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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

congrats !!!!!!!!!! 4 ur new ff ...

awesome ...

interesting ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: tonyahk

OMG... oh girl! what i'm going to do with you? you are laughing for my senti scenes also 🤣

no dear thats my comment on 1st part

now i am going for 2nd one...
its intresting...whts actually going on...
whts there bet maaneet...

n ya now after reading other parts i will comment back

i thought itll b comedy but now its going in a serious mode...

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Malar

@mallu.crowe20

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

awesome
tooo good
waiting for further updates

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jenny

@ajenn

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

tonya u r back!!!
yeah!!! yippie yippie!! am so happy to receive another FF of urs..
I really loved ur previous FF but sadly u left it half way.
Dis is really a different from urs writing. Why so senti senti
But am sure ull b back wif ur funny trademark.. waiting for tat.
Wonder how u goin to plot it. Dis FF sounds vry serious.
Cos serious FF doesnt suit u.. It so not u... 😆
But i must say u proved me wrong. All d parts was mind blowing.
Esp d mandap part n d part Dev will b manhandling Geet.
i loved every line of Geet.
Keep updating. Am loving it.
Thx for d pM

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Abgina

@crazydevil87

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

interesting ff sweety...all d updates were awsome...thanks 4 d pm

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

hai
i completed all the other parts... they r just awesome
geet track is very interesting
can't wait 2 c maans reaction now
n waiting for future maaneet scene

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naamteeg

@naamteeg

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Hmmm, Tonya... interesting in many fronts...

- an FF instead of a SS

- a very dramatic start instead of a hilarious one

- long and descriptive updates instead of short and more dialogue ones

It is so different but amazingly good!!

It kept my mind on the edge.. it kept jumping from one conclusion to another. Never coming to the right conclusion😆 Here is how it went...

you: welcome to maan's wedding...in the mandap, maan is sitting next to the bride.

my mind: yes! Maan and Geet's wedding. Tonya is picking it up where she left of in her previous SS. So Geet is the bride!

you: suddenly a girl's face pops into his mind. maan is shocked and opens his eyes with a jerk

my mind: Must be Sameera his previous fiance who left him and ran away with his best friend and broke his heart... You see I have read a few other FFs🤣 So Geet is still the bride!

you: ye mujhe kya horah hai? why her face comes to my mind now? his heart beat quickens and he couldn't figure out what is happening to him.

my mind: hah? "his heart beat quickens"? It is a known fact only Geet can do this to Maan so the girl who popped into maan's mind is Geet! So Geet is not the bride. Then who is the bride??

you:dadima, jugnu mama, dev, anni and staff of Khurana Construtions all are happily enjoying the wedding proceedings.

my mind: If all the family and the KC gang is so happy about the wedding then Geet is the bride!

So this was the state of my mind till I got to part 2 and "Maan, I am your geet"😆

And then another roller coaster of who is telling the truth, why is Maan refusing to recognize her, why Geet so determined to convince everyone that they were married.

WHY? WHY? WHY? And then a big HOW popped into it!

HOW is Tonya going to turn this dramatic FF into a hilarious comedy?? HOW? HOW?

... my poor over heated mind😆 But it was just what it needed tonight.. a much needed distraction!

LOved it TOnya!!

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maansee

@maansee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

truly megical updates of our tonya... totally different from her style...mindblowing...

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

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Posted: 14 years ago

#79

senti wat senti

when something written under your name

it has to be

ha ha haaa

yes

this time mouth is also open with bang but not due to smile but due to shock

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teju

@teju2292

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Posted: 14 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: naamteeg
Hmmm, Tonya... interesting in many fronts...
- an FF instead of a SS
- a very dramatic start instead of a hilarious one
- long and descriptive updates instead of short and more dialogue ones

It is so different but amazingly good!!

It kept my mind on the edge.. it kept jumping from one conclusion to another. Never coming to the right conclusion😆 Here is how it went...

you: welcome to maan's wedding...in the mandap, maan is sitting next to the bride.
my mind: yes! Maan and Geet's wedding. Tonya is picking it up where she left of in her previous SS. So Geet is the bride!

you: suddenly a girl's face pops into his mind. maan is shocked and opens his eyes with a jerk
my mind: Must be Sameera his previous fiance who left him and ran away with his best friend and broke his heart... You see I have read a few other FFs🤣 So Geet is still the bride!

you: ye mujhe kya horah hai? why her face comes to my mind now? his heart beat quickens and he couldn't figure out what is happening to him.
my mind: hah? "his heart beat quickens"? It is a known fact only Geet can do this to Maan so the girl who popped into maan's mind is Geet! So Geet is not the bride. Then who is the bride??

you:dadima, jugnu mama, dev, anni and staff of Khurana Construtions all are happily enjoying the wedding proceedings.
my mind: If all the family and the KC gang is so happy about the wedding then Geet is the bride!

So this was the state of my mind till I got to part 2 and "Maan, I am your geet"😆

And then another roller coaster of who is telling the truth, why is Maan refusing to recognize her, why Geet so determined to convince everyone that they were married.

WHY? WHY? WHY? And then a big HOW popped into it!
HOW is Tonya going to turn this dramatic FF into a hilarious comedy?? HOW? HOW?
... my poor over heated mind😆 But it was just what it needed tonight.. a much needed distraction!

LOved it TOnya!!

omg naamteeg...
first telling u i m waiting to see ur comment yaar...
tonya's ff without our comments...hmm...NOT HAPPENING...hain na...😉

so,this time tonya started an emo drama...but u totally changed in to a comedy one...🤣
cant stop laughing after seeing ur comment dear...🤣
and if saying about my mind...its totally happy when heard about weeding even i too thought that bride is geet...and shocked to hell when saw the word.."i m ur geet"
my mind is stopped..its blank yaar...😲
and when maan asked her "who r u"
omg...dont ask me...i feel like..."what the hell is going on??? maan doesnt know GEET!!!!!"
THIS TIME MY SHOCK HAS NO LIMIT...😲😲
😲they married even before ff starts thats awesome...
but maan prepared for another wedding after marrying geet...this was a triple shock...i feel like i touched 10000 volts current.😲😲😲😆

now...after reading all the parts...i feel like...
"TONYAAA...WHERE R U? WAT HAPPENED NEXT?????""""

hmmm...so wat should i say now????

😆😲😆😲

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