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Posted: 13 years ago
hey awesome updates dear...
so maaneet r romancing n family members r watching them...
looking fwd...

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt
lovely
aww they played & sang 2gether
omg msk jealous loved it
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome updates
luvd da jelous maan lol
fnx 4 da pm plzz cont soon x
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesomee luved maan getting jealous
n superbbb songgg
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

lovely both updates

wonder saw them
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME UPDATES DEAR
LOVED IT
THANX FOR THE PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome awesome Teju...I am feeling so bad...some days back I only asked you where you are going with this FF...I feel so embarassed now...this teaches me a lesson to never second guess a writer as that person knows the best
I totally loved the way this story is turning out and the pace is absolutely lovely. Can you see me holding my ears and pouting with a baby face "Sorry"
absolutely brilliant. They both unknowingly ran from marrying each other and now unknowingly are falling for each other. Very interesting and cute...
I am loving it totally.
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Posted: 13 years ago


Part 56

Unknown to both that they are not only the people present in the room...there is someone else.

Maan and geet are lost in them. Still geet hugging maan and maan sitting on the bench. After few minutes they came out of trance when maan's fingers accidently fell on the keys of piano making sound.

Geet snaped open her eyes and moved away from maan and maan stood up as a reflex.

Geet: umm'wo'nice'..nice song na

Maan smiled as she tried to ease the embarrassed situation for both of them.

Maan: haan geet I don't know that u can sing that well.

Geet:hmm''ok maan I must go and sleep bye.

Maan: good night geet.

Geet: good night maan.

She ran from there. Maan smiled and went back to his room.

Next morning :

Dev: so geet whats the plan today?

Geet: nothing dev.

Dev: geet we planned to see the city na

Geet: I m not coming dev.

Dev: but geet

Geet: no dev I m not coming maan said na yesterday.

Dev(murmered) : yeh bro bhi na'.he wont take himself and will not allow others to go.

Geet: dev kuch kaha?

Dev: no'nahi to.

Geet: ok

Just then maan came downstairs.

Maan: geet I m going to office.

Geet: but maan u said u will take me out na.

Maan: geet I have an important meeting so plz spend today at home I will take u out tomorrow.

Geet: but maan u promised me.

Maan: understand geet.

Geet: no need just leave it here'.waise from tomorrow I am going back to college.

Maan: no u r not.

Geet: yes I m

Maan: u cant

Geet: why?

Maan: coz tomorrow is Sunday.

Geet: umm'wo'I mean''ok then I will go to pinky's house.

Maan: she is still not back I checked.

Geet: when will she be back.

Maan: that u must know she is Ur frnd.

Geet: I will know. But I will go to clg from Monday then.

Maan: I will check if everything is ok there. If ok then u can go.

Geet: teekai. But even I m not coming with u tomorrow.

Maan: lets see that. Ok for now I m leaving. Bye

Maan walked towards the door but again geet yelled.

Geet: maan u dint have ur breakfast.

Maan: I will have it in office.

Geet: nahi come eat something and go.

He turned back to geet as he said.

Maan: geet I m running late.

Geet came to him with a glass of juice in her hand.

Geet: atlest drink think. No more no. drink this like a good boy.

Maan: hmm

Maan took the glass from her hand and drank it in one go and gave back it to geet. As geet took the glass he came forward and gave a peck on her cheek and left quickly saying 'thank u geet' leaving a shocked geet at the entrence.

Dev who sat at there until now being a silent spectator was now shocked to the core. He fell out the chair with a jerk and now he is stitting on the floor with face full of shock.

'omg what am I seeing'is this my bro? what got into him? Yesterday night bro touched the piano almost after years and also with a beautiful duet'geet siniging and bro playing the keys and then their hug and NOW omg'.omg omg'..did he just kissed geet???? And she stood their silently''!!!!!!!...dadimaaa'

Dev quickly ran out of room before geet sees him. Geet turned and saw no one in the room except her. she shied 'maan bhi na'.ufff''ab bhi bache ki tarah'..peck dekar bhaggaya''chal geet stop thinking go and call pinky''.thank god dev dint see''' she touched her cheeck and blushed and went back to her room.

Dev reached his room and immediately called dadima.

Dev: dadima.

Dadi: dev beta'how r u

Dev: dadi mein teek hoon aur aap.

Dadi: mein teek hoon beta

Dev: dadi when will u come.

Dadi: kyun dev

Dev: dadi u don't know what is happening her'omg

Dadi: kya hua dev?

Dev: dadi bro aur geet omg

Dadi: dev huva kya saaf saaf bathavo.

Dev: dadi yesterday night bro played the piano'.

And dev explained every thing happened from last night to until now.

Dadi: wow this unbelievable.

Dev: haan dadi wahi to mein bhi kehraha hoon.

Dadi: dev don't worry I m already on my way'now I m in mumbia and will be back by next flight teekai.

Dev: haan dadi I will be waiting for u and tell me when u reach I will come to airport.

Dadi: teekai dev. Ab mein rakthi hoon

Dev: teekai bye dadi

Dadi: bye dev beta.


precap:

dadi meet geet😃

Edited by teju2292 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

awesome awesome Teju...I am feeling so bad...some days back I only asked you where you are going with this FF...I feel so embarassed now...this teaches me a lesson to never second guess a writer as that person knows the best

I totally loved the way this story is turning out and the pace is absolutely lovely. Can you see me holding my ears and pouting with a baby face "Sorry"
absolutely brilliant. They both unknowingly ran from marrying each other and now unknowingly are falling for each other. Very interesting and cute...
I am loving it totally.




ritzy dont say sorry dear
i never took u wrong
and thank u very very much for ur lovely and long comment.
haan they will fall for each other all are sure of that hain na
ofcourse maan is for geet and geet is for maan na😉
waise this updates are result of ur previous comment
thnks a lot for givving that comment
it improved me a lot
love ur dear
keep commenting like this

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