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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 29

geet couldnot look into maan's eyes...his intense looks were making her weak in knees...
she started moving back until she was stopped by wall...maan kept his hands on either side of geet blocking her...He then slowly moved close to her decreasing the gap between them...her heart was beating so much fast that she feared it may explode at any moment...geet closed her eyes as she was unable to bear the sweet pain maan was giving her with his close proximity...
maan passed one of his hands over her waist and pulled her closer to him with a force which made her to collide with his hard chest...his hold was so much strong that geet was off the ground...and was hanging in maan's arms...maan then opened the shower...water drenched them completely...maan could not remove his gaze from geet in that drenched state which increased geet's beauty and his burning desire thousand fold...maan pressed his lips onto geet's neck...squeezing her tightly in his arms...geet happily submitted herself to him...she started enjoying each and every touch of her husband...then maan brought his lips close to her...to kiss...but stopped in the middle...geet who was expecting a kiss then slowly opened her eyes...and saw maan smirking naughtily...she lowered her head in embarrassment...
maan made her to look into his eyes...she was lost in his eyes...then maan suddenly took her lips into his pulling her into a passionate kiss...geet eyes widened in surprise with maan's sudden act...after few min...maan with his lips slightly caressed geet's cheek and whispered in her ear...

maan: geet...aaj ka raath bahuth special hey

geet looked at him in confusion and questioned with eyes...

maan by now became expertise in reading geet's eyes...he smiled...

maan: woh tumhe patha chalega...jaldhi tayyar hoke aajao...

he then kissed her cheek and went outside leaving geet in vulnerable state...geet then sat under the shower until all her desires got controlled...geet came outside and saw maan working on the laptop...she went near him..took off his laptop

geet: aapne mujhe tayyar hone keliye kaha..aur aap kaam karne bait gaye...

maan: bas 5 min geet...ek important kaam hey...

geet: baadh mein kijiye..ab jayiye nahake aajayiye

said these words geet pushed him into washroom...she smiled and started drying her hair...then he saw a gift packet on the bed...on it ...

to my loving wife...geet...

she went near ..and took the gift...when she opened it there was a beautiful red saree with matching diamond set...her eyes couldn't stop tears...she then got dressed in beautiful red saree which maan gave...

maan who came from washroom stood dumbstruck..geet looked like an angel in saree and loose hair...he kept looking at her without an eyeblink...geet felt maan's eyes all over her body touching her everywhere...

geet: maan..aap mujhe aise hi dekthe rahenge ya tayyar bhi hojayenge

maan hugged her ...and kissed her neck

maan: kya karu geet..tumhe jab bhi dektha hu na..aise hi dekne ka mann kartha hey...

geet: ok..ok...aur baathe math banayiye..jaldhi tayyar hojayiye...waise aap ke kapde?...

maan: geet cupboard kholo

geet looked at maan confused and did what maan said...she got surprised...

geet: maan aapke aur mere kapde yaha kaise aagaya...ek min...tho aapko patha tha iss trip ke baare mein...

maan smiled...

geet showed fake anger and sat on bed ...maan came near her...

maan: geet naraaz math ho..aaj raath ko tumhe bahuth kuch dekhna hey...sab kuch dekhne ke baad phir mujhpe gussa karna...ab keliye maaf karo...

geet smiled...

maan too smiled and stood up to take dress from cupboard...

geet: maan...mein dethi hoon...

she then selected white half-shirt and blue denim jeans...after that maan and geet came outside the hotel...where a maybach 57 was waiting for them...both maan and geet sat in the car...

geet: maan waise hum kaha jaa rahe hey...

maan smiled...and whispered in her ear " jaha tu jaana chathi thi"

geet couldn't understand...

after few min they reached the beach...

maan: geet ankhe bandh karo...

geet without asking any question closed her eyes...maan slid her hand around her waist and walked along with her upto some distance...with the sound of waves geet understood that they are at the beach...but she was not aware of maan's intention...after waking for some distance maan stopped...

maan: ab ankhe kholo geet...

geet slowly opened her eyes...she stood speechless...a cottage in the beach...outside the cottage there was a bed made of white flowers...moon light made the area more beautiful...the whole area around the bed was filled with flowers...geet looked at maan in surprise...

maan bent on her knees...took out a diamond ring...he then held geet's hand...

maan: geet...mujhe bade bade baathe karna nahi aatha...in simple words i just want to say..."will u be my wife forever and ever"...

geet had tears in her eyes...she felt as if she was the happiest girl in the world..as her prince charming was there right before her ... proposing...which she used to dream about since her childhood... she then said "hamesha hamesha keliye" and hugged him...maan then slid the ring into her finger...and kissed her...

then maan looking seductively at geet...

maan: geet...full moon hey...beach hey...tandi hawa bhi hey...aur dher kis baath ki...

geet then understood that maan did all this to fulfill her wish...she blushed listening to maan's words...

maan: bolo geet...jawab dho

geet : kya bolu...

maan: wahi...jo iss waqth mein sunna chahtha hu.

geet: aap ko nahi patha mere dil ki baath...

maan: patha hey...phir bhi tumse sunna chahtha hu...

geet looked into maan's eyes...and kissed him on his lips...indicating an "yes"...maan got surprised with geet's boldness...

she then looked around..." maan agar koi dekhliya tho" asked geet innocently...

maan smiled and said ..."yeh sirf hamara beach hey...jo maine hamare liye kharida...yaha koi nahi aayega...

geet then lowered her head in embarrassment for asking such questions...

maan then lifted geet in his arms and walked towards the bed...

maan slowly placed her on the bed and started removing every barrier of fabric which was coming in between them...he then started kissing her which made geet to loose herself completely in the hands of her husband...maan made love to the geet the whole night...moon became the silent witness to their passionate love making...after some time moon also hid under the clouds giving them privacy...



to be continued...



Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful update
Geet is so naive she still didnt understand Maan's intentions.
Maan planned everything as per Geet's wish.
Lucky Geet.
Mann must be stinking rich to buy a island for themselves
Geet is super lucky to have such a loving hubby.
SR in the beach under moonlight sounds so dreamy and romantic 😳
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update!!
Maneet finall became one :)
I wish there was more than just one MSK ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago
romantic upd...
lke it a lot ...
do continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful and awesome update. wowww maan is the best best. sooo sweet that he fullfill geet's wish😆😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was such a lovely update. Full of romance!! Maan is d kinda a husband dat every girl will wish for.. An amazing update. Waiting 4 d nxt one. :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Reading this update was like living a dream!!! such a perfect way to express your love!!!
Too good to be true😊
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waiting 4 next part
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
wwwooowww mmmooonnn be sharma gaya😍 lovely update☺️

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