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hey!!!!!!!!!! dear nice short story ...plzzz update soon ... waiting lovley ...update
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Such an emotional part.
Maan made d correct decision.
Its either he did it intention or unintentional
but his disappearance did make a point for geet.
She realize her true feelings for maan.
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THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT

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Part 24

she screamed...maan...maan...maan...maan...her maan disappeared...she kept screaming her lungs out ...maan...maan...maan... until she totally became unconscious..

Geet opened her eyes...screaming...maan...

Maan who was working with his laptop in corridor suddenly got startled with scream of geet...

maan: geet!!!!!

he ran to his room...there he saw...geet on the bed...sitting ... with her eyes widened...breathing heavily...soaked in sweat...hands shivering...maan got scared about geet...he rushed to her...cupped her face in his hands...

maan: geet...geet...kya hua...

geet slowly turned her face towards maan...her maan...he was there before her...slowly her eyes started to recognize him...the shock in her eyes slowly got replaced with tears of love...she kept looking at him...continuously without an eyeblink...
she touched him with her hands...kissed him all over the face...not letting him to go...saying...maan...maan..maan...
..
maan sat there confused...

maan: geet...geet...kya hua...geet...koi bura sapna hey kya...?

geet hugged him tightly...very tightly not letting him to go and cried...

geet: maan...maan...aap kaha gaye the...mujhe chod ke..?.kaha gaye the aap?

she was crying continuously...maan understood that she had a nightmare...he took a breath of relief... geet was crying her heart out holding maan...

maan: geet...shaanth ho jao...mein yahi pe hu...tumhare paas...dekho...

geet broke from the hug...and slowly looked at maan with teary eyes...still she was in fear...she again hugged him saying maan...maan...mujhe chod ke math jayiye...

maan: geet...mein yahi peh hu...tumhe chod ke mein kaha jasaktha hu...tum shaanth hojao...mein yahi pe hu...yeh lo thoda paani pee lo...

geet looked at maan confused...and did what maan said...

maan hugged her...slowly caressing her back...trying to normalize her condition...

maan: mein yehi pe hu...bas ek bura sapna tha...aur kuch nahi...

Slowly geet became normal...she started to realize that it was a dream and maan is with her right now...again the scene of maan leaving her flashed in her mind...she once again hugged him in fear...

maan smiled ...

maan: geet...mujkhe kuch nahi hua...mein hamesha tumhare saath hu...mere tarf dekho...

geet slowly looked into maan's eyes...

maan: kya tumhe lagtha hey kabhi bhi tumhara maan tumhe chod ke jaayega?

geet looked at maan with tears in her eyes...the word 'leaving " again brought fear in her and she held maan tightly...

maan understood geet situation...to make her normal...she carried her in his arms into the garden...

maan held geet in his embrace...assuring her not to fear...his arms were making her feel secure as if she was in a castle...she laid there enjoying the peace ...


maan(with a low voice): geet...ab kaisa lag raha hey?

geet hugged him more tightly ...and simply nodded her head saying "achcha lag raha hey"

maan smiled...

maan: kya hua geet...kuch sapna dekha hey kya?

geet nodded her head saying "yes"

maan: kya sapna tha?

geet: nahi maan...mein woh sapna ko yaad bhi nahi karna chahthi...

maan: kyu? kya tha uss sapne mein...

her hands started to shiver...she looked into maan's eyes...

geet: maan uss sapne mein aap mujhe chod ke kahi dhur gaye the...mein aapko pagal ki tarah dund rahi thi...phir bhi aap mujhe nahi mila...

said these words she again cried and hugged maan...

maan caressed her back...to pacify her...

maan: geet...tum mujhse ithna...pyaar...

he stopped instantly...geet looked at maan...she understood what maan was about to say...

geet took maan's hand and kept it near her heart...

geet: maan...mujhe nahi patha ki yeh pyaar hey ya attraction...aur mein yej jaan na bhi nahi chahthi...mujhe sirf aap chahiye...mujhe sirf yeh patha hey ki mein aapke bina ek pal bhi nahi rehsakthi...zindagi ke aakri saans thak mein aise hi aap ki bahon mein rehna chahthi hu...bas...agar ise pyyar kehthe hey...then iam in love with u maan...

maan looked at geet in surprise...

geet: maan...i...lo...

maan closed her lips with his ...not letting geet to speak further...geet closed her eyes enjoying the passionate kiss from her maan...after several minutes they broke from the kiss...geet cheeks turned pink due to blushing...they spent there few hours in each other arms...celebrating their love day with kisses and passionate hugs...

geet: maan ...ab bahuth hogaya hey..chaliye andhar chalthe hey...subha aapko office jaana hey...

maan nodded her head saying "no" and kept his head on her lap...

maan: geet...mein soch raha hu...ki kyuna hum...baaki rasme aaj ...i mean abhi issi waqt shuru kare...(winking)

geet blushed at his words...she pushed maan

geet: aisa sochiyaga bhi math?

maan got confused...

maan: ab yeh kya hey geet? ab tho sab clear ho chuke hey na?

geet smiled...

geet: ha..ha...clear ho chuka hey...lekin...

maan : lekin kya?

geet: woh kya hey na...humara suhaag raath..aisa waisa nahi chalega...bahuth special hona chahiye

maan : special?

geet: haan...bahuth special...?

maan sighed...

maan: aage bhi bolo...woh special kya hey!

geet: samandar ke kinare...on a full moon day...with full of stars...cool breeze...humare suhaag raath aisa jaga hona chahiye...samjhe aap...yaad rakhiye aur tayyari kijiye...waise bhi mujhe bahuth neend arahi hey...mein jaa rahi hu...good night...

said these words geet left...

maan got another shock from his lovely wife...he took long breath...

maan: chalo maan beta ...tayyari mein lag jao...geet hey tho aisi...sabse hatke...har kaam nein variety chahthi hey...aakir SR mein bhi...hmmm

to be continued...
Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update
finally they are one
loved it
eagerly waiting for next part
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it loadz
awww bless im so glad it was dream
yay she said i love u
cant wait 4 da SR
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
Xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
ooohhh wwow that was awesome...yeh Geet bhi na, har wazqt ek naya rang dikati hai!!!😉
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Wonderful update.
It was all a dream then
But it was good since it gave the required realization to Geet.
Maan's comforting was so sweet.
Geet's demands for SR were super good
continue soon.

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