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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter 14 A Devil Confessions

Exactly one and half year ago,

He called her to come to their regular temple which they visited together once in a whilst.

This same place,

She reached to the temple, it was raining like it never rained before, roads were flooded and sky was crying. Her mom told her not to go but she wanted to visit temple, that's what she told to her mom.

She went and was waiting for him; there he was, in blue transparent shirt and black jeans. His hot chiseled muscles were beaming from his shirt.

He was walking slowly with bouquet of roses in his hand. She was surprised to see roses as he'd never given her roses before. She loved orchids more than roses though.

He was definitely conveying some traditional sign by coming up with blood red roses.

She waved her hands and he just smiled. She sensed a different beam in his eyes but she couldn't figure out the reason behind that flicker.

His body was drenched in rain but he didn't care. He made up his mind with something and no matter what happened with world today, he would perform his act.

He bent on his knees, with flowers in his hand and ring was in his pocket, and conveyed those things which didn't mean anything to her today.

He said, "Love is an understatement if I use that word for my feelings. Beauty is an understatement if I say you are beautiful, I am an understatement if I compare myself with you, you are beyond everything and every feeling. Let's not waste this life with such understatements and let's go beyond than that."

She was standing like a statue, like some movie was playing in front of her eyes and she was enjoying every bit of it. She was also in love with that damn killer personality.

He continued with glittered eyes, "You are everything to me, I was in love with you since the day I saw you first time, dancing in the rain, you stole my heart since that day, I was in love with you since our first lunch together, I was in love with you since our first project together, I was in love with you since our first teasing. I never knew that I could describe feelings well, but whenever you ran into my mind, I can be the world most renowned poet. I brought these red roses because I thought if I wouldn't be able to describe my feelings than these roses will do justice to my feeling. You are like a fancy enchanting alcohol to me. Whenever you ran in my mind or in front of my eyes, I raced to the different world'''''''the world of inexplicable emotions."

Nonchalantly, she also bent down holding his hand in her hands. Her eyes were threatened with unshed tears.

And he broke the world by his final statement, "Will you spend your entire life with me? Think before committing, as I don't want only this life but coming all the unborn lives also. I want every life of yours with me and me only." Last word came out more authoritatively than request.

She wasn't able to utter a word; just a brief whisper came out of her mouth, "YES"

He pretended that he didn't hear and asked her what she said.

She hugged him instantly and whispered near his ear lobe, "Yes, I want to marry you. I only want to be with you. My heart and soul are only yours. I imagined this moment hundreds of times in my mind but I never knew that I could be so speechless when it finally happened."

Sejal

How was it? Did you enjoy this journey so far? Your comments can encourage me to write more and to write sooner.

Edited by Asha2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... loved part 13 n 14 ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice n emotional update...
do continue...
thanx 4 pm...
chao
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely Updates
Cont Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the Pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great updates! Loved both parts! Can't wait to read more! Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful...i just loved it...

continue soon n thnxxx for the pm...

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Posted: 14 years ago
do update soon,
maan's proposal was amazing
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome updates...
pretty emotional...
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow...
Wonderful update yar...
Luved it...
Omg geet said yes...ahhh feelin' happy happu...lolz
Waiting fr nxt...
Thnx fr pm...

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