Come back to me- An AR OS

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qt4ever

@qt4ever

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

A unique os!
Short & $weet!

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shaaz_91

@shaaz_91

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

hey
awesome one...
though it showed der pain of separation...but still luvd d way it waz described👍🏼
tc
shaaz

Edited by shaaz_91 - 14 years ago

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Rhea

@Rhea.KaJen

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Aah...
Amazing Priyanka!
Loved it!
Thnx for the PM!
Love
Rhea

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firoza malik

@dimpledsmile

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

hey..

awesome OS..

do write more...

n thanx 4 da PM!!!

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Zeenat

@-Zeenat-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

As Always, AMAZINGGG!!!

Lovee The Concept Yaaarr!!!! Thnxx for the PM & PLS Update SOOONN!

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558278

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

aww this was really sweet but mysteriouss it makes me sad thinking of armaan leaving for war...

does he come back? ahh is it up to our imaginations?

ima pretend he comes back fit and fine...

:-P

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Rabia Amla

@-RabiaKSGKaJen-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

OMAR <3 PRII <3 TOOO GOODD <3 IT WAS ONE UNIQUE OS..

I HAVE NOT READ ANY FF OF ARMAAN LEAVING FOR FOR..

HEART-TOUCHING <3 LOVED IT <3

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

wow! this one's beautiful! i absolutely loved it

there was this part that i was touched by, these lines

"Our hands touched as I felt a spurt of electric shock wavering in my body, I inhaled a deep breath sketching this moment, imprinting it in my heart. My body slowing down as his smile slowly dispersed while my white glove slipped out of my hand and engulfed itself in his palm.

Come Back to Me. I yelled."

these lines were beautiful, conveyed all the emotions that were required

cheers

Sonia

Edited by sonia_92 - 14 years ago