FF-Tum Kaun Ho (Chapters45-70) - Page 8

That was awesome as always...loved it

heylo...congo on new thread..:)

lehhh... n I thought how come you vanished and didnt update... later I realized that u created a new thread... congratulations for the new thread!! :)
abt the update... likha toh bahut... but story aage nahi badhi... the point being that most of ur updates have too many things happening n here nothing much happened... I dont know why but I felt that maybe a near hint of confession/proposal from maan wud have done the magic for me! wo kya hai na GEET ki audience jaise Maaneet romance ke bina ek episode bhi nahi dekh paati the same way ur updates always have a punch else I feel I didnt actually read a part... dont mind my cribbing I am a complete fan of ur writing just that I felt the part didnt do a lot to the current subplot of your story which is maan's attempts at proposal.. yeah the driving lesson was what i had asked for but u generally write a very subtle yet romantic part which I felt missing... so moral of the story: doosra update jaldi do plzzz... jismei thoda scintillating Maaneet romance ho ya ekdum downright mushy scene between them will make me give u loads of dua...

much love,
xx

I just searched a Van Gogh drawing, his paintings are millions, not just 1 or 2 but around 70-80 million. You may want to add another 3 zeroes to your price lol.

hey,,,dear wen r u planning to gv us an update??????

just a curious question. in the previous part the cake seemed too real n it had the name geet on it. was it a picture off the internet or was it baked personally by u? when i saw the picture i was really curious to know i dont mean any offense...

eagerly waiting for an update.. 😃