~Heartbeat~AR FF-9/5/14- Pg 33 Pt 14 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
First of all i must say it's so cooooooooooooolll that u've started a FF.. after such a long time 😳 it's like chamatkar peh gazab xD it was just like 6 years ago i used to read your FF and get that feeling ' aww she is writting about love, omg it so beautifully written ' xD :D

GREAT intro for your FF seriously i just loooooooooooovedddddddd it ^^ the way you related your situation and ridz its soo cute ^^ xD the medical studies, the two months left for finals xD but u must not fall in love with arman :O don't forget he is mine na ^^ 😳 Mera Armaan <3 Sirf mera mouahahah xD i don't share my chocolates & armaan is my biggest, tastiest and yummiest chocolate ever xD so so i'm not sharing it okay na? xD
Keep it up, desperatly waiting for the next part,
Love ya loadsss,,,

Laibu <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: dashingtusha13

hey!

nice start!
want to read more!
and pls pm me!
thanks!


thanxxx yaar :):)
yh i will :)

Originally posted by: ARMAANKSGFAN

hiiiiiiiiiiiiii

interesting start
loved ridzy
would love 2 read more
con soon
plz add me 2 ur pm list
thanksssssssssssssssss



yh i will add u
thanxx :):)

tc
Edited by griffy.fz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: -Laiba-

First of all i must say it's so cooooooooooooolll that u've started a FF.. after such a long time 😳 it's like chamatkar peh gazab xD it was just like 6 years ago i used to read your FF and get that feeling ' aww she is writting about love, omg it so beautifully written ' xD :D

GREAT intro for your FF seriously i just loooooooooooovedddddddd it ^^ the way you related your situation and ridz its soo cute ^^ xD the medical studies, the two months left for finals xD but u must not fall in love with arman :O don't forget he is mine na ^^ 😳 Mera Armaan <3 Sirf mera mouahahah xD i don't share my chocolates & armaan is my biggest, tastiest and yummiest chocolate ever xD so so i'm not sharing it okay na? xD
Keep it up, desperatly waiting for the next part,
Love ya loadsss,,,

Laibu <3




hey jaaan
thanxx for such a great comment :):)
i m happy about writing after soooo long!!!......its a really gud feeling
haha no relation
and keep your armaan :):)...me nt taking him :P:P:P
tc girl
love ya

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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
hey nyc start ..... plzz update soon n pm me 2oo .......

ritika

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Posted: 14 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: ksg_ritika

hey nyc start ..... plzz update soon n pm me 2oo .......

ritika



thanxx continuing today will surely pm u :):)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
hey all
i know this is short part will be posting next also soon :):)
plz comment :)


Part 2

Excuse ?? Excuse???
Oh god give me an excuse to talk to that girl !!!!
An idea struck the awesome mind of Dr ahem going to be Dr armaan malik
I got up looked at the girl across the hall of library.. who had just stared at me'
And walked towards her'.
I felt weird 'very weird'.this wasn't me''but still I walked towards her
" Excuse me"
she looked up '.I thought she would have an irritated expression'but it seemed to be blank but somehow to me spoke a million words ..
I ignored this thought'
The basic instant of every guy.. "ignore feelings"

" umm I was wondering whether we have a test on tuesday or nt 'actually I just came from a holiday and all others are coming tonight from the tour no one has a clue'.."
And for the 1st time I was blabbering'..a guy who made girls blabber
She still seemed blank'but somehow I could see the fear in her eyes'
Maybe I was scaring her'''''.I hesitated
" umm so?? Test there??"

" No'.umm'"
But she stopped 'as if something was stopping her from speaking..
It was the 1st time I ever heard her voice..

I said "thanxx a lot'"'
I waited for a reply bt didn't get and finally turned and walked back'

Yh It wasn't the perfect meet'''
Who knew'that my life was no more going to be perfect'
I turned again and looked at her'.
'..
Why did I talk to her ???
Dr armaan malik 'who everyone dies to talk to 'who is the heart throb of this college wanted to talk to this loner'
Oh yes that was the reason'.she was the loner'" exact opposite to me " and yet I felt she was like me'
I had been noticing her since the 1st day'quiet keeping to herself'.but her eyes as if wanted to belong to the crowd.. As if she was scared of something''.
She did have frienz yet I felt she had isolated herself'..
Why was I thinking so much about her????'.

No no'it wasn't attraction 'at least not now'and nor was the simplicity which is so overrated these days'hot guy simple girl meant to be each other '..love is much more than this
It was more of a curiosity'
Because questions never stopped erupting and I couldn't get even one answer'..
'''''''''

I walked out'of the library and I saw from the corner she was looking at me'
A smile crept on my face''''..



next part coming soon
plz comment, give suggestions :):)
tc all
love
griffy


Edited by griffy.fz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Riddss

nice start
continue soon


thanxx a lot yh i will :P:P😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
nice
next time do pm me
-Laiba- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
nice part, its getting more interesting, update soon
Love ya
Laibu
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20

hey nice story...

continue soon..

n pls add me to ur pm list.......

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