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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part...but maans anger is baseless...he shud know the truth...update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 5
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Geet tries to save maan "kuch nahi papa! He came back after so long! Probably gone to see all his friend! Bit angry to that we have send him to boarding!"
Arjun "well fix him quick!"
Geet nodes & walks off...

It was late night again when he returns... Geet as usual waited for him.
Geet "where have you been?"
Maan "tujce mathlab!" (nun of your business!)
Geet "maan! What type of question is this? Tujce pata bhi hi that baba kitni pareshen thi! He was so angry! Aur talli... Why have you dropped her off!"
Maan "teri problem ka hi?" (whats your problem?)
Geet "what do you mean mera problem ka hi!"
Maan "tu her waqt itni kich kich karti hi ku!..." he stands in front of her. Mere incs way! ... "maan! Ae math Karo! Maan oh math Karo!... To me ka karu?"
Geet "what's wrong with you? Why you behaving like this! Do you have any problem with me! Then say! Stop behaving like that!"
Maan "no! No I don't have problem with but just stop talking toe... Because I do have problem with that!"

Geet was very hurt with those words. She nearly had tears hearing those words. How could maan behave like this! Specially with her... She was his world! He have grown up now. A very rude man! Who does not understand how much he Is grafting others feeling.

Geet "yes! That's right! I should not talk to at all! Why should you talk to me! You are grown up man now! Understand everything! There are nothing that you can share with us! Yes... ""from today on I will not or even try to talk to you! Unless I forcefully have to! Do what ever you want!" geet spines round & hides her tears. He have hurt her allot! geet walks of in tears... Making maan feel more guilty. He punched the wall behind in anger & frustration! He just could't believe what he have done! His aim was to hurt her with his words! Not stopping her to talk! If she does not talk how will he hurt her...
Maan consoled him self! It's geet. She can't stay a second without talking to him! He remembers those letters & how much she came every day! Max 1 day! That's all...

Breakfast table...

Geet served everyone except maan. Talli came in & served him! She did not even look at him, nor felt necessary to whisper good morning! That wasn't right of course! No matter how angry she was, she still would have said good morning! After serving she walks off to do some spice work.

Avantika "beta! Khana to khake ja!"
Geet "no ma! I already ate something. I am not hungry any more!"... Maans eyes did not move from her beautiful face. But geet ignored him completely!

Whole day maan staid home. Deliberately staid in front of geet. Doing all the stupid thing as possible to make geet talk to him! Which did not work at all! She just ignored him further & seeing him talking to talli non stop she took the wrong impression thinking maan must like her! She decided to talk about there wedding!

Hall-

Geet "papa! I was thinking about tighing the knot between maan & talli!"
Arjun & avantika was shocked! ... Where would you see a wife trying to fix her own husband marriage!
Avantika "geet..."

Arjun who had no intention to keep this marriage it was there only to let geet stay in the house because somewhere she was still madly in love with shoria...
Arjun "so you remember your promise!"
Geet "what promise papa! You know why I did that marriage! I don't count this as marriage at all! It was there for the sake!"
Avantika "do you realise you have to leave the house! The society will force you out!... You only been here as maans wife!"
Arjun "enough!.. I am head of the village & if I say this marriage is not legal! Then not! If she staid in the house for all those years! Then why not now?" avantika kept quit! Bit frighten of her husband!
Geet "thanks papa!... But maan & talli going along very well!"
Arjun "you have taken all my responsibility. I couldn't thank you enough!"
Geet smiles & leaves...

Maan is walking along the corridor when he finds geet & dushant taking! Choosing some cloths! Dushant smiles at maan "idhar aea! Which cloths do you like?"
Geet looks way! Still mad at maan.
Maan "what's the special occasion?"
Dushant "ae bhi koi bath hi! Teri choti bahen ki shadi!... Anis wedding coming soon!"
Maan started to get excited! Wedding! Anis! How come he have no idea about this!
Maan "when?" he asked excitedly!
Geet looks at him. Surprised. For the first time he seen him happy!
Geet "me & dushant going to see anis mika! Tu agar ana chati hi! To aeh saktihi!"
Maan "tum log ku jarahi ho! Where is dad?"
Geet "he cant make it! That's why us two going!"
Maan dis not like that... Not at all! He is no way sending his wife with his brother killer!! what a nice combination! He laughs! Well your fun will be ruined!
Maan "I am coming!" geet nodes...
Geet "we are leaving in two hours!"

Geet wore a red gujrati sari. With red bangles... Everything was red. She looked beautiful. Her beauty was visible to both mans eyes as she & talli walked towards the car. Geet struggled in the bright sun light. It was too sunny. A car full of shagun (goods) was also flowing. Talli wore bright green dress.

Dushant who was driving the car... Geet decided to sit at the driver seat. Letting the children... Maan & tallest at the back! But maan had some other intention! & he knew well how to win... He blocks geets way...
Geet didn't say a word! Remembering... The earlier night arguments! She looks at him... There gaze was not doing much!

Maan "talli! I thought you wanted to sit at the front!" geet looks at talli. Who seems to be very existed!
Geet "aea! Tu samne baeth me back me sit karti hu!" geet moves. Maan opens the door for talli! Still looking at geet... Then he moves to the back sit & then geet...

Maan kept looking at her now & then... & also keeping his eyes on dushant! Who couldn't help him self not to look at geet... That did boil maans blood. Geet who had no clue what exactly was going on. She enjoyed the view! Not even once looking at maan.

As they arrived after 4 hours... They were greeted by all anis mika. The house looked like a palse. Very rich. Geet was happy with this proposal. It was a arranged marriage. All Amis needs should be satisfied here. Few guards came in to take the shagun. The elder came out to great them in. Maan smiles along with dushant!



next- anis mika... opps maan claiming his wife😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
ye ye...me first...
awww Keya ...terrific part...👏
Maan is trying to hurt geet with his words...he never thought Geet would stop talking to him...
so Geet is trying her best to get Maan married to Talli...babji ye kya ho raha hai...
😆
Maan is still not able to figure out what he feels to her...he is indded falling for her...or may be has already fallen in love with her😆
can't wait for the next part dear..the precap sounds promising.
Edited by namita25 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update...
maan claming his wife
precap interesting...
Waiting for ur next update...😊😛😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Precap is interesting & lovely update.
Love the blanche of each character.
You r amazing.
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Loved to see maan claiming his wife
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part. loved it.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice!...
urghhh!!!...i don't want geet to fix maan's marriage with talli!...
precap sounds interesting!...
i just hope that geet will not be mad with maan after claiming her as his wife!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
eagerly waiting for update precape is very interesting awsome update is this
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part...still waiting for maaneet moments...precap is interesting
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Posted: 14 years ago
Claming his wife???? Like how. . . . . Sounds interesting abhi toh pata nahi how will he react when he gonna find out abt talli nd his wedding.

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