When U Say Nothing At All, MN, Pt 7 Pg27 19Jun - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
Aha, howdy?

Okay, You-Know-Who is a star and you give her chances to get smugger, fantastic. 🐷

I take time in putting my marbles right and editing my reserves on stories because I tend to cut myself off halfway, which is why I am not going to read this unless I am absolutely in my Mayank-Nupur mode. I'm an interesting reader, I know but I can make you wait. *and I can talk shit*

But, um, when I read it, I am usually left in a how-did-this-end vertigo! I like reading this, soothes me, soothes you. I beseech this independent and peaceful sensation when I read this or when I go through certain well written takes on MJHT from MJHT's archive up here. Thanks for this one, DD. I have settled for this abbreviation for you.

Peace
Kankshita
Edited by -Kanky- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72

Edit:

Okay I was going to go back and do like a detailed comment on all 4 chapters but that would take me some time, so I thought I would make a general comment for now. Seriously I'm LOVING IT! First of all, I love the twist (MayUr didn't confess)! Though I loved their confession, I love this too..lol. Second, I'm loving ur narration. The first pov from Mayank's and Nupur's and then sometimes 3rd pov...it's really superb! Really connects us to the characters. And ur recap of the past takes me back to those beautiful days of their relationship! The twist makes it even better! I can't wait for the next part! Hope ur speed of updating continues to be the same 😃 😳
Thanks for the pms! 🤗
Edited by Ishita16 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
*jumping in excitement* RESERVED!!!😃

edited!!!
u r loving my comments??😳 thank u.. dats so sweet😳🤗

sigh!!😍😍
I can sooo see Nupur taking care of Mayank, and no wonder she is an angel to his life😳

Devdas II???🤣🤣
Somebody's taking inspiration from the two most filmy persons in his life😆.. his maa and HIS Nupur😳😆
and he has already started dreading the time when he marries Nupur and all three stay together😆.. okay, I must say this, I so so sooo wanted them to stay together... but ugghh!! it didn't happen😡.. sorry for getting carried away😳

sigh!! Nupur's thoughts!! haaye.. so totally Nupurish😆😆.. thinking about Mayank and blushing😳😆... and then totally getting all straight and shifting gears to the Jhaansi Ki Rani mode (or Morena Express mode, whatever you think😆) for Ash and Rohan😆

but the silence at the end!!😍 i could totally totally imagine Mayank's expressions at the other end😍😆

eagerly waiting for the next part😃😃😃

~jiya~
Edited by jiya_angel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
Oh it was fabulous update dear - I just loved it and seriously I want to keep reading what's going in their brains - My God, and Mayank says Nupur talks too much - duh, what is he doing then? Going on and on ... Haha ... no but seriously this is amazing I especially loved the way you added Akanksha's You-Know-Who here - that was the cherry over the cake haha ... Both dreaming of getting married and I loved Nupur's plan and OMG at the end Mayank's silence was too good ... You are one wonderful writer - continue soon!!!

God bless,
Jaee D. Rathore
Edited by JaeeDevRathore - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
This is JUST extra -ordinary stuff!! .. i was smiling and blushing ,.. 😳 .. and well nupur's thoughts about shilpla aunty made me nostalgic for God -knows What reason .. i just pray no one ever loses on their parents ..

and nupur taking care of mayank.. 😍
.. it would have a treat to watch .. we surely need to know MORE!! 😆 .. and samrat's realization! 🤣 .. don't even let me get started on that!! ..🥱 🤣

excellent di!! .. cont ..s oon.. 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I've edited my comment on p.11
Will comment in more detail later : )
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome part Divz di 🤗

i love the way ur writing it ... both of them expressing their own pov :)
btw i wud not mind Nupur brain washing Shilpa aunty into getting her and mayank married 😆 ... i wud love that 😆
i am so eargerly waiting to hear what mayank has to say ... its sth he can relate to falling in love with ur best friend 😍 ... so lets see what he says 😍
and i love the fact that ur updating frequently ... i wud love reading an update everyday :D
plz do continue soon :D
btw i know i am four parts too late 😆 ... but i love the title of ur FF ... one of my fav ronan keating songs 😍
Edited by swati05 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
both were fantabulous updates...
actually i read part 1 n 2 thru cell so dint comment dat time as i cud nt...*pout*
but i must say dat from the very 1st update i ws waiting 4 the next ones n now dey r here...
thanks 4 the pm..
Amrita 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ufff yeh nupur bhi naa accidently khus hi story keh di ofcourse my swthrt mayank wuld go silent loool
I am loving this stpry and nah u r nt goin fast at all !!!
Thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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eee...divz😃...u know u r getting all my blessin g these days fo rmaking me feel so happy each time i read ut update.sadaa sukhi reho... 😆
uff.Nupur & mayank.mayank & nupur.i donno what shroud i write abt them to describe how much i love them, specially in this FF...that i hvn't write before!!!!!!!
Mayank-finally here the sadu admit that he actually love this nautanki done by his mom & his nupur...hehe as if we donno that already! 😆itna bhav kha rehe tha...what he said?he wud better die rather than watching devdas II played by them infront of him?😆uff that was so mayank .we know how much he love this Nupur & his mom ganged up against him.& he is so sure abt marrying to Nupur already.😲& thinking what will happen after that? wah...😃 but hello.someone( i mean u,divz, coz u r the writer) remind him plz that first ,he at least need to tell the gal that he love her🤔 waise jaruri bhi nehi hai utna.when she is already planning how to Brainwash his mom to get married to him😆
u know here u made Nupur really rocking! not that i love our Nupur any less in the show.but this one i found a bit different ina way she is more sure abt what she wants in life...with all her Nupurshish things remain intact..ummm now i m not sure whether u get what i m trying to say here🤔.forget it, lets just say i love Nupur here😃
oh u just fulfilled another MN dreams of mine...mayank getting sick &Nupur taking care of her...hayee i love both mayank's & nupur's version of this scene..but obviuously Nupur's one with those blushes added extra spice to it...& i looved it😳 keep fulfilling My MN dreams divz!🤗
& well i just realized here in thsi FF rohan, ash even though they act stupid,they actually make me smile.i mean what happening? well i guess the case is whenever someone is with MN ( not in between MN ) i started liking them.* bias me...😆 & plz don't let mayank put ideas of copy rights into Nupur's head😳...mann her By god & some other statement.that i use .& I m sure other MN fans also use we will all go bankrupt😆 & these lines of urs abt sam's realization cracked me up big time.. 😆 What needs to happen for that realization to strike? Go to jail or something? i wish mjht cvs could read this!!!!!!!!😆
& at last the silence...😍...well i remember this happening in the show making mayank shocked & scared like hell when she asked this questions to him on phone...😆...so i m waiting to c what he do here? 😃
well divz.i realized even if i want , i can't write short comments for ur FFs..🤔..something is wrong with me.i like this so much that i love to write abt every single thing happened😆...waiting for day after tomorrow now.when u will update next !!!!!!! till then take care..& i m not saying this coz u said i m cute😆..but i really love u!!🤗
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i didn't read ur PM. just straight log in & came to this page.u were asking whether u should slow down ur update? like seriously? just keep updating, forget everything else..😳



Edited by Mou. - 14 years ago

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