Love story with a strange twist:Maaneet FF Climax - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
Hmmm wow nice twist...so will Geet love Maan now??..chalo lets see what's in store for us!!!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82

Love story with a strange twist Part 4

Maan rings up Muskaan:Maan speaking..
Mus:Maan?You forgave me?
M:I want to meet you.We talk later.
He cuts the phone.

Maan and Muskaan meet each other.
Mus:Maan!
Unexpectedly with anger he pulls her towards him.
M:You want to know whether i have forgiven you.Right?Listen..i can't forgive you.I'm going to reveal the truth to others.
Muskaan is shocked:What?
M:I'm going to reveal it to Dev and Geet.I will tell them that you rejected me as you love Dev.You will also come with me to tell them the truth.
Mus:No..
M:Why not?
He shoves her.
Mus:Please Maan..don't do that.Geet should never know this.If Dev comes to know this,it will spoil their married life itself.
M:I don't want to hear anything.Others should know your true colour.
Mus:Maan please..i told you.I did'nt do this intentionally.Love happens automatically.It's not an emotion which can be controlled.
M:Yes.Love is not an emotion which can be controlled.So i still love you.
She is shocked:Maan!
He pulls her towards him rudely:But at the same time i hate you.Because you cheated on me.
He grabs her hand and walks to his house.
Mus:Maan..please..
Her words fall on his dead ears.
They reach Maan's house.Dev and Geet come.They smile at them.
D:Maan and Muskaan..good thing that our parents are not here.She feels that her daughter in law should not enter this house before grihpravesh.
M:Daughter in law?Muskaan?How do you know that Muskaan will be her daughter in law?
Dev and Geet are confused.
D:What are you saying Maan?
M:What if Muskaan reject me before marriage?
Muskaan sweats due to tension.Dev and Geet are ptrified.
G:What is the matter?
M:There is a big problem between us.
Geet is tense:What is the problem?
Muskaan is tense.
Slowly Maan smiles and his smile turns to laughter.
M:I was just kidding.Just to scare you both.Today is fool's day.
Dev and Geet also laugh.
D:Fool's day..you really made us fools.
Muskaan is relieved.
Maan stares at Muskaan.She is scared.

Geet and Muskaan are in Geet's room.
G:Is everything ok?
Mus:Don't worry.Everything is ok.
G:Are you sure?
Mus:Yes.
G:I really got scared when Maan talked like that.When he said he was fooling us only i got relief.Still i fear.
Mus:Nothing to worry about.
Geet smiles:I want you to be happy with Maan.I'm sure that Maan is perfect for you.
Muskaan smiles slightly.

Maan is sitting outside.Muskaan goes near him.
Mus:Thanks.
He raises his eyes and looks at her.
M:For what?
Mus:For not telling them the truth.
Maan stands up and goes near her.
M:Do you know why i did'nt tell them the truth?
She is silent.He makes her sit on the chair.He sits along with her.He caresses her face with his fingers.Muskaan is shocked as she never expected him to be soft so fast.His fingers go through her face slowly.His heart sings for her:
mujhe hak hai tujhako jee barake main dekhu
mujhe hak hai bas yuhi dejhataa jaau
mujhe hak hai...{Vivah}.
She can't react.
M:Because i love you.I don't want to spoil your image.
She just keeps looking into his eyes which are filled up with emotion.

Suddenly he bursts into tears.
M:Why don;t you love you Muskaan?
Muskaan feels sad.
She thinks:I'm sorry Maan.I just love Dev.But i want to make you happy.I will try to be a good wife.But to remove Dev from my heart is just impossible.

Dev,Geet,Maan and Muskaan for a party.
Geet has worn a green designer saree.Muskaan has worn a black and red coloured salwar kameez which has golden designs.
The song 'Labon ko Labon pe sajao
Kya ho tum mujhe abb batao
Labon ko Labon pe sajao
Kya ho tum mujhe abb batao

Tod do khud ko tum
Baanhon mein meri
Baanhon mein meri
Baanhon mein meri
Baanhon mein meri

Tere ehsaasson mein Bheege lamhato mein
Mujhko doobati tishnagi si hain
Teri adao se dilkash khatao se
In lamho mein zindagi si hai
Haya ko zara bhool jao
Mere hi tarah pesh aao

hone do khud ko tum meri tum
Raaton mein

Labon ko Labon pe sajao
Kya ho tum mujhe abb batao
Labon ko Labon pe sajao
Kya ho tum mujhe abb batao..{Bhool Bhulaiyaa}is going on.
Dev and Geet dance.Geet sees Muskaan and Maan simply standing there.Geet goes near them:Hey..why you both are not dancing?Usually MUskaan loves dancing at parties.Today what happened?
Muskaan just smiles.
G:Maan..dance with my sister.
Maan smiles.He goes near Muskaan.Muskaan looks at Maan with discomfort.

He keeps his arms on her shoulder to dance.She is nervous.

He holds her hands tightly and dances.

Geet smiles seeing them dance.
G:Dev..i feel very happy seeing Muskaan with Maan.
Dev smiles:They are perfect for each other.
Geet smiles:Yes,like we are perfect for each other.
Dev smiles:Then shall we continue dancing?
She smiles:Yes.
They go to the dance floor.
Muskaan is uncomfortable even after the dance.Maan understands that and he feels sad about that.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
If muskan loves dev toh pehle kyon nahi bataya atleast Dev nd geet ki shaadi toh naa hoti.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
muskaan ki bachjhi pehle nahi bol sakti thi you love dev meri geet bach jati
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
great update..
still feel bad for maan.. muskaan should've said something at the start
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
awww
i feel so sad for maan 😭
couldn't have muskan told him before dev and geet marrige😡
oh well i trust maan can win her over😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
awesome ...

thnx 4 d pm...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
lovely part.
if muskan told it before then.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
guess she is inviting trouble from Maan
what she plans to do with her life?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
great update..
still feel bad for maan..

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