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Posted: 14 years ago
wow so many parts
awesome parts
glad geet knows the truth now
con't soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it... finally geet knows the truth and was wondering how will she react to it... but waiting any ways... do cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
yaar excellent updates.how could u manage to wrote all this parts n a single breath.its amazing.i am goin to ask u the same question.wat hapend to animosity y r u nt updatin it.pls update na it s close to my heats.
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Posted: 14 years ago
👏👏👏👏👏 wow kya dhamakedar updates at single go...
loved it loved it...
am speechlesss...
😳oh maan is cute na... 10 saal ke gift uski wify ke liye...😛
oops precap...
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb parts!
finally geet gt to know that maan is in love with her!...
i don't talli interfering in maan's life...
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow 4 updates😊
Thank you for these superb updates...
loved it...
geet knows he loved her...
waiting for the next update...
once again awesome parts👏👏👏
thanx for the pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
KOSH
PART 15

sox for mistakes


Arjun "remember I do not want any anger today!" geet smiles & nodes. Walks off. Avantika took ani to ask what she exactly told geet. Why she is so worried now.

Geet came in her room. Sat there quit. She did not like the idea maan loving her at all. Why? What was the reason? There was no reason at all. There shouldn't be. He in no way should love her. She closed her eyes in worry! That marriage never meant anything for her or will!

Maan knocks on her door.
Geet "kaun?"
Maan "me!" she was not sure how to face him at all! The fact she never looked at him in that way just made her realise! She could never possible think about him like that. Ever.
Maan "I brought you this cloths." he smiles. Geet looks at him in shock! How could she not notice his affection before! Everything he was doing was the result of some affection! Which is wrong in every way!
Geet "I don't want it!"
Maan "mathlab?" he looks at her in confusion.
Geet " I mean! I don't want it! I really don't need any! I have something to were!"
Maan "tu par le na! I would like it!"
Geet "no!"
Maan "what do you mean! Is there something wrong. I will change it." he answered innocently.
Geet "no! Just give it to someone els! Not me!"
Maan "no I brought this for you! & it's only for you! No one any other right!" he spoke in anger. Geet shot him a angry glare. & was about to walk way when maan holds her hand. Geet snaps instantly.
Geet "don't!" she walks out. Maan left confused. What exactly he have done to deserve this from his wife. Maan flowed her when talli stopped both.
Talli "geet... What cloth shall I were." her eyes fell on geets cloths! "owo is that for me!" maan instantly lost his temper!
Maan "why do you think everything I buy... Is for you!" geet did not like anyone to know what she knows.
Talli "just asking! Who is it for anyway!"
Maan looks at geet. Gives her one angry glare then walks off.
Talli "kitni moody hi!"
Geet "tu chor is bato ko!"
Talli "uff! He does not even show any attraction!"" geet gave a sad smile.

As one by one everyone arrived, geet walks down. Greeting everyone while maans eyes was only on her. Not even removing or blinking. He may have forgotten.
Ani "what's wrong bro!"
Maan "she is my wife." geets beauty was vibe rent. Even dushant couldn't remove his gaze. Something maan did not approve. She is only his. No one els. Talli who staid near maan trying her best to get some attention but it did not work as maan could not see anyone except geet.

Maan "I did not like that you did not were my cloths!"
Geet "maan! Dekh... I have lots of work to do! Go and talk to talli!"
Maan "tu hamesha talli! Talli ku karti hi!"
Geet "could you stop it! What's wrong with you?"
Maan "no what's wrong with you!" he asked angrily. Actually over powered her voice. She left confused & not sure at all what to expect.
Geet "just go & do whatever! Leave me alone!" maan gve her another glare & walked off in anger.

As everyone sat down to eat there dinner... Maan left near arjun. Have no intention to look at geet. He couldn't guess why she started to behave with her like this!
Geet served maan. He was angry & was not sure how to show. He decided not to eat, specially the food she did not lay with love. He started to eat chillier instead. Everyone looked at him in shock.
Arjun "what are you doing maan! Stop it!"
Geet "maan! Stop it! What are you doing!"
Jk smirked. Sitting at the far corner. Talli started to have tees while ani & avantika guessed perfectly well. They have been noticing geets rude behavior towards him! & this will not exactly help. It's only provoking him to do something stupid.
Geet "maan stop it!" she worried & snapped the next chilli he was about to eat. Maans face went bright red. Geet was not sure how he was controlling. Maan snaps at the plate & leaves the table.
Everyone felt it was rather rude while arjun extremely angry.

Avantika smiles... "husband & wife!"

next- ?
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that's great...now it's like our maan...superbbb...
looking fwd...

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update...
maan is always angry...but loving the flow of the story
keep writing
love u and ur ffs

reva
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Posted: 14 years ago

KOSH/Aagosh
PART 16

sox for mistakes...


Geet flowed along with talli but she behind the pillar.

Geet "what's wrong with you?" maan ignored. "will you say something! Do you know how hurt they must felt! Why you doing this!" maan laid on the bed. He looked for something madly to calm his wild tongue down. At the end he just took geets palue & started to shove it in his mouth.
Geet rolled her eyes. He started to moan in agony. Laid on his stomach. He at-least ate 8-10 chilly. Extremely hot.
Geet "wait! Let me get something sweet! Then you can explain why you have done this!"
Geet took her pallu out. Soaking wet!
Geet "euuu!" maan gave her a glare!

Geet brought some honey...

After about 1 hour... He managed to come back to normal.

Geet "tell me now! Why did you behave so rudly?"
Maan "why wouldn't I! Like you behave so nice with me!"
Geet "maan! Anis sasural was there!"
Maan "I don't care! If you don't behave nice with me! Whole family will suffer!"
Geet "maan! What type of behavior is this!"...

Maan roles his eyes again. What he to think! Since young he live in a dream of her as his wife! For this days where she taunts him every second!

Maan "what type of wife are you? Who shouts at his husband!" he blurbs out, yet shocked to his word. Geet left there speechless. She was not sure what to say any more.
Maan "mera mathlab!... I .."
Geet puts her hand up to stop him speaking!
Maan "I mean even if we deny... We are husband & wife to the world." he changed his words. Clearly reading what's on geets face.
Geet "let's go downstairs. Everyone is waiting for you!" maan flowed. He joined all the ladies while everyone giggling how he never leave the site of his wife. Geet felt uncomfortable. She did not like any idea at all.
Talli sat there disturbed. Every word sims to reap her heart apart. Geet noticed.

After the dinner geet flowed in Tallis room.
Geet "ae talli! Ka hua?"
Talli "kuch nahi geet!"
Geet "per tu aese ku roh rahi hi!"
Talli "kuch nahi!"
Geet "are you upset about the fact how they bringing up my & maans marriage! Whole world knows we are husband & wife, but you know the truth na! I only done it to protect him & ani! Nothing more!"
Talli "I know! But you are his wife!"
Geet roles her eyes. "look at me! Have I ever broken my promise?"
Talli "no!"
Geet "have I ever made you upset?"
Talli "no!"
Geet "then how could you possibly think I will do something silly now!"
Talli nodes..
Geet "now smile. I want to see a big smile." she gives talli a big hug before disappearing.

Next day.. Anis nanad staid round. Somewhere both staid at the back ground watching maans work out. Talli felt jealous. How dare they she thought. Geet walks in.. Seeing 2 girls drool while talli stood there with a stick!

Geet "what's going on?" all three jump. Maan ignored all re hassle at the back ground but geets voice interested him. He already was madly love with her, but now dying for her to spend time with him. Just him. Like she used to when he was young. Every second she used to be with him. Just him. He stops...

Talli "look na geet. How they looking at maan!"
Tani "sorry!" they bit there tounge knowing geet is his wife.
Not knowing there thought geet burst out in laugh. Maan walks right behind geet. She just came out of shower. Her wet hair started to drive him insane. The strong aroma... Uff! 2 girls ran way.. While talli closed her eyes & walked off.
Geet "are! Where are they going?" she did not realize the presence of maan right behind her. She spines round only to bump on maans bare chest. She jump instantly taking few step back & nearly treaping when maans strong arm firmly engulfs her in his embrace. His sweaty body just sticks to geet. She looked at him with sudden shock. The grip had different feeling. There was some type of physical attraction. She did not like it, specially how slowly his hand started to cress her bare waist.
Maan "tu tik toh hi na!" geet nodes in order to free her self. After few second she just walks off with a uncomfortable smile while maan with a blush. He loved there closeness.

next- opps who will calm maan down now?
thanks for all the love & comments
if you have time pls doo leave me some.

Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago

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