Well here comes my over analysis of ur writing!!!
First things first...are they in Japan!?!?!...that is so cool...
like mother like daughter...I love symbolism...OMG...i loved this update...
Falling into the depths of his eyes and not able to remove the gaze. that was just phenomenal...the way you described it..i was falling in love...
and Pari is just a cute little witty kid isnt she...she knows Geet inside out and has a little quirk to her...
And geet ignoring seeing the 'hottie'...i wonder why. But reasonable. I would to if i was looking at him for the past hour and someone comes up and say ' did u see him ' ...i would be like 'no' but eventually steal a glance...
and the necklace...it must truly be priceless to our Geet..but is priceless to me. It made them see each other once again...and the awkward silence...typical...
and he said u welcome...lmao...
FAB update...Seriously...head over heels in love with this!!!!
I really want to see what else you will concoct?