Destiny's Play - A Game- Note -PG 58-9/14

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#171

Sej pls do not separate our Maan and Geet pls 😭

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nahtani88

@nahtani88

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#172

lovely update
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm

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seemamary

@seemamary

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#173

Awesome yaar and good to hear you are fit and fine, want to see soon in present maan and geet together.

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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#174

they finally met...it seemed so magical the way they r behaving...am loving it...continue soon n thnx...

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@mitzi11

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#175

lovely part

love it

ty 4 pm

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Lovepreet Kaur

@--love--

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#176

awesome update
n m rlly sorry fr nt been able to comment recently
n rlly thanx for sending pm continuosly
now m free
so i ll b commenting without any prob
waiting fr ur nxt update

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shreya

@.Lilith.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#177

Sorry 4 la8 comments...

Comin 2 the part...well u r a superb writer-no doubt on that.

So far you've portrayed the anguish,turmoil and frustrations of the 2 chars very brilliantly🤗

Want 2 know what happnd wid mann??? MSK and helplessness seem really surprising!!!

Cont soon😊

Love

Shreya

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JayaR

@JayaR

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#178

Sejal...How meticulously you have described Maan...

If only he was in front of me...then I would have eaten him Raw...

Gosh!!! they way you described him in details... it was awesome...

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504887

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#179

wooo wat a zoot awesome updt
lolz geet thot maan to b 40 he he
loved how they were stealing glances at each other
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#180

till part 6
wow nice story...
but they are separated...
so painful...
wonder what happened...
cont soon and plz add me to ur pm list...
sent the buddy inivte...
pm me...