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Originally posted by: Akshi0019

kushi i loved dis update... abhay n pia encounter was gr8!!!!

dey are always fighting... hope pia realize dere love 4 abhay soon!!!!

i m wondering what had happened betweer abhay n jey last time!!!!

reveal d mystery coon...

cont soon n thanks 4 d pm

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

dt was an amazing update

bt plss don't mind, pia's behavior irritates me some time😕

n totally loved d last line of ur update...beautiful..

wanna knw d secret b/w abhay-jeh

sry to hear abt ur loss...GOD give u n ur family enough strength to pass through this tough phase of life

tc

Originally posted by: priya.1

lovely update khushi...

loved the kitchen scene 😛

i really wnt to knw wt happnd btwn abhay n jeh...

continue soon dr...

Originally posted by: Bhavya8

I'm glad to know your okay Khushi, Hmm!!
and I absolutely loved this update!!!
I was so eagerly awaiting the part when Abhay and Pia would find out they're living together! And it exceeded expectations, it was so funny!!!!
I was laughing so much! Both thinking the other won't stop following me, but Abhay was happy about it!
And then Maya teasing Abhay I thought that was so cute!! He can be so sweet and adorable!!
But I wish that Pia knew about his feelings, because when she doesn't trust him, his feelings must get really hurt!
Our Pia is so stubborn though! The way she thought she'd be fine going to a new college, but I like how she will put up a fight and isn't naive. And I'm so glad she's not buying Jeh's act. And then Abhay came to protect her!! Made me so happy, but he's always so mysterious, like he could give a method to his madness. Anyway I bet if Pia found out he hurt Maya, she would definitely loose her calm. But I did like way they kept thinking of each other at the end.
Anyway this was such a lovely long update, thank you!!
I can't wait for the next one!!

awesome update

phew!!sorry khushi!'i finally caught up wid the updates..what is jeh upto..??and what happend btwn jeh and abhay??so many mysteries. nd luvd da last lines..beautiful..update as soon as u cn n gud luck wid xams:-)nw i wil b regular:-)

tht update r awsome loved abhiya kitchen scenes...hope soon they both truly fell in love and realize tht too...abhay is always there to protect piya love dtht...hope they understand each other yar cont soon

Originally posted by: Kasurbest

Chapter 13 - Now thats what I call an update! ! ! Thank you - yes, that was long enough :) yes yes yes *doing happy dance* 🤣 Finally it's long enough for you!!

Oh what a start, loved their meeting. This update surely reflected new beginning. Life starting again. Afresh! Loved the dialogues, scenes were just awesome. Specially the Abhay coming in and pulling Pia off from Jeh's grip. I really was curious to know what Jeh was really up to. Like Pia asked ,"What did he really want?" Cuz knowing him, well that is not much, but with the feeling I am sure he doesnt forget all the humiliation that he gets himself into. Especially not the last evening for sure. Ryt? Yupp!! Glad you like that all. Jeh is just being a jerk who can't take 'no' as an answer 🤣

Aww Abhay scolded her. "Every thing related to her is his business.'He is everybody and nobody to choose her friends" I just loved the update!. Thanks a bunch sis 🤗

Love the way you ended. Thanks!!!

Would it be safe to call them friends? Couple in love? One sided love? Enemies? Or better yet, strangers'

One of the many reasons I like your writing style. It's as if the book is talking with us. It makes the readers feel part of the story. Keep up the style. Very rarely this style is used. and this style is like a tune in plug. Open the book and until the end it keeps you tuned in.!.!.! That's is sweet of ya! I don't mean to do that but end up doing it :p