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JayaR

@JayaR

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#241

lovely update Lena...

So how does Maan know Geet???

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Tia

@tes_v1

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#242

Heya Lena!

So I'm done with the five chapters. My question: when do we get an update? 😆

As I said before, you write too wonderfully for your age! Keep it up. I loved the whole concept with all the descriptions and I also like the way your mind works. 😛 A great concept, a great storyline, which leaves us all wanting for more. The way you've portrayed Geet's dilemma is just plain perfect.

Cheers,

Tia

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Shamima

@-shamima-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#243

The talk at the beginning was hiding a mystery which does not want to delve in and maan telling her she would regret but her thought process in that moment was not to care even though deep down there are emotions resurfacing and awe I loved how you explained the importance of the hijab is for her identity (same here) and how maan was her saviour when she prayed to Allah and then she's grateful to him as he saved her honour anyways great update and loving how you creating this mysteriousness that geet should know but doesn't intend to do so can't wait to read more 😊

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MsMovielover

@MsMovielover

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#244

loved the update...
glad maan helped her out... uhh tasha sasha 😡 so heartless...
i cant wait to find more about their past
loved how you ended similar to my only exception 😉