Maaneet OS-The Conspiracy! Part 4 On Pg 21

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sweet scorpio

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

plzzz continue and do pm me next time!

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

awesome ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

hiii

awesome os

loved it

poor geet

plz dont separate maaneet

con soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Nice one Mayu... plzz continue...

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-MansiKohli-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

wow...mayu that was a great os...👏

loved it...

beautiful potrayal of geet's agony and distress.

could not have been written more beautifully...

bravo !!mayu bravo!!!👏

good job!!keep it up.

do add me to the pm list dear.

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tanu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Lovely writing dear... ...thanks a lot for the PM..! Sorry for being a lil late to reply.. but thoroughly enjoyed.. ❤️

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Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: -afsha-
That was fab
Loved it

Continue soon

Thanks Afsha🤗

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Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: -afsha-
That was fab
Loved it

Continue soon

Thanks Afsha🤗

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Mayuuu

Originally posted by: NaGeSwArI
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Thanks MK🤗

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Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva
awesome
loved it
plzzz con this
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
Xxx

Hey Thanks so much!🤗

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Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: moonlight44
hey its good do continue!!!

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Mayuuu

Originally posted by: sweet cherry
it was amazing
do continue

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Originally posted by: hinal_maaneet
Mayu
loved it n plzzz continue

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-Sangs-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#40

Mayuuu 🤗

OMG...Loved the concept...But why this sad sad story...Anyways loved it..As usual you are a fantastic writer..loved the way you portrayed Geet's emotions..

She was ready to go the temple; the mosque; even the church just to plead to the Almighty that save my Maan ..

So aptly put..when a loved one is in trouble or pain, we think of the Almighty who is present in various forms..we pray to each and every god present on Earth.

The madness in her voice and the loss of her life was clearly visible;

Wow...loved the emotion and usage of words here..

Must say Mayu..you are amazing with writing, you can create wonders..love the way you feel each and every word and then write it down. please do continue..or I will take danda in my hand and run behind you..Love you...

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