MG FF: Quantum of Solace -Thread One- - Page 14

dadi damn good with playing cupid

Hey Limerance,

Have been meaning to comment, but sorry couldn't get to it earlier.
I'm loving your writing style. Simple and quite detailed. I always feel its the most difficult to keep it simple and still have the audience hooked. And you have already done it. Hats off.

Scene lengths are very crisp and just right. Emotion depiction is great and makes me get into their heads easily.
Piyu is cute...she is the best. (Of course I do love M&G, but the younger one is cuter 😆) After a long time I'm reading a M&G FF (apart from Moksha ofcourse) and its proving to be fresh breath of air in terms of your story telling style. Geet's dilemma, that she was put under, is definitely novel in the FF world. I hope you could do an update with her in the actual crisis.

Great updates Limerance.
Can't wait to find out how you are going to treat the story...
Hasini

Nice update...curious to know Maan's past...n also Daadi's antics to bring Maan n Geet together😆

Hi minal I just read all 4 parts. Beautiful name u chose for ur ff and lovely story line.
Plz add me to ur pm list. I wud luvvv to read more so do update soon.

😃great storyline!!! can't wait for them to get to know each other better.

nice FF!! im adding you as my buddy.

y so quite here?

I thought you were working on an update? Kya hua tera vada? Voh kasam, voy irada? Yes, I'm in a singing mood today, I don't know why though

loved dadi as she has set up da date 4 both of them. jst loving the ff. add me 2 ur PM list