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Part 26

her hands were shivering while talking to brij...maan noticed this...he came closer to geet...hugged her and took her lips into his...giving her a passionate kiss...geet who was lost in the kiss ...without any tension finally heard from the brij that she topped the entrance test...Brij was confused as geet remained silent when she heard the news of her result...brij had no idea what his sister was actually doing...

Brij: geet...geet...kya hua...kuch tho bolo...

After listening to brij words...geet pushed maan...pointing towards phone and pleading with eyes...maan this time hugged her from behind while talking on phone...

geet: woh...kuch nahi hey veerji...bas avyi...mein baad mein aapse baath karthi hu...

said these words geet cut the call...without wasting a second maan again pulled her into a passionate kiss...geet tried to free herself...but couldnot as maan's hold was strong...Finally maan freed her when he recieved a call from adi...geet looked at maan and said in a low voice that she will come back in few minutes...maan nodded ...

geet came down to arrange breakfast for maan...as she was preparing breakfast geet heard maan yelling at adi...geet immediately rushed to maan's room to find out what actually happened...

maan: yeh kaisa pagal pan hey adi? tum jaise darpok aadhmi ko mein ne zindagi mein kabhi nahi dekha...aisa kaam karne se pehle at least tumhare family ke baare sochliya hotha...

geet stood there confused not knowing what actually happened...

maan: mein kuch bhi sunne keliye tayyar nahi hu adi...bas kal thak tumhari resignation chahiye bas...i don't want to see ur face again...

said these words he cut the call and threw the phone on bed with anger...geet came near maan...kept her hand over his shoulder...

geet: maan...kya hua...aap ithne gusse mein kyu ho?

maan remained silent...he started to hit the wall with his fist...geet understood that he was in anger...that too in mode of destructive anger...she took a long breath...this avatar of maan is scaring her...but still she gathered all her courage to cool maan...

geet: maan...plz...aap pehle baitiye...

maan: geet mujhe thodi dher keliye akele chod dho...

said these words maan went to washroom...closing the door with a force...geet sat on the bed ...hurt with maan words...not knowing what to do...

geet(monologue): maan...aap bahuth achche hey...lekin mujhe yeh baath ka darr lagraha hey ki aap ki iss gusse kahi hamara rishthey keliye baari na pad jaaye...gusse mein app sab kuch bhul jaathe hein ...mujhe bhi...

while saying last words geet eyes were filled with tears...geet wiped her tears...took out maan's dress...kept it on bed...along with other necessary items...and left...

In washroom maan was thinking only about adi...he is feeling bad for adi...and at the same time getting very angry...for adi's stupid decision...

maan came out of washroom...and looked at clothes geet had arranged for him on bed...

thinking about his anger and his behavior towards geet maan closed his eyes in pain...of hurting geet...

maan after getting dressed rushed down to talk to geet...geet was arranging breakfast on the table...maan came near geet...geet looked at maan and with a smiling face...(hiding her tears)

geet: aap agaye...bas 1 min..mein breakfast laga dethi hu...

said these words she started to leave...maan held her wrist...and made her turn towards him...

maan: geet...mujhe maaf karo...mujhe aise baath nahi karni thi...mein bahuth sharmindha ...

geet closed maan' s lips with her hand...not allowing him to speak further...

geet: maan...aap bhi na...chup hojayiye...hum pati - patni hey...humare baath sorry ya thanks keliye koi jagah nahi hey...mein samaj sakthi hu...aap ka situation uss samay...
aap aise waise cheezon keliye naraaz nahi hothey hey...lekin...

maan looked at geet coonfused...

geet: aapka gussa ...gusse mein aap sab kuch bhool jathe hey...mujhe bhi...

her eyes could not control her tears any more...geet broke down infront of maan...maan's heart shattered seeing geet in tears...maan stood there watching geet helplessly...he wanted to convince her that he won't do anything like that in future...but he himself knows very well that he cannot control his anger...that one word of geet...:gusse mein aap sab kuch bhool jaathe ho...mujhe bhi" echoed in his mind...continuously...

maan: (monologue) sach hi tho keh rahi hey geet...mein apne aap ko bada dilwala samaj tha hu...lekin iss gusse mein meri geet ko hi bhul jaatha hu...how can i...how can i forget geet even for a fraction of second...mujhe badalna hoga...apne gusse ko kabo mein rakhna hoga...magar kaise...

not knowing what to do...maan came near geet...made her to sit on the couch in the hall...he laid on the couch with his head on geet's lap...then maan took geet's hand and kept it on his head...


maan: geet...meri madath karo geet...apne iss gusse ko kabo mein rakhne keliye...mein tumhe ek pal keliye bhi bhoolna nahi chahtha...lekin mein apne iss gusse ko control nahi karsaktha...kya karu geet...mein mazboor hu...

said these words...he closed his eyes in pain...a tear escaped from his eyes...

geet took maan's hand and kept it on her cheek...she kissed maan's forehead...

geet: maan...meri taraf dekhiya...meri aankhon mein dekhiye...

maan looked ito geet's eyes...he was lost in those eyes...

geet: jab bhi aapko gussa aatha hey...jis ko aap control nahi karsakhthe...bas ek min keliye aap apne aanken bandh kijiye...apna aankh bandh karke...mere inn aankhom kho yaad kijiye...jo aankhen jisme sirf aur sirf humara pyaar hey...jaha humara pyaar hey..waha gusse keliye koi jagah nahi hotha ..

maan was touched with geet words...now he got the right medicine to cure his anger...his geet...his love for geet...

maan without saying a word pulled geet towards him and kissed her...capturing every moment of their happiness in his mind...geet too gave herself to maan ...after several minutes they broke from the kiss...seeing at each other both smiled...maan hugged geet and took her to dining table for breakfast...

at the dining table

geet: waise aapko ithna gussa kyu aaya?

said these words geet looked at maan scared...about his reaction...maan smiled looking at geet...

maan: geet...kya tumhe abhi bhi laghtha hey ki mein gussa ho jaonga tum per...

geet sighed in relief...

geet: aakir baath kya hey maan?

maan: tumhe patha hey na geet...adi..mera employee...not only employee...but also a good friend...usne aaj kya kiya?

geet : kya kiya?

maan: suicide attempt kiya...

geet: kya?(in shock)

maan: haan geet...subha jab unke mobile se call aaya tha...mein ne socha adhi hey...lekin baad mein patha chala ki woh adi ke mom tha...although he was an employee...mein ne usse kabhi bhi aisa treat nahi kiya...adi ke family ko apni family mana...isliye adi ke mom ne subha mujhe call karke yeh baath kehke...bahuth rone laga...

geet: ab adi bhaiyya kaise hey?

maan: unko kuch nahi hua...jab woh poison peene ka tayyari kar raha tha..tab unke mom ne adi ko rokdhiya...aur mujhe call kiya...uske baad mein ne adhi se bhi baath ki...

geet: kya kaha ...adi bhaiyya ne

maan: kuch nahi kaha...bas rone laga...geet mujhe aise suicide karne walon se bahuth naphrath hey...sirf darpok log karthe hey waise kaam...adi ko patha hey ki mein unke har problem ko solve karsaktha hu...lekin phir bhi woh mujhse apni problems chupa raha hey...aur ithni badi decision liya hey...upar se aunti ji ka halath sochke mujhe aur gussa ya unpe...kamsekam apne mom ke baare mein sochna tha na...lekin nahi...

geet: maan...mein ek baath kahu...

maan: hmmm

geet: maan...mujhe lagtha hey..adi bhaiyya ka dil kisine bahuth bhuri tarah se dukhaya...isliye woh apne mom ko bhi bhul kar aisa decision liya...aur aap iss halath mein unper gussa karne laga...

maan remained silent and listened to geet words carefully

geet: maan...aap adi bhaiyya ko apne friend maanthe hey..lekin kahi na kahi unke mann mein aap boss honeka darr tho hotha hey na...shayad isliye aapko kuch nahi bathaya hoga...aap unse ek dosth ki tarah baath kijiye pyaar se aur patha lagayiye aaqir hua kya hey...mujhe yaqeen hey ki adi bhaiyya aapko sab kuch bathayenge...kuch kaam gusse se nahin...pyaar se kiya jaatha hey...iss type ki depression situations mein aise pyaari shabd hi insaan ko phir normal bana dethe hey...

maan became speechless with geet words...he wondered whether she was the same geet whom he had met few days back on their wedding night...he was surprised that all these days where had she hidden this level of maturity in her...he once again fell in love with geet all over again...

maan: geet i love u...

geet smiled and placed a soft kiss on his lips saying "i love u too"...

to be continued...
Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
an amazing update..
loved how geet gave d solution 2 maan abwt hw 2 control his anger..
i wonder why adi tried 2 commit suicide..😲
update d nxt soon 😊
Edited by luv_GurTi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it loadz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
arey waah maan ke gussey ko tand rakne ka tarkeeb mil hi gaya...well done geet...
now why wud adi commit suicide...love failure?
now geet getting much more mature...

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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful update
Loved the way Geet tried to control Maan's anger.
Poor Adi must be in so much trouble
and Maan shouting at him demanding resignation 😕
Good that Geet knocked some sense into Maan and asked him
to talk to Adi.
Hope Adi's problems get solved soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update... poor Adi.. y did he try to commit suicide???? luved the way geet handled maan n told him to control his anger... continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ..

thnx 4 d pm ..

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww so cute...but what the Heck...Adi tried to committ suicide..hhmm interesting..plz do continue

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