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Tyro

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

awesome part...👏

thats so sweet of mahi to make the video with all the messages...

all the couples were lovely...

but where is mahi...???

continue soon...

PS -- updated my comment on page 1

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Hinal.94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

PART 4

Maan searched the whole house but did not find Mahi.Then he went to the terrace to check there n saw Mahi sitting there with her teddy Softy n talking t it.Maan sighed in relief n then he saw that Mahi was crying so he ran to her n took her in his arms.

He soothingly rubbed her back so that shewould calm doen.After sometime Mahi calmed down n he asked her worriedly:"Shona aap kyu ro rahi ho?"

Mahi:"Woh papa 'sob' mujhe na Sweetu aur 'sob' MK ki yaad agayi 'sob' mama ko aapni friends ko milte dekh 'sob' karke aur aaj Sweetu aur MK se baat bhi nahi huvi na 'sob'"

Maan:"Olle mera baby.Shona aap mujhe bata de thi mein aapko Sweetu se baat karva deta"

Mahi:"Nahi papa 'sob' aap aaj subah se Shilpa maasi ki shaadi se tayari mein 'sob' busy the aur waise bhi mein unko todhi der mein 'sob' phone karne wali thi"

Maan:"Thik hai hum abhi Sweetu se baat karte hai.Thik hai".

saying so he made Mahi sit on the slan n took out his mobile n dialed Sweetu's house number n gave to Mahi.

Mahi then started talking to Sweetu n she told about her day n the surprise n all other things.

Meanwhile Maan was listening to her talks n lovingly caressing her face.

After Mahi finished her phone call, she gave the mobile back to Maan n then kissed his cheeks n hugged him n said:"U r the best papa in the world.I love u papa"

Maan:"N u r the world's best daughter n I love u too"

He then carried Mahi n turned towards the door n saw that Geet was smiling with tears in her eyes.

She went near them n took Mahi from Maan's arms n kissed all over her face.

Mahi:"Mama aap ro kyu rahi ho?"

Geet:"Kuch nahi Shona"

Maan understanding Geet's anxiety hugged them both.Then they went down n then Shilpa hugged Mahi n then told:"Thank u so much baby for the surprise.I loved it sooo much"

Mahi:"Maasi thank u mujhe nahi sab ko boliye kyunki agar yeh nahi aate toh ye surprise hi nahi hota"

Ansah:"Arre Mahi ye sab toh tunhara plan tha.Hum sab toh tere plan ko sunne ke baad hi yaha aane ka plan kiya"

Jyoti:"Ha Mahi hum sab toh yaha tumhare bulane pe hi aaye hai.Warna yaha par koi ha jisse aapni friends ki parwa tak nahi hai aur aapni behen ki shaadi ke liye bhi nahi bulaya hume"

Geet:"Arre Jyo gussa kyu ho rahi hai?Tunne hi toh kaha tha ke tu Mumbai ja rahi hai aapne bhai ke saath"

Jyoti:"Geeet mein tujhe ye baat isliye baati thi kyunki Mahi ne mujhe phele hi ye plan bata diya tha aur tujhe plan na pata chale karke tujhe jhoot bola tha par tu invitation card nahi bhej sakti thi kya?"

N the usual fight started between the two.The others rolled their eyes n after 5 mins Rakhi di stopped them n said:"Geet aur jyoti bas karo yaar.Tum dono toh kahe pe bi shuru ho jaati ho.Arre Geet tujhe toh yaad hona chailye na ke teri 8 saal ki beti hai aur aaj teri choti behen ki shaadi hai"

Hearing this Geet made a pouting face n seeing that Jyoti couldn't resist n laughed n hugged her.

Seeing Her Jyo Maasi hugging her Mama,Mahi also went n hugged both of them.

PRECAP-

Some flashbacks about Geet's life

Part 5 - Pg 9

Edited by hinal_maaneet - 14 years ago

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ninavi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

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Hima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

The update was wonderful hinal.
Mahi crying to talk to sweetu was soo sweet.
dad daughter bonding was good too.
Jyo and Geet's fight and Rakhi pacifying them was super.
Thats what rakhi always does right.
very nice part hinal
thanks for trhe PM

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POOJA KAMAL SHETH

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Awesome lovely n muah wowww u included us that's was too goodn that mothers day thing was fab

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29priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

lovely parts..😃

Edited by priyanki - 14 years ago

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RageOfAnAngel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

That was seriously so sweet 😳

Loved the scene ⭐️

Thanks for pm ...

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504887

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

awesome parts
mahi is so cute
loved geets fight and how maan manaofied mahi
btw who is sweetu
thnx 4 d pm

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gangesegb

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

aww. so sweet...

just loved it...

plz do cont soon...

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#50

hi hinal
beautiful part.loved it. enjoyed it lots.
brilliant update.
thanks for adding us all.
thanks a lot darling
loved father daughter bonding.so cute and sweet.
loved mahi , she is so sweet and cute.
muhhha and a big hug to u 🤗
continue soon.

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