Destiny's Play - A Game- Note -PG 58-9/14 - Page 14

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update
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awesome updt
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geet regretted 4 loving maan?
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Hey Sejal...

the updates are really becoming sad...day by day...

I'm crying my eyes out yaar...
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sad sad part
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geet was against love
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nice update... geetz dark past was very well written... wat abt maan?? he loves her to d core... den y d hell hez marrying some one else??
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very sad update...beautifully written, Please update soon n thanks 4 da pm
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wow brilliantly written.. OMG geet regretting luving maan!!!! continue soon
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Chapter 5: Cruel Truth

Coming back to present:

"How could he marry with someone else? How could he see his future with someone else? How could he move on? How could he forget their love?"She wanted to know. She wanted all the answers from him. He never cared to answer her. How can he do that?

She knew that he was the only one for her and she knew that he also felt the same for her. She knew that they were destined to meet and no one could complement each other like the way they could. The vehemence of his eyes made her vulnerable all the time. She'd trusted him blindly like she could surrender herself on his one request. Nothing had existed beyond their love on the earth.

Even though she'd been a shy girl, but she could break all the barricades of inhibitions to reach out to him. The only barricade she was afraid of was her own shield. She was an introvert person and she'd always taken more than enough time to open up to anyone. Once her shield was open, the entire world couldn't stop her to act upon her desire.

She'd been always quite observant person. Sometimes her eyes spoke and sometimes her expressions spoke. In any case, she'd been silent on most fronts. She'd observed very soon about his feelings for her. She'd observed very soon how their souls were connected with each other. She'd observed very soon that they shared different personality. She'd observed very soon, despite of having different personalities, how deep they were connected with each other.

She'd observed his love and his helplessness when he left her. She wished if she wouldn't be so observant. It was like he was an open book in front of her and she could just turn pages of his life. It was the reason she wasn't able to move on from him. She couldn't just forget him because she had sensed his helplessness. She'd observed that his every nerve was screaming with pain when he left her.

He was classy in his approach towards the world and she was gentle in her approach towards the world. His atrocious and disciplined nature was always apparent. To her, she got into the inner of his soul, where his soul was vulnerable to her soul.

It didn't matter how much hatred she endured from him, but she gave him only LOVE.

Even if God would come to her and asked her to move on, she would say NO. Her love was not some marketable product which she could trade with anyone. She knew she couldn't fall in love again. She was only made for him. Her each nerve, each blood drop, each heartbeat, each body part was molded for him only. Deep down in her heart, she knew that he was also made only for her.

She was hungry for his love. She was still waiting for her love. She had deep expectations that he would come back breaking all barriers like some Bollywood hero does all the time.

How could he marry to x, y or z? Whatever the name of that girl? Humm... It was some Sameera. Sameera could never enter to his soul. It was only Geet's right. It was Geet's love if she wanted she could ask for her love with right on him. Could she try to act upon her rights on him?

At the same time, the popular sentence reverberated in her mind, 'If there is no love then there is no right." He said that he was no longer in love with her. Did she still have right on him?

Hope you will enjoy!

Do you want me to continue this FF? Let me know. This is still the beginning of FF, we have to go really far, only if you are interested.

Sejal

Edited by Asha2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part dear...

continue this FF we are ready to read...
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