont feel very good
waiting for the next part.

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#354

I had all thgs till now with Geet facing due to this stupid MK

Nw plz after the leap it shuld Maan facing nt her

She shuld nt thnk of him at all

Plzzz she faced a lot i dnt wanna see her face more

It hurts to see her like that

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 14 years ago

#355

Hi dear...thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update! Geet shpuld nt think of MK. Rather she should nt visit him. She should 4get him n he shld go after her. She needs to b stronger! What happened to her mom...please update soon! Cliffhanger...update eargerly awaited! Leap...waiting. Well written! MK does nt carte abt her...he has changed completely!

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muskaan_cute19

@muskaan_cute19

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#356

Hey dear sorry this time really got late but don't know this time 3 parts next time how many it may be but will never miss it as it is so much worth it.
This part was filled with full of lessons for life to be learned by every one now and then.Its really better we got to learn them earlier.The best thing I liked about it was the determination to achieve something no matter what how many hurdles may cover your way but you are not going to be defeated having the faith deep inside and attitude of winning always makes win.I always believed always play or do a work to win not to make the other one looser(well all are brought up with different norms so am I😉)but still he got what he desired for with

and here it is as he deserved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Although determination belonged to him but the strength was forced into him with some one else hope.It was none other than his now so called Best friend Pink football it was just her hope and faith in him which gave him that to strength to play or rather fight back.To which he won't agree as he believe its a one man show and he is the only deserving candidate whose shoulder to be appraised.As consciously his heart too knows well who is it in him who made him so determined with whose belief he got this victory not to be refused it was his dedication what the elementary part too needed commendation!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Why do we just ignore such people and feelings in our life,as just consider them to be in some sub conscious state of our.Alas!if could ever find a answer to this question?

If the going gets tough, the tough gets us going. Usually the things you want may be harder to achieve and it may be a challenge to all of us. But that's not going to stop us.

He too believed the same he wasn't willing to let it go so easily he had to no matter how difficult it may be but he have to do it and prove himself.It was him The Charmer how can he be a looser its the victory which comes to his dictionary and the word runs in his blood and the word he was only known too.Something he was only aware off and the other side he never met and he had to do it, with the aim eh entered that field just to win!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
In the same world of his there was a restless soul pacing around with a state of mental or emotional strain or suspense,eating her up that curiousness as she had the faith but still those hormones were getting on her nerves and it was his victorious voice which could relax them until the moment she tried her best.
She was drawn back to the memories of her own what she is now or where she is standing right now,was all because to him he was the credit take and life maker unlike game maker.All her achievement she ought to him for sure,he always got that courage to do something was from him.Anything she would do with such enthusiasm or determination he would be the one to make her do something like that but all she could be sad about was he lest knew anything about this in fact anything about her because now its always about him.On her thoughts she could do was just to curse herself and nothing much off coz she could always found herself guilty for even thinking so low about him nevertheless he can even do it.
Her misery didn't ended here it was a long lasting one,she was in this state since 3 days by now,and at the other piece of world some one was least bothered about it.She continued trying making any sense with the very possible way of communication she tried reaching him but all she meet with was failure.But she was such a elate person her goods thought about him couldn't die in anyway.She kept chanting thing about him not at all in a wrong way but in convincing herself.She had that blind faith on him.She knew it must be something wrong otherwise this wasn't possible that he may forget him or was it possible but here the question was was it so easy?but still she believed might he wasn't able to share the bad news as he won't be able to face her as being a looser but she was firm and calm as this side no matter what he was her best friend she just cant live his side win or lose she may always remain beside him as his support never will she let him down.
When the news broke on her instead of getting happy or rejoicing the news of his victory she was pushed into the state of deep ruefulness, she was struck with forlornness.She was more of hurt that amused,she felt desolated.This is what you shall get in return in result of all prayers and care,all she got was his ignorance,he was least bother about her as she would be worried about him or she will be concerned with his results but he was busy in his own life.She was not baffled over facts but perplexed and bewildered about this his strange side.Her mind was poisoned with all evil thoughts and she just slipped into the poignancy and dolefulness.She had changed a lot in those few years away from him as if she would be the old pink football she would have created a fuss about it but now all she did was not also to cry but just sit silently and think over it as what went wrong between them,she couldn't be blamed over her tears as they no where to be stopped,how could they it wasn't her tears or just mere water droplets it was her heart bleeding with the thought of now having a least importance in his life.The feeling of bereavement she didn't felt even at the time of parting ways from him which she could feel today,today she felt the pain of being changing everything between them it started a long way back but today she complete broke even the lest of hopes of always having him aside and having him in her life.The way to ease her pains was to pour out her heart to someone or something and her best healer was nothing but that instrument which spoke her unsaid words.The words which were unspoken and she couldn't left her mouth those keys played it so well and the emotions were cleared it resembled pain and the feeling of being dejected!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He was living his happy life enjoying with all his energy and enthusiasm he had but with her name he too had a feel of not letting her know about his victory and that was not long lasted,it was quite short lived.Instead of being guilty he was now she got to knew that was more than enough he was least bothered as she would have wait for this news but all he cared was she would be mad at him lest eh knew was how much his behaviour has changed him.Well living his life perfectly everything was correct at place nothing to be bothered about happy living life he had nothing much of to be cared for or anyone.
She too consoled and composed herself but still that past incidents kept lingering in her mind.She too started herself tried her best not to ignore but to keep herself aloof from him.Her life was not as smooth as his was,it was quite rough for her.Many difficulties she was facing main was her roost were shaking and she could felt that in every way, wish she could knew what was wrong with it but there was something wrong which she was unaware.She was not only unaware of this but some destiny plans for her.As to which she was always dreamt off,one thing she always wanted to happen,one thing she wanted in jiffy,one thing that she always just thought about,one thing to which her life was bounded, now she was said to have it but now she was scared and feared the worst from both the sides.
That one thing now meant nothing to her anymore but still she was forced to think about it once,to have this opportunity to break all the barriers and be with her charmer.Soon she was floating in her old memories which were beautiful amazing and worth to get lost in,something she will always treasure all her life.She was happy sad mixture of feelings were taking over her.The negative and positive thoughts both were there of what could went wrong did they changed?Or was it the time that changed everything around them.
{This is something she explained so beautifully so won't enforce my shallows words upon them😳}
Soon she was distracted from all her thoughts and had to come to reality as something waiting for her.
Loved all the three parts as always amazing but the last two I must praise U the way game was explained and then Pink footballs feeling was commendable.Without dialogues U just wrote her feelings which left me with no words.I literally had tears in my eyes while reading it as if I could feel the pain deep within,don't ask how I wrote this All i needed was your face to keep infront and to be safe from your anger and dq giri all i wrote this😆 suchi😳
And that winter sonata in part 24 ooo that was just amazing gosh I loved it so very much cant even explain I listened to it so many times it was beautiful and just perfect with it.
keep writing do update the next part soon will be waiting eagerly
Thanks for the pmz
God bless U
Love U🤗
Ummah

A poem for Fairy TAIL
(didn't knew where to fit in the comment so here it is at the end)

Can you see me now,

The state at which I'm in,

Where despair and sadness cloaks me,

Where I can no longer pretend to smile?

I'm so tired,

So tired of putting up a front,

Pretending to be strong,

Even when I'm at my weakest.

I just need you to hold me,

To reassure me,

To tell me that everything is alright,

To make me feel safe.

But I can't tell you all of that,

Because I'm supposed to be strong,

I'm supposed to stand tall,

Even when I feel alone inside.

Listen closely for once,

Hear the emotions in my voice,

Find the hidden meanings in my words,

Look at me beyond my masks and facades.

Please, just this once,

I beg of you,

To see me for who I am,

Instead of who I show myself to be.

I'm not as strong as you think I am,

I cry like any other girls do,

I can feel lonely at times,

I have a heart and emotions too.

Just this once,

Look at me closely,

And tell me what you see,

Because I suspect you see only a lie.

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sam1234fly

@sam1234fly

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#357

loved it...but why cliff hanging?????????😭

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#358

painful update. geets mom suffereing frm some life threatning disease??

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#359

plzzz update

da nxt part

plzzz dont keep us waiting

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Avani

@avani_9

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#360

hey sis sry 4 nt cmmnting on previous update i wasnt cuming ol n nw i read all ur update ohh hw much i missed it...but mk is too changed nw...wondering wht gonna happen ??? update soon n again sorry