Abhiya FF: Entwined Bk-1 .Ended. - Page 76

Originally posted by: pari_smart

Awesome update... loved it... I hope Piya accepts Abhay... continue soon

Thank you.

i m so sry shalini, i don't knw how i missed commenting on last part, actually i read last part through my cell n thought of commenting, later n then forgot...seriously sorry dearie

Originally posted by: pkyek55

<font size="5">Awesome <font color="#000033">Update,,</font><font color="#0000ff">N d bathtub scene was Awesome i loVed it...Waiting 2 c Pia's reaction when she knows abt abhay n his family,,,,,</font><font color="#990000">Hope Pia accepts Abhay!!!</font><font color="#6600ff">Update d next chapter Soon..</font></font>

<font color="#ff3300" size="5">Continue SOON,,,</font>

<font size="5" color="#ff0000">pLz Pm me when u UPDATE d NEXT</font>

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Originally posted by: pari_smart

Awesome update... loved it... I hope Piya accepts Abhay... continue soon

Thank you. Add me to your buddy list for PMs.

wow wonderful it was gr8t loved it 👏 👏

hei shalini,
that was wonderful..in a way coz vansh wont trouble them again..
felt bad for pia as she had to see all these..she never expected this from abhay even though she knows abt vansh..she needs some time to get out of this shock n reason abt abay to herself..hope she gets around soon..i dont want her to feel devastated for long n feel lonely as if there is no one for her..
continue soon..

awesome update. loved it
what an action packed update...!
well written !!
its a MAHA EPISODE. .hehe
pia would need time to sink all those harsh truth. .but i hope she accepts abhay soon. .
Yuppee. .vansh is dead! I'm so happy!
Thanks for the pm. .continue soon
tc

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">Thank God Vansh is dead,</font>

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">but Pia saw the truth this way.😲</font>

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">what's she gonna do now? how long will it take for her to accept abhay?</font>

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">and why is she fainting?😉</font>

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">btw a nice update</font>

Finally I killed Vansh! Hahahahaha!! It'll be hard for Pia to handle Abhay's reality.

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

<font color="#660099">i m so sry shalini, i don't knw how i missed commenting on last part, actually i read last part through my cell n thought of commenting, later n then forgot...seriously sorry dearie</font>

<font color="#660099">ok now coming to today's part...</font>

<font color="#660099">it was awesome...very well written, bt heart wrenching...reli last scne was enough to bring back us to reality...😭😭😭</font>

<font color="#660099">i knw pia is human n d way she reacted was obvious n xcepting her to behave normally is something "supernatural"...nw i m just hoping dat pia wl try to accept d fact...</font>

<font color="#660099">man, wat abt abhay😭...he might av gone through 1000 deaths , after pia's reaction...</font>

<font color="#660099">n vansh😡😡😡...even his death didn't bring peace in abhay-pia's life...!!!</font>

<font color="#660099">shalini dat was fab update...</font>

<font color="#660099">continue soon...</font>

<font color="#660099">luv</font>

<font color="#660099">heena</font>

It's okay Heena! No need for sorries. Pia's gonna be shocked 'cause she'll feel everyone betrayed her and Abhay's will be sadder.

Originally posted by: pallavisarkar

wow wonderful it was gr8t loved it 👏👏

updt soon eager to know what will pia do next

dont make them separate for long

Thank you! I'll update soon.

Originally posted by: RB81

hei shalini,
that was wonderful..in a way coz vansh wont trouble them again..
felt bad for pia as she had to see all these..she never expected this from abhay even though she knows abt vansh..she needs some time to get out of this shock n reason abt abay to herself..hope she gets around soon..i dont want her to feel devastated for long n feel lonely as if there is no one for her..
continue soon..

Thanks Ramani! It's a turning point for Pia so let's see how the story extends. I have thought a little but still loads left.