Opposites Attract - Maaneet FF Thread #4

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#841

Luv the pace of this ff. Maan is at his bst being a husband... Giving her all the guidance and direction perfect partner wud do ;) and then he is being the bossy boss ;)
cool luving the track.

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Durga

@mrk-1

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#842

awsome yaar !!!!

loved it !!!

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#843

But as they left his room she turned back to look at him. His eyes were fixed on her. She cud see the concern in his eyes.

I'm fine. Instantly his expression changed to stern one and he hid his emotions so well.😊😛👍🏼🤗😃

Edited by paponecon - 14 years ago

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jasraj123

@jasraj123

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#844

awesome update. yash is really naughty left geet in dark room and forget. love the maaneet moment was sooo nicely written and build.the pigeon in the building and geet's fear. the concern of maan about geet was really visible from ur writing. eventhough he is a very tough boss but he still will be little different for geet. his concern about her is sooo much that he can't avoid a little discomfort to her😉😆. love the maaneet hugs about concern.

pls continue soon and no precap yaar. what should i imagine now😉.

now how u feeling. take good care yaar.

one question can u pls tell me the link of ur others writing. i want to read them

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sldeeps

@sldeeps

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#845

short & cute update sanju dear😉

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#846

ossum part

really i liked the way ...he is a bossy

at the same time a cute hubby

want to see some type of office romance between them

but short dear

want a big one

and no precap sad for that

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my_maan_geet

@my_maan_geet

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#847

really nice update dear...really loved it nd dat yash he is super idiot...

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#848

loved the update...

thanks to yash we got some maaneet moment for ourself...

maan trying to calm her down was so cute...

geet will get to know more abt her husband while working with him...

pl cont soon

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#849

Hello...so many updates seem to have gone bye since I was away giving my examz.. Loved all the previous updates. Another step has been taken to bring Maaneet closer.

I really loved how you showed us the two facets of Maan...as a professional boss and as a responsible, caring husband. Really looking forward to see how this track progresses and the new developments in their relationship.

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sanjeevani09

@sanjeevani09

Navigator

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#850

Originally posted by: jasraj123
awesome update. yash is really naughty left geet in dark room and forget. love the maaneet moment was sooo nicely written and build.the pigeon in the building and geet's fear. the concern of maan about geet was really visible from ur writing. eventhough he is a very tough boss but he still will be little different for geet. his concern about her is sooo much that he can't avoid a little discomfort to her😉😆. love the maaneet hugs about concern.

pls continue soon and no precap yaar. what should i imagine now😉.

now how u feeling. take good care yaar.

one question can u pls tell me the link of ur others writing. i want to read them

this is my first ff. i have not written anything else. happy by ur response.