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Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#371

part 11
nice part...
they are married and now Sameera knows everything...
this reminded me of the Fairy Tale Royal Wedding...sigh...
cont soon...

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Sameeha

@Sameeha786

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Posted: 14 years ago

#372

A Maaneet Tale

Hello everyone! I just read all the comments and I know how desperate you are to see some romantic moments and for them to be together! I promise that Maan and Geet will be together very soon. Wait and watch 😉

Chapter 12

I sat on the decorated bed.

There WAS no point in sitting on this decorated bed since me and Maan clearly made a deal before the wedding that this wedding was fake.

I got up from the bed just as Maan entered. He looked at me in shock and then in anger as I went up to the dressing table and started to take off my jewellery and veil.

"I'll sleep on the couch. You can sleep on the bed" I said and went up to the wardrobe to take out my comfortable clothes.

Maan: "No. I'll sleep on the couch and you can sleep on the bed" he said

"I'll sleep on the couch. Your very tall. It will be difficult sleeping there for you" I said and slammed the door of the bathroom behind me before he could say anything. I felt like sobbing. This was not how my dream wedding night was suppose to be. I wanted it to be special. I started to wander why Baabaji could be so cruel to me. What was he going to gain by doing this?

I took out all the pins that held up my hair and sighed in relief as my hair fanned out at my sides. It felt good to be freed from these pointy pins.

I was just about to undress out of my extremly heavy lengha when I suddenly felt dizzy. I held the sink to prevent me from falling. When I looked at myself in the mirror, I could see double of my reflection. A wheezing sound in my ear began and before I could say anything, by legs felt wobbly and numb.

They gave away and as soon as I hit the ground, I blacked out.

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My eyes instantly looked up from my laptop as I heard the loud thump that was coming from inside the bathroom.

I immediately shut down my laptop and went up to the bathroom. I knocked but Geet didn't reply.

"Geet, are you okay in there? Open the door" I said and knocked slightly harder in case she was in the shower and she couldn't hear me.

"Geet, open the door. This isn't funny" I said in annoyance. This must be one of Geet's pranks.

No reply.

"Geet, open the door please" I said in fear this time. Was she okay?

No reply.

I began to slam on the door as a wave of worry washed over me. I felt my heart rate increase at the thought of her injured in there. I felt myself tremble as I tried to break the door open.

I finally broke it open after a few hard slams and I felt my heart drop to the ground as I saw her unconcious on the ground.

"Geet!" I yelled and I instantly fell to the ground beside her. I sprinkled some water on her face from the sink but she didn't respond.

I got up from the floor and decided to call Daadima.

"Daadima!" I yelled and I headed towards the door of her bedroom. I went inside without knocking. Daadima looked at me in shock.

"Daadima, Geet has fainted. She's not responding to me!" I said frantically

Daadima: "What? Fainted?" she said and got up from her bed. She followed me inside the bathroom and stared in shock.

Daadima; "Call the doctor" she exclaimed and knelt down beside Geet.

I immediately followed Daadima's instructions and called the doctor.

"Hello. It's Mr Khurana. Mrs Khurana has fainted can you please come to Khurana Mansion as quick as possible?" I said quickly and looked at Geet in case she had responded but she was still unconcious.

Doctor: "Yes yes. We'll be there as soon as possible" he said and hung up.

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It was about 10 minutes later the doctor arrived.

He began to do a quick check up on Geet. I needed somebody to tell me that Geet was alright. Why had she fainted so suddenly?

The doctor looked at me and Daadima sadly. What was the doctor hiding from us? I wish he would tell us already.

"What is wrong with her?" I asked and looked at the face of Geet which had now turned as pale as paper.

Doctor: "She hasn't fainted just like that. There is a reason to it" he said and paused. I clenched my teeth together and waited for what he was going to say.

Doctor: "It's possible she has brain tumor. Or brainstem cancer. We don't know which"

"Brain tumour" I whispered and looked at the doctor in shock.

Daadima: "Brainstem cancer" she whispered and held my hand tightly to support herself.

"And whats... What's the difference between this..." I said, scared to say the deadly words.

Doctor: "Brain tumor can be removed with operation. Brainstem cancer cannot be operated. If she has brainstem cancer, she will die within 6 to 18 months" he said sadly and looked at Geet in pity.

I was too shocked to say anything. So the Doctor continued on.

Doctor: "We will find out if we conduct a biopsy test" he said and wrote something down in his notebook.

Doctor: "This is an appointment letter. Please bring her to the hospital with the time stated. We shall conduct some tests" he said and handed me over the letter. Daadima left me alone and went to see off the doctor. I was left in shock as I looked at the appointment letter in my hands.

How could this happen so quickly?

"We just got married Geet, you can't leave me so quickly. Sameera already left me. Are you going to do the same?" I whispered and I felt tears prick my eyes.

I was suddenly angry. Why did God have to be so cruel? If God actually existed, then this wouldn't have been happening.

I looked at the appointment letter in my hands again. I was supposed to take Geet to the hospital tomorrow.

Geet: "Maan" I jumped and I looked up from the letter. Geet was concious.

"Geet" I replied in agony. I tried to swallow down the big lump in my throat but it didn't so far as move.

Geet: "Why are you crying?" she said weakly and wiped the tear away that somehow deceived me and trickled down my cheek.

"I'm crying? I'm not crying" I said and looked away

Geet: "What did the doctor say?" she said and got up in a sitting position. I didn't know what to tell her. Should I tell her? Should I not?

No. She had a right to know. I couldn't do this to her by not telling her what was wrong with her. She deserved to know.

"Geet... The doctor said you might... You might have brain tumor... Or brainstem cancer. The doctor wants you to come to the hospital tomorrow to... To conduct some biopsy tests" I said and tried to swallow the lump in my throat down. But it still didn't move.

Geet was frozen in her place. She didn't so far as blink.

Geet: "Okay... What's the difference between..." she asked, not saying the words.

"Brain tumor can be treated... Brainstem cancer can't be treated. If it turns out you have brainstem cancer then..." I paused as tears were on the verge of forming in my eyes.

Geet: "Then" she whispered

"Then your life expectancy is only 6 to 18 months" I whispered and looked up to see her reaction. Geet was frozen in terror. She continued to look at me so I could tell her I was only joking. She wanted me to start laughing and tell her this was all a prank.

Instead, I started crying.

It all hit me like a tidal wave and I started to cry. This was probably the first time I cried properly after my family died.

I couldn't control myself.

***

I was frozen as I watched Maan cry to himself. I didn't know what to do to make him stop crying.

He wiped his tears away and then slid in the bed beside me. He wrapped his arms around my waist and I snuggled in with him.

Maan: "You can't leave me like Sameera did" he whispered and he continued to chant this as if saying it over and over again would make my disease disappear.

"Maan, I will never leave you" I said and I didn't know whether I should cry or not.

But he still continued to chant this 7 word sentence until he fell asleep. I was still dressed in my heavy lengha so I decided to go and change. But his grip was so tight on me I could barely move.

Instead, I just relaxed in beside him. I traced the lines on his face and a faint smile formed on his lips.

Maan: "Mine forever" he said groggily in his sleep and hugged me even tighter.

"Yours forever" I whispered and hugged him back just as tightly.

Precap: Biopsy Test

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Yes, yes. I know. Another sad plot in the story. But as you can see, Maan and Geet have become CLOSER so you should be happy and thank me! I got this plot idea from this serial that shows on Star Plus called Sasural Genda Phool. So credits go to that serial and it's director 😆

Anyway, PLEASE hit the LIKE button and PLEASE COMMENT! Oh and PLEASE remember that angry comments are allowed as well. So you can express all your feelings about this FF. Please also remember to leave feedback as it helps me improve and PLEASE give me some more idea's on how I can keep this story going because I have sort of run out of idea's. 😳

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libra25

@libra25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#373

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oo this was a major twist...
hope she has tumor and not cancer...
great part...
but i am not understanding maan at all...i mean now he is all for geet...
i am not getting him...
could you plz give me some hint...on what is it that he wants

continue soon

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pushpi

@pushpi

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#374

This was really sad and unexpected. But I trust you to make it happy super soon

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ninavi

@ninavi

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#375

awesome update...👏

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Durga

@mrk-1

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#376

i loved it yaar,,,i hope this is some sort of samerra's plan .

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#377

Awesome update

loved it loadz

OMG new twist

plzz let her have the brain tumor

so she can get operated

cant see maan crying

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

Muahhh

Xxx

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Sabmeratu.

@Sabmeratu.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#378

Gr8 update
Hope geet has brain Tumor instead of that brainstem cancer atleast she can get treated
glad 2 see that maaneet are coming closer now
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

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holyangel

@holyangel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#379

ohhh.. u gave cancer to Geet...😲 ...i thought some jealousy part will come from Maan's side... as Geet making him realize that he too loved her n confessed her abt his love... 😍

now plzzz dont kill her... they r meant to b togethr...😊..

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namita25

@namita25

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#380

ohhh Sameeha what's this...
I didn't expect the update would turn like this...
I don't want ki Geet ko kuch bhi ho...nope I won't be able to take it...
awww Maan was really broken when he learnt about Geet's condition...

Edited by namita25 - 14 years ago

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