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Posted: 14 years ago
keya ji ... teri new story kine mein Maneet ko separate kernay ka ya koi bhi MU ka sochna bhi mat ... other wise i'll kill u 😡 ...

now lemme read the update


EDIT:

she kissed him back ,... yoohooo

keya aur kitna pain de gi Maan ko ... bas ker de ...

btw come to think of it ... Geet is now atleast expecting something from Maan and this relationship ... she is opening up to him... which is a good sign 😃

loved the update
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Sana
Edited by sindu555 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sindu555

keya ji ... teri new story kine mein Maneet ko separate kernay ka ya koi bhi MU ka sochna bhi mat ... other wise i'll kill u 😡 ...


now lemme read the update

Sana ,I'm with u

Keya ...BEWARE😈

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Posted: 14 years ago
71 part 😳 is very good
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update...
day by day it become more interesting...
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Posted: 14 years ago
some lines from past part ...
xxx


filthy self here. He retires.?Geet- I... I...?Maan- GET OUT! He shouts. What? He smirks... Trying to melt melt me in your love? He laughs. Geet stood there shocked.?Maan- anyway. I am getting married soon. I would invite but I really don't want to invite a dirty figure like you. You never know... I mean you don't even have right cloths. Living off of my money all those years. What els do you. Don't worry I won't want them back. Think of as a charity. You know like the people on the road...?Geet looks at him in shock. There was endless tears.?Geet- I... I am sorry sir. That was the last word she spoke and left. Promising her self never to look back. Never to look back at her love. She ran out. Maan smirks.?Maan- dirts. He takes his blazer off and throughs in to the dustbin.?Dadi- that filthy girl was here again.?Maan- yes. I have seen. Sick. Now my whole month will go bad.?Anvisha- cheap. I don't know why mum & dad ever be came friends with them. They are so poor. Euuu... I need to take a shower. Sick. Have you ever thought about my reputation.?Maan- anyway why are we spoiling our mood for that dirty girl. Sammeras family is coming round today Dadi.?Dadi smiles- everything is ready beta.??Geet was in tears. She couldn't even see the road. She hated him. Hated him... But still she loved him as much. She loved him more then anything in the world. His one sweet word would have been enough for her to live her life... But that was too much to ask for. Too much.??Geet walks in to her house. Crying. She broke down in her dads arm...?Geet- he hates me dad. He hates me. He hates me like always. Why me dad? Why me?...
Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
can u provide us wid one more update...those who r selfish 4 updates come join me...
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG... maans love is not enough in anyway... xxx?



Few months have passed. Because of the work lode maan had to postpone his marriage by a year. Geet started her designing degree. Again in scholarship. Her family is well off now. Atlas-able to afford good food & cloths. Geet have started her practices in a company called kapoor as a intern. Her Design is very good & there for the boss always parses her work. She never went in front of the telly. Purely knowing how much maan will hate her.??Geets family was out of poverty. She have brought a good property. She gets well paid. Of course not rich but reasonably good. She just brought a car.??Her degree was only a year. She is 19 today. While maan 24. There birthday was only few days different. She... like every year have brought her a present. She smiled. She wanted to see him today badly... She knew well... The place she works... There company is one of maans clint. There was slight chance of seeing him in the fashion show... But again...??
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Posted: 14 years ago
😭


Maan- what the f*** are you doing here? He shouts.?Geet jumps with his sudden outburst. It was her birthday.?Maan- actually don't bother to open your filthy mouth. I don't have time at all today. My GF... You know love of my life waiting for me inside.?Tears rolled down geets eyes.?Geet- don't hurt me maan. I have no intention to come in front of you. I am sorry.?Maan- look at it from outside because poor girls like you will never have anything... Oh! Hold on... Are you here to melt one of this rich guy? ... You are. He mocks her...?Maan laughs... And walks off. Like she is a filth. A mere dust. Have no right in him. No right. If course that was right. She never had no right on him. Never. Geet walked along the empty street. Tears rolled down her eyes. Was she that ugly... Was she that same-full to the society. Sometime she feel like she wanted to end her life... Just end this misery. She feel in love with a man who hates her to the core with out any reason...

Geet- don't hurt me maan. I have no intention to come in front of you. I am sorry.
Maan- look at it from outside because poor girls like you will never have anything... Oh! Hold on... Are you here to melt one of this rich guy? ... You are. He mocks her...?Maan laughs... And walks off. Like she is a filth. A mere dust. Have no right in him. No right. If course that was right. She never had no right on him. Never. Geet walked along the empty street. Tears rolled down her eyes. Was she that ugly... Was she that same-full to the society. Sometime she feel like she wanted to end her life... Just end this misery. She feel in love with a man who hates her to the core with out any reason...?



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Maan walks in to the show... It was almost finished. Sam stood at the back with crossed arm.?Sam- you are late! YOU R LATE.?Maan hugs her- sorry jan. I will never from today. Had a important meeting. He hugs her tight.?Sam- do you like my dress? I love it. The Designer wasn't wearing any good cloths her self. Her hair was covered up. Can't believe Designer Nowadays... I want her to work for you. Pay her double the double. I want her to Designee my cloths. Her every Designee was so nice. She parses geets work.?



Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
great job and thanks for uploading
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb update
Oooh thought maan was gunna cook but got something better☺️
Awww geet also gave in to the kiss
Nooo don't want geet 2 go away from maan finally after all these days they are together
W8ing 2 see wat the new storyline is
Cont soon Xx...

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