ff-mg-pyaar ya shaadi!!!#1-pt 63- see new thread - Page 50

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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update...
loved it...please continue soon...
thanks for pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
hi teju 3d smiley 054
really awesome 3d smiley 072
geet was so cute &
jab we met part was rocking
thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
cool update but i don't know why updates of this FF leave me unsatisfied...bahut chotein hain Teju...please if possible please increase the content a little bit...please
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
@preethia, sarkh26, -Nilam-, arushi_05, ritzy09, luv_DD, maaneetsangel, mrk_1, priya.shilpa, ridhz21, abina03

thank u all guys for commenting...

and haan ritzy u said the updates are very small ...yes they r indeed small when compared to IHY...that is y i m giving 2 updates every time...

i will try to increase the length...but plz bear with me if it is still short

so guys

here is another update and i will try to update 2 or 3 parts 2mrow and sunday...from then i cant update again till 29th this month as i gor my mid term exams i will be busy in them...i will even try to update one more part of ishq hai yeh...plzzz hope u understand and dont be mad at me...i will be back after my exams are over...


Part 45

Maan turned around and walked to his room.


After some time.


Maan sat at the dinner table.


Maan: nakul..where is geet.


Nakul: saab wo unki room main.


Geet came downstairs just then and spoke cutting nakul in the middle of his sentence.


Geet: mein yaha hoon maan.


Maan turned around and saw her coming towards him still in her jeans.


Maan: dint u fresh up geet? Y r u still in the same jeans.


Geet: what should I wear if I fresh up?


Maan: u have another pair of jeans na!


Geet: haan hai.


Maan: to wear them


Geet: wo pair kal keliye.


Maan: teekai geet ek kaam kar...annie left some dresses here so go and try them nakul will show u her room.


Geet: thanks maan.


Maan: now come and have ur dinner geet.


Geet: hmm bohot bhook lagrahahi...aaj kya kiya...


She started checking out each dish and finally their dinner competed.


They both walk upstairs when geet asked.


Geet: maan where is ur room?


Maan: kyun?


Geet: if I need something?


Maan: call my mobile.


Geet: I don't have mobile to call maan.


Maan: call from land geet.


Geet: kyun is ur room has any hidden secrets that u cant even say where ur room is?


Maan: kya?


Geet:aur nai to kya?


Maan: uff geet...my room is 2nd right one in that corner.


Geet: waha kyun?


Maan: waha kyun matlab?


Geet: I mean y not beside my room?


Maan: wo guest room hai and main bedroom wont be beside guest room.


Geet: aisa kyun?...


Maan: geet tumhe bhook lagrahahai kya?...to jaakar kuch ar khavo na mere dimak kyun kharahiho?


Geet(keeping her hands on her hips and an angry expression): am I eating ur brain?


Maan: geet plz plz jaakar sojav mein thak chukahoon...I need sleep right now...plz...GOOD NIGHT.


Geet: teekai aaj keliye chodungi tumhe...good night.


They both went to their respective rooms and called it as a day ufff finally...a day is over ...

Next morning

Geet woke up stretching her body keeping her hands up in the air and turned around by seeing the new place.


Geet: oh yeah yesterday night I came to maan's house na...hmmm whats the time?


Geet turned around and saw the time and she was startled.


Geet: omg...how much I slept...its 2.00 clock I missed my breakfast as well as lunch...what maan is doing? Y dint he wake me up?


plz press like button and plz comment they encourage me to write more plzzz

Edited by teju2292 - 13 years ago
Shimmerr thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
loooved the update!! continue sooon dear!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks 4r d update al d bst 4r ur xams. . . Vl b w8tn 4 update
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Posted: 13 years ago
thx for the update dear!!
hmmm... where is maan?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update Teju...I love it...
but it is very short and u are taking too long to update...I miss ur FF.

she is remembering her family...and took every information about his family also...so sweet...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hmm...they r chooo cute while they r talking r i would say arguing😆...
i loved it...looking fwd...

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