Originally posted by: esha143
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Part 23
Since I haven't reserved I'll give my comments here...
So glad to see Maan awake finally...but then the thing that everyone had been dreading...his paralysis attack..it happened ...😭...n he knew it
i know it happened...followed ur words and wrote what i had planned...i was scared to update it knowing everyone's reaction...but i lived through it 😆 ...how is she gonna face him...
It's going to take a lot because there are two bodies but one soul...one is just as affected with the other's pain
he takes so much pride in himself being The MSK...he needs a lot of courage to accept the truth n help himself to be healthy again...I hope he won't drown himself in bitterness n self-pity...
It's taken a pretty hard blow on him...he is MSK after all...but that also means that he will never be weak for long😊
n Geet n his family are always there to support him with their love..
yup...they are there...at every step
.have to read part 24 now to see what u did to him...going there...😆
hopefully u are happier with the next one
Part 24
Aww...see i knew it that Maan will feel like that..
i told you already...at times...u understand our characters better than we do..
he sought comfort from his Daadi at first...but yes only a mother can give him the needed emotional support above all...
I was actually really emotional writing that scene...i don'y know why...but no matter how old a child get...he is still a child for his mother and Dadi ma has been his mother in every way...so i tried to show their bond😳
he needs to be somewhat strong to face his love in that condition n so he took that support from his Daadi n he was able to face Geet after that...their interaction is so sweet...both trying to be each other's support...I hope this won't last long... n he'll be back to his former self...
i like the positivity you have eshu..things will get back to how they were sooner than later😊
lovely update though its still sad...I'm looking forward to see happy updates soon...n also romantic ones...😆
Haha...u spoke too soon😆...there is some romance in the next one😳
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