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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey plz update dear...i am back after a long time...& waiting for another update desperately.

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Posted: 14 years ago


I am back.. Will Update NOW... :D
Thanks for all the love & support... :D
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happy dear ur back
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Happy to see you back
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Posted: 14 years ago

Enigma

Part 18


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Maan "I am sorry! I shouldn't have touched you!"

Geet nodes & tries to open her door again. She didn't want to stay in here anymore... Not even for a second. She wanted to talk to her siblings.


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Both sat there awkwardly for few minutes. What to say.. Geet wasn't sure at all.. Nor any one is here to help them... They end up sleeping in the car... It was midnight when geets bag suddenly fell on the side... & somehow landed on maans side. Maan jumped but geet was still in deep sleep. He rubes his eyes.. Tries to open the door again.. He gets irritated then came to the thought of opening the window & then he can open the door. What an idiot he thought of him self... He picks geets bag up upside down. Accidentally & all her belonging falls out instantly. Maan roles his eyes & starts to pick everything up one by one... Suddenly he came across a red passport. He looked at it weirdly... "red! British passport!" he picks it up instantly. What was he to think.. He quickly flips the pages... His eyes widens... "gggee..." he looked over it again & again... No! No!... He doubled checked the date of birth... Then the name then her visa to INDIA!... 5 years work permit Visa!.. Hold on! Maan felt like he was about to faint. Not the shock of finding out the truth but the sock of this girl... He looks at her again & again.. In sleep.. Double double making sure... Nothing was adding up at all.. What to believe!... He went back to kesars words...


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Maan "geet! Geet!" geet jumps up. Only to find the door open. Oh she kissed the floor. "At last!"

Maan "umm..."

Geet "I need to call my s... My children!" geet ran out of maans sight instantly... Then ran back to grab her bag. It looked different but she is in hurry... Maan gave her a glare... A mischievous glare. He flowed her. Geet just Ran in her room & first thing she done was call home!
Geet "how is everything at home? Is everything alright?"

Downstair...

Maan walks to the reception. Very curious to know the truth from geets mouth! He was amused yet unknown about his own anger!
Maan "good ..." he looks at his time. 4am! The receptionist was a young lady & he was a charmer.
Girl "shouldn't!" she smiles. Blushing. Maan looks at her then turns round... He likes the effect! But she was blushing for no reason! Nothing will happen here!
Maan "my wife is talking to my children could you connect to room 412s room phone. It's just by the time I am in my room! She probably will hang up!" maan took a sigh as it wasn't the same receptionist! The girls smile disappears & she hasetatly connects the phone... Maan surprised along with amused... She was speaking in Fluent English! It was rajji!

Rajji "di... You have no idea, shila aunty brought us a cute puppy.. 2 cute puppy... I will tex you now...!"
Geet "WHAT????" her scream nearly blown both maan & rajjis ear!
Maan "sister!"
Geet "what do you mean! You know I hate any types of dog!"






Rajji "di! How could you hate puppy! They are so sweet... So cute... Isn't that right M & G!. You sweet little Mgs!…. emmm (M) & geee (G)"
Maans eyes widens thinking! "what a crap name!" a clear guess they are brought up by her dumb sister! But how could she be dumb she made fool of me for past 3 months!
Rajji "or MG! Di do you even vicky chacu was here! He staid over the night!"
Geet "WHAT?"
Maan wanted to scream! "hold on! Vicky & shila! I was not fooled by one but many!"
Geet "give the phone to shila! Quick! Hurry! I want her ON!" rajji hands the phone...
Shila "uff! Chile!"
Geet "chile my foot! What the heal you are thinking?"
Shila "seriously! He just staid over!"
Geet "I don't care! They are kids! How could you even think like that! & where is vicky! That's it! He is band!"
Shila "you can't band him from his own house!"
Geet "well he is! Giving my sibling wrong impression! & you already know how cheeky rajji is! & here my kharus boss! Doesn't leave a single chance to leave me alone! Always thinking about breaking my marriage!"

Marriage! Maan nearly had a another heart attack! Was she really married! For those few second he nearly fell like some one just about to take his life way!

Shila "Fake marriage! & who would believe a 18 years old girl have 10 years old kid!!! They don't even start there p*** then!"
Maan could feel his cheek getting pink! It was getting to private! The conversation!
Geet "SHUT UP!"
Shila "anyway!"
Geet "it was your dumb bfs idea! & this dumbo here! After me!"
Shila "come to think of it both brother are dumbo!"... Shila gives rajji a high five...
Maan wasn't liking the conversation! He was tempted to say something! But he stopped... He needs to play along...
Geet "anyway! I want everything saluted! I will be back by next week! & want this dog OUT"

She hangs up along with maan. He was in shock! Extremely shocked. Filled by not only geet but his brother as well! Well miss geet let's see how do you Handel mr khurana! Everything was in so much detail! But why she have hidden her identity! Tree must be some reason! & vicky!... & what he was doing round geets! Specially kids round! He must admit he liked this geet! Maybe more then that fake married one! But yet again... She lied! & why?




Maan "so! She is 18! Those three her sibling! Where is her parents? Are they dead! Have she..." impressive. She brought them up by her self!

Whole night maan couldn't stop thinking or the happiness that she is single! Or the fact those were her sibling! Angry she lied! Her whole identity & frustrated his own brother was involved in this! She is from London! Took the job & came here! Hmm! I like that!

Geet "good morning sir!"
Maan "good morning!"
Geet smiles & takes creel fir her breakfast!
Maan "English breakfast!" geet couldn't even put the food in her mouth!
Geet "great! First thing in the morning!…. ae toh subha subha suru ho gya!!!" she smiles & ignores!
Maan "so geet! How do you like London!" maan slips in coffe. Looking at geets every expression. Impressive he must admit. Acting... Beuty... Talent! He must admire.
Geet "very nice!"
Maan "just nice!"
Geet "are there any problem with the word nice?"
Geet asks curiously.
Maan "of course no! It's just, a very dull word! Maybe beautiful! Outstanding!"

Geet wanted to jump over the table & scream at him. What's his problem exactly????... She smiles. "I will choose outstanding!" khas outstanding! Uff!"

Geet "ap hamesha itni sabal ku karti ho?"
Maan "koi problem hi!"
Geet "nahi! Meh kab kha koi problem hi! It's just can't you eat quietly!"
Maan "nahi! Meri adat hi... Bath karo Aur khao!"

Geet smiles... "ae babaji! Ae kha fasa dia apne!" geet makes a baby face & looks up! Hating maans gut! Asking question after question with each passing second. Uff!
Maan "tum soch ka rahi ho?"
Geet "kuch bhi to nahi!" she smiles uncomfortably!



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next- geet to giye…

thanks for all the love &

support..

begging for comments & like

to motivate me😳


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Posted: 14 years ago
Yay! finally first to comment
well absolutely loved it and thought it was totally hilarious
well keep doing what your doing cause u rock at it😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing update
Thank you
It was worth the wait.
Phew finally the truth is out.
Smarty Maan finally got to know of the truth
Maan's thoughts while listening to their convo was too good.
He was very well fooled by all of them
He is in a mixture of emotions happy for single Geet
admiration as she is working and brought them up alone
curiosity as to why she was alone and mad at vicky for making them fools.
I am sure he is going to get Geet confess pretty soon
The doggies were so cute.
Hope Geet keeps them. She needs to get some advice from dodo in maitri I suppose
Waiting for the next one.

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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome update finally maan come to know abt geet truth but not the full i hope he will come to know soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hahahah awesome
hope maan dosent create problem for geet
loved it
cont soon hun
luv yaaa

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