first my apologies for not even commenting for so long. as a writer i really do know how a lot of efforts go into updating n sending out PMs n i have been selfishly avoiding to even press the like button. but i do have a very good reason to do so 😛 call me a coward but i really do HATE sad endings. i think hate would be too small of a word for my dislike of sad endings. i know i know happy endings are not realistic but seeing too much sad endings in real life has pushed me to yearn for happy endings at least in fictional life.
i had read the first part n had asked to be pmed in hope of seeing maaneet together but after the first no no in the first update itself u had killed maan 😡. at that time i was determined to keep away from this ff but every single time i got a pm about the update my hands itched to read it n i secretly did read every single of ur updates 😊 as much as i hated that u had killed maan making the poor geet suffer in the present, i luved all the encounters of maaneet in the past 😳. i would literally first skim the present n then read the past making my mind believe that was the present 😕. as much as u made me cry reading the present i felt double the amount of happiness reading the past. but i was determined to not comment until i see maan alive n kicking 😃. n here i am now going to comment if not on every single update i shall make sure i do on most of the updates 😊
Part 1:
pain potrayed by geet while seeing her love of her life's life ebbing away was simply superb. i really felt a heart wrenching pain reading it n i very well was ANGRYYY 😡😆 that u had to kill that poor soul in the first update itself yet i had kept my hopes high...
the past was hmmm i mean as much as i loved maan n geet's encounter their promises, their marriage but in the back of my mind i knew he would die n that had taken away the joy of reading yet i had blocked the image of his death n went back to read the update with just the marriage scene 😆
n special mention that dialogue: "Happy 7th Wedding Anniversary Maan," Geet said as she stared of at the dark sky. i swear i felt a pricking pain in my chest 🤢
Part 2:
by this time i was really hoping for some magic to see maan come back but u conveniently made sure i suffer more pain just like geet
anyways the past update was shooo cute 😳 it reminded me of my elementary school days. for some reason the scene u described had me associated with the little park cum playground we had in our school n i imagined both maan n geet talking near the little slide that i loved to hang out 😉
the macho maan even at the age of 7 was cutie putie... standing up for justice n making sure girls were not hurt... hmm gentlemanly shanly maan 😆
n like i said before the present was only skimming to see whether i would get a whiff of maan... shorry
Part 3:
present: geet standing up for chukti was laudable. her pain n fear was seen through how she stood up for her. i did love how she wanted to make sure pinky was not being pushed around for marriage just like her.
Past: using debate competition geet went with maan . dev's encounter with geet was nice esp his realization of Handa was funny. but the highlight was maan declaring as geet's boyfriend. the confidence that oozed from him when he held his head high was superb!! ya maan way to gooo!!! 👏 saving the damsel in distress 😉 maan ke alaava kaun ho sakta hai humaari geet ke liye 😳
Part 4:
Present: maansi is a sweetheart. it was nice to see geet trying to keep her chutki happy while keeping her sadness at bay. the shopping scene was again hard to read as geet was having flashes of her life... hmm
Past: uff the date ☺️ ... woman if not for the fact that it was the past i would have commented but maan was not there at that point of time in the present. n my overwhelming thoughts he was no more to take her on the same date was just 😡. the way sasha managed was superb... hmm how i wish i had such a big family... anyways geet-sasha relationship made me hmm i think J cum awww... 😆 that dance was dreamyyy 😍 n the emotions and the words u used to portray the emotions 👍🏼 i lovin' it 😉
k not going to comment on the last part of the present again coz i was just fuming reading that name armaan mallik but in the corner of my mind i sooo wished it was MAAN 😳
Part 5:
i am only going to comment on the past coz honestly by this time i had lost all hopes about maan being alive n i couldnt see geet dying a thousand deaths 😭 so for the past (well i trained my mind to think it was the present 😉): chuha scene was cutie putie 😳. sasha-maan bonding reminded me of HAHK. but now that i have read all the parts its weird how sasha couldnt recognize maan...😕 but that scene was nicely portrayed 👏 n then the mehndi scene 😳 maan's name on the mehndi 😳 i know u can very well write superb scenes of maaneet but u have to shatter our hopes n make it all past 😡. hmm alright as of now i forgive u coz now that my maan is alive 😃 [WARNING: DO NOT TRY TO KILL HIM AGAIN... WARNA CONSEQUENCES ARE... (fill in the blanks 🤣)]
Part 6:
present/flashback: 🤬 this one is seriously for bauji... i could sense his charac def had a negative shade for he looked too innocent n too loving for a father figure... n here he goes selling his own daughter 🤬 🤬 🤬 utterly disgusting!!! 😡
past: maan-pinky scene was something different. they hit on the same chord instantly. loved it! pinky's request was a surprise but it was touching! n the saving her was too good... n he would shoot the guy's butt 🤣 MSK the butt shooter 🤣
again present: i shall only comment about the puppy dog/frown/smile/etc 😆 look that was geet's weakness was novel 😉
Part 7:
present: the only thing that caught my attention was "I miss you Maan" how could u do that to me Jaz 😭. but on a serious note the wedding scene was beautifully portrayed although i would have wanted it to be maan n geet yet it was flawless 😊. geet's promise from lucky was a memorable scene...
a look at the brothers was superb! i really wish i had brothers . the love n care they carry for geet is unequivocal to any other bond! of course except maan n geet's 😛
past: for the first time i hated the past. i was literally bawling 😭. the pain geet went through remembering maan's death was eating me alive... i seriously dont know how portraying this comes easy to you. i could hardly get over geet's plea to save her maan... k i am not going into too much detail coz i think i may start crying again... actually my doubts about geet's bauji was confirmed after the brother's confession. it honestly didnt surprise me that he was the bad guy. i guess i always have this notion that people portrayed as bad villain types in the starting are actually the people who save the protagonists n the people whom we see as lovable characters definitely carry a negative shade. n here i was right bauji was the BAD BOY!! 😡
Part 8:
present: 😭😭😭 the maafi scene touched me. geet realizing her mistake n bros asking for forgiveness was 😭 words would diminish the emotion portrayed there. my eng teacher from highschool ( that seems like ages ago 😲) used to mock us when we always said "i have no words to describe it" she would say, "damn it describe it thats why you are taught in an eng class!" but i shapat i have no words for the emotions each one of them is going through. it was just PERFECT! the pag phera scene was nicely written!
past: aawww poor little geeto... i could sooo imagine a 5-yr old kid trying to tell everything in the midst of sobbing n crying. the convo was superb but the ending of how she kept the girl away was priceless 🤣
PRESENT: THIS GAVE ME MY LIFE BACK... UFF! U HAVE NO IDEA HOW MY BODY WAS QUIVERING/SHIVERING/JUMPING READING THIS PART 😕... MAAN/ARMAAN, GEET'S MAAN WAS BACK!!! he he... ugh i am seriously choking on my words right now. "DULHAN LENE" was too good!! i was shouting while reading the update n people around me gave weird looks but i could careless... maan is backkk dare u kill him again 😡 i promise i shall hunt u down n i shall i shall... umm what shall i do 😕 haan i shall nothing is coming to mind mind. khair leave it!! all i want is maan n geet. way to go my ma[a]n! loved his entry into handa residence but its funny how sasha couldnt recognize neither could geet's bros 😕 am i missing something here?? 😕 anways the point was maan is back n i have a feeling chutki knew about this 🤔
n ya about the teaser u woman beware it to be a dream i shall seriously hunt u down. i PROMISE!
i just realized i hv typed sooo much nonsense 😲 shorry for this long comment but my happiness for maan's return has made me go gaga n write endlessly 😆 hope u didnt get bored with my bak bak...
love,
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