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hamini_yash thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Such a lovely update . It felt good how Naini is yearned for abhi's closeness yet not ready to acknowledge the fact. Hope she opens up and all is well by morning.
As for Geet ,happiness is never far when Maan is near her. Hope she never goes back to frisco and Maan stops being silent around her.
I think the story is really going very good .
Thanks for the update
hope you keep writing like this.
Once again , please dont finish this story.
You might think i am repeating time and again the same thing but this story is really close to my heart.
It always make me feel Hot chocolate.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: hamini_yash

Such a lovely update . It felt good how Naini is yearned for abhi's closeness yet not ready to acknowledge the fact. Hope she opens up and all is well by morning.

As for Geet ,happiness is never far when Maan is near her. Hope she never goes back to frisco and Maan stops being silent around her.
I think the story is really going very good .
Thanks for the update
hope you keep writing like this.
Once again , please dont finish this story.
You might think i am repeating time and again the same thing but this story is really close to my heart.
It always make me feel Hot chocolate.


Hot Chocolate right back at you...Do I need to say more. THANKS gurl.
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Posted: 14 years ago
My heart goes out to Naini...

Touch my face gently, Wipe these tears away
Kiss all of my scars, Tell me they won't stay

Come up behind me, And wrap your arms around my waist
Grab my hand, When I walk away

Because when I turn away, I'm waiting for you
To tell me to stay, If you don't
I will just end up this way

Memories are killing me, Just the thought of you
Tears stream down my face, This can't be true

My life was perfect, I'm not kidding you
I had a picture perfect family, And friends who were true
I had people who loved me, And most of all I had you

Now I'm left in the cold, Having to comfort myself
I just wish he would realize, I could use some help.

No I don't wanna talk about it, But I hug will do
I don't want to talk, I just want to be held by you

Hours will pass, But I don't mind
Imagining being in your arms, Will be the rest of my life

~by Scarlet Shay
Edited by night13 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
It gave a warm cozy feeling to me...something quite unexpected as in the update!
I loved every part of it...and sigh the poor girl seems to have suffered a lot...hope the grey clouds will descend and the sun shine brightly ...but is Rishab really drunk or is he just playing along..?? Feeling he played along but kya pata :D..Whatever be the case, at least Naini is acknowledging him again and their relationship too!

Loved this one...and yes it does give a Hot Chocolate feeling ! :)

Take Care.
Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow...so many parts...i am so late in commenting...well gettting back to my comments...😆


Part 89--1 --

maan understands her pain now...n is scared abt her...worried abt her...

he really loves his sis...just needed a push...provided by his wife of course...😉

love geet n her calls...😆it really gets him mad n annoyed but i bet he wouldnt have it any other way...😳

loved the talk between bro n sis...though sometimes they were talking indirectly...but understood each other well...


Part 89 --2--

daadi is waiting for the good news...😆...lekin abhi nahi...

all on the call...planning for naini...so nice...they all want her to be happy...

maan bought it in naini's name...aww...rishabh has to agree now as he too wants to be close to her...but not sure how to let it all in the open...

maan knew hat to say...he does know his sis...😳


Part 90 --

both r missing each other...n thinking of spending time together...

she came n he sensed the change...😳

not again...a wonderful moment...now destroyed as both were in a rush...one to complete the work n the other to make himself immersed in work...

naini is too good...she wanted to give them time alone so that they can enjoy each other's company...daadi is also a sweetheart...understanding all this...

omg...strip...😲...what was he planning to do...😆

glad that naini asked n he answered...though not the answers i was expecting...but different ones...

rishabh is here to stay...to bring her back...to love her...to never leave her again...

It was again showing their disconnect in how they bonded with each other.👏

they surely know how to tease each other...first maan with the messages n then geet ...uff...



PS -- will comment on the rest later...

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awsome prts,maan n geet reached a newlevel in their relationship,luvd the sensual n passionate prt
u hav amazing writing skills,
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome!!!
So now even Rishab has learnt it... should i say he is a tease 😉 I thought that was Maan... 😆
Loved it Hasini... Thanks for the beautiful part...
mandymore thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wonderful prt,its grt that couples r talkng abt themself rather worrying abt others,omg dev s gay n poor geet all the while blamed herslf.nice prt
mandymore thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice prt,naini want him but nt acceptng it but she crave 4 him hope she make right decision abt future of their reltn
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Posted: 14 years ago
Even though it was a struggle and conflict for Naini to be in that state, it was really very adorable to read and picture.

Beautifully written, each and every sentence!

And the last four lines were absolutely the best part.
Edited by jazzerette - 14 years ago

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