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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update
Geet is too innocent & Maan is too smart
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Posted: 14 years ago
Smart move maan.
So cute of geet, blabbering everything in front maan.
eager bout next update. thx for d pM
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Posted: 14 years ago
THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT

THANKS FOR COMMENTING


Part 22

geet: yeh call bhi aap ne hi karvaya hey na?

this time maan couldn't control his laugh...he busted out laughing...during which he failed to observe geet eyes which were sending virtual daggers on him...

geet got angry and started to leave...but maan held her wrist and pulled her onto him...

geet: chodiye mujhe...aaj aapne mujhe ullu banaya...(with anger)...mein bhi ek bewakoof ki tarah bina soche sab kuch boldiya...aaj jaise shareef dikthe hey...woh hey nahi...chodiye...

but maan was still smiling and this time he tightened his grip...

maan: cheating...hey babaji...everything is fair in love and war darling...

geet was still in anger...

geet: tho sharath jeethne keliye aap mujhe ullu banayenge?

maan this time made geet to sit on his lap...

maan: teek hey...agar tumhe iss baath ka bura laga...tho mein sorry kahunga...aur dubara aisa bhi nahi karunga...

geet's anger started to disappear...

geet: hmmm...tho sorry boliye...

maan: sorry tho mein bolunga...lekin sorry bolne ka tareeka alag hey mera...especially for my wife...

geet looked at maan in suspicion...

maan: woh kya hey na..".sorry geet"...mein jithne bhi letters hey ...mein ek ek letter keliye ek ek "woh" dekhar phir sorry bolunga...

geet got confused...

geet: woh?yeh "woh" kya hey maan?

maan: woh..ka matlab hey.(looking at her lips)

geet understood what maan was trying to say...she tried to get up immediately from his lap...but maan's hold was stronger...so geet attempts were failed...

maan: arey ruko geet...mujhe sorry tho bolne dho..

geet: sorry...nahi nahi...uska koi zaroorath nahi hey...

maan: nahi geet...mein ne tumhara dil dhukaya...tho sorry tho bolna hi padega...

geet: maan mein keh rahi hu na...uska koi zaroorath nahi hey

said these words she pushed maan with full force and started to run...maan also ran behind her saying

maan: arey geet...mein aise kaise tumhe jaane dhunga...sorry mujhe bolne dhe...

atlast maan caught hold of geet and said sorry to geet in his style☺️...geet didn't resist at all...which further motivated maan...to say more sorries☺️

finally they broke out from the sorry kisses...geet couldn't stand before maan...she was about to leave...but maan hugged her from behind...

maan: geet...mera iraada bas tumhara favorites ke baare mein jaanna tha...tumhe bewakoof banana nahi...agar tumhe issme kuch bhi bura laga...iam ready for punishment...

said these words maan knelt before geet...streching his arms and lowering his head...

geet could not control her tears...she made maan to stand...

geet: maan aap bhi na...pattha nahi kaise tarah baathein karthey hey...sach kahu tho...aap bahuth intelligent hey...iam impressed...

maan hugged her...

maan: ab se mein kabhi bhi aisa kaam nahi karunga...its my promise...

geet hugged him more tightly after hearing maan's words...

geet: ab tho chale...khana khane...

both maan and geet came down for dinner...

all were desi items...

geet: maan mujhe continental banana nahi aatha..isliye aaj yeh banaya...kal se seek lungi...

maan: koi baath nahi geet...aaj se desi khana hi khaathe hey...

geet smiled and fed maan with her hands...

after finishing dinner...maan sat in the garden...later geet joined him...

he kept his head on geet's lap...

maan: thanks geet...

geet: thanks kisliye maan...?

maan: aaj ka din memorable banane keliye...

geet smiled...

maan: aisa smile math dho geet...mein apne aap ko control nahi kar saktha...

geet blushed and said...

geet: chaliye andhar chalthe...raath bhi bahuth ho chuki hey...

maan: hmmm...geet mein tumse ek baath poochu?

geet: aap izzazath mangna kabse shuru kiya...?

maan : tho poochoo?

geet gave him a look...

maan: kya tumhe ab bhi lagtha hey ki yeh sab attraction hey? (with a pain in voice)

Till then the smile which was playing on geet lips suddenly disappeared...she remained silent...

to be continued...


Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update
love it
ps cont soonnn
thanks pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
Brother i have to read this story from the beginning. After i finish reading i will comment. This part itself is very amazing. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very nice update.
Geet was so mad with Maan
and he was such a tease.
In fact she somewhere enjoyed it too.
The birthday was beautifully celebrated.
Finally Maan putforth his question.
Wondering what Geet's answer would be.
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the last 2 updates...
maan bahut shathir nhikla yaar...
very impressive move by maan...
aur hamhari jhalli phir se sab kuch bhool kar keh diya...
waisey maan ke sorry kehne ka andaz acha hain...
but painfully when he asks if its attraction...felt really bad for him...
wats gonna b geet's answers...

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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh very nice update.
Hope geet soon accepts that its love nt attraction.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful update...tx😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Totally loving dis version of maan.
Notty Devil. Vry impressed wif his sorry method.
Finally maan asked her bout her true feelings.
Wonder wat its goin to be...


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