The girl next door - Ch 103 - pg 108; note pg 109 - Page 12

Created

Last reply

Replies

822

Views

86.1k

Users

37

Likes

1.9k

Frequent Posters

-BeingAppy- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
it took a hell lot of time for me to understand about relationships, thanx to my papa who had every time explained me and made me realize that blood connections aren't the only reasons to cherish. its because of his guidance today i have the bestest of people around me, irrespective of any blood relationship. what keerti felt was the feeling i had once felt , the title The Girl Next Door is truly representing the ups and downs one faces being around different people.
👍🏼
best wishes
Edited by apeksha_gupta - 14 years ago
_Invincible_ thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
fabulous...👏

i m in love wid it dol...d story part was amazing and holds a deep emotional value...👍🏼
we usually get too engrossed in our big ambitions dat we forget to cherish d small joy's

KITS is so sweet and realization hits her instantly ...she thanx god 4 every single thing in her life...i hope she realises her feelings for ROHAN too asap...😛

sharan developing a crush ...so r we going to see jealous ROHAN at any point or dis crush is going to b a stepping stone for KITS realization regarding ROHAN...Interesting..

jdots thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
Hey nice part...
.Liked the little story in between...
Anyways what is with this new guy...
(I am not going to remember his name even...)
No Rohan today... :(


Originally posted by: dolphinUSA



Look who's back...yay!!!
I thought I almost lost you :(

P.S: No No u have not lost me... <3...<3,,<3...

311578 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter 35

She slowed down a bit to come by his side but since they were running at the same pace...her deceleration took him ahead of her. He thought she got tired but when he turned back to look at her she picked up pace again and went ahead of him...when he caught up with her she slowed down again and then it was a deliberate attempt on both their parts to have a little fun. But this continued only till she tripped on a small pebble causing her ankle to twist and before she knew it...she was on the ground. It happened so quick that she didn't even get a chance to control her speed...

Apart from the twisted ankle, she had hurt her elbow and knee as well. Sharan immediately bent down to hold her by her shoulders to steady her...when he turned her by the shoulders to make her face him she gave a grimace of pain...she couldn't help it. Her eyes were shut tight, her brows furrowed and she bit on her lower lip with force. He could see she was in much pain...

He stroked the skin on her elbow just above the scratch and asked in a soft voice "where else are you hurt?" She brought her bent ankle forward and placed her hand on it...she tried to put some pressure on it but not being able to withstand the pain she cried out "Babaji..."

He made her let go of her hand from her ankle and stroked it gently...she let out a painful breath when he removed her shoe and sock...he was as gentle as he could be but the pain was excruciating... He examined her ankle closely...it was beginning to swell...he pulled out his phone from the pocket and called Kabir right then...he gave Kabir their location and asked him to come and pick them up.

"It will be alright..don't worry. Kabir is on his way...Are you hurt elsewhere?" he asked as he looked at her still stroking her ankle trying to alleviate her pain. She opened her eyes and he saw they were wet...she was very much in pain. She forced several breathes out her mouth to prevent from crying when the pain became unbearable...she pulled her pants up to her knee and he saw it was badly wounded...it wasn't bleeding a lot but there were a lot of scratches letting out small droplets of blood...

He went closer and blew on it...it prickled her...she couldn't help the hiss that escaped. He immediately pulled back...he held her leg by her calf very tightly and stroked the skin under his grip with his other hand...he thought it would divert her attention and offer some rest. It certainly did...until they both realized her was holding her naked leg...they both looked at each other a little surprised...she pulled down her pants carefully so as not to brush it over the wound while Sharan looked away ... it was awkward only for a moment because Kabir came right then.

Sharan helped her to get up on her feet...as she tried to walk she lost her balance and clenched his t-shirt for support...and he caught her by her waist right in time. Kabir came to her side then and she balanced herself by holding Kabir's hand on one side while still clenching Sharan's t-shirt on the other...Sharan held her by her arm which helped provide additional support. They managed to seat her in the car and drove her home...

They all laughed a little when they saw Mira with a cotton pad in her hand waiting for her at the door...she looked like a tiger waiting to pounce on her prey. She cleaned her up and bandaged her...while Mira was bandaging her ankle with a scrap band Keerti broke into a cry "I'm sorry aunty. I'm so much trouble..." Mira took her in a hug and shushed her..."Kids are never a trouble for parents...you are like a daughter to me...disregard such thoughts from your mind..." and once again she was reminded..."One is loved because one is loved. No reason is needed for loving"...
_Invincible_ thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
hmmm

so sharan and kits bonding well...😕
myra aunty is such a sweetheart and obviously wen she is so good to adopted kids den same wid kits...she treats her as her own child...she is an amazing lady...


missing ROHAN....😔
Sigma thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
Are you making this a love triangle now, I prefer Rohan so far but looks like Kits has an instant connection with Sharan
JayaR thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
hhhmmm so Kits and Sharan...huh??? 😍

After a lot of thinking...I think I would prefer Rohan over Sharan...not that Sharan is not a good guy...but still ...IDK...but i want Rohan...

and Mira...aww she is so adorable...I actually loved the last segment a lot...Mira consoling Keerti...and their bonding...
311578 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
Truth is...likhte likte meri neeyat bigad gayi and I fell in love with Rohan. So I decided lets try Sharan-Keerti and reserve Rohan for me 😈
_Invincible_ thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dolphinUSA

Truth is...likhte likte meri neeyat bigad gayi and I fell in love with Rohan. So I decided lets try Sharan-Keerti and reserve Rohan for me 😈



SUPER Dislike😡
Nanthini9 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
Grt FF! I read all the part in one go this morning :D Reading in bed = Grt start to my Sunday morning!! At first I was pretty skeptical about reading a story where I could not put a face to the characters (got used to the countless FF here :D) but now I realize that not having a predetermined personality attached to each of the characters allow for my imagination to soar! (not quite sure if that makes sense heheh)

Coming to the characters: I love Rohan. I have developed a huge i mean enormous crush on his guy! He is so cute n caring - an ideal man for sure (unless you are to unleash some unpredicted twist on us) 😵

Simi - she is a grt roommate! Im glad she and Krit are getting along really well. Her mission Rookie is soo funny - esp the shopping scene lol but her past is so harsh 😒

Adi - Im glad he is there for Simi. Very cute BF for sure! Though I think faking a break up to surprise your GF is not the greatest idea 😉

n finally Krit - I like her simplicity. I could relate to her shyness and traditional ways. Her reaction to Rohan is understandable n Im glad Rohan is not rushing her. I think we are in a for a better understanding of her character once we know her past. Her nightmares indicate something horrible - I just hope it is not terribly bad 😔

n finally thank you sooo much for this grt story! Can't wait for the nxt update. n I think this is one of my longest comments lol

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz

7 months ago

In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2) In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2)

Siggi by Sandhya (@sevenstreaks) (P.S this was my pitching picture to the production houses - which Sandy had done for me a couple of years...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: minakrish

8 years ago

One Girl. A Hundred Journeys.|Mrina's Index

Hello people, This is me, Mrinalini , aka Mrina or Mina . And here is the Index of my stories. Now it would be easier for you all to find my...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: zajedno

7 months ago

How long does it take you to get to know the person next to you???

How long does it take to see her true face? Are all people the same? These are all questions constantly in my head. What happens to the human...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".