with love...maan (ss) part 32 updated pg 145 - Page 29

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome...i just feel their love...❤️
continue...👍🏼
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i m loving this!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow it was superb..
i'm loving it..
6 am
maan was still standing in geet's room looking at geet...
maan: iss geet mein kya jaadu hey...isko kithna bhi dekhu...phir bhi dubara dekhne ka mann karraha hey...
i really loved this bit.. it was sooo full of maans ove for geet.. it was amazing
do update soon
love
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Posted: 14 years ago
Waah waah maan saahab...kya tareeka dhunda hain apni biwi ko pataane ka!!!!

I'm sure soon he'll b shown giving classes on ''how 2 pataao ur wifey''😆

Lovely update dear

Cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update
Maan is so sweet
uummm good going
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Posted: 14 years ago
THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT

THANKS FOR COMMENTING


Part 16

maan looked at her loving wife who was enjoying his presence...maan smiled...

maan: ab tho ankhe kholo geet...mujhe dekho...

Geet slowly opened her eyes...to see maan...lying on her lap...The happiness of seeing maan flowed as tears from eyes...maan who was looking into her eyes for the first time noticed her love for him...the love which she was denying...the love which she was calling attraction...

maan (monologue): aaj mein geet ki ankho mein mere liye ek ajeeb sa ehsaas dekha...woh ehsaas jo mujhe geet ko dekh kar hotha hey...iska matlab...woh mujhse bahuth pyaar karraha hey...aankhe kabhi jhoot nahi bolthe...geet ab tum pakdi gayi...main dektha hu...aur kithne din tum apne aap ko rok paogi

maan waved his hand before geet who was lost in his eyes...

maan: geet...geet...

geet came back to senses...

geet: woh mein...woh...mein...

geet felt restless with maan intense looks...

maan: kuch bolne ki zaroorath nahi hey geet...mujhe sab patha hey

geet : kya patha hey aapko?

maan: jho tujhe nahi patha hey...

geet: maan!!!!!!!!!!(like a child)

maan: ok...ok... ...tumhe phone kaisa laga

geet wanted to thank maan whole heartedly for mobile...she this time gathered courage to look into maan's face...his face looked dull...with swollen eyes...and dark circles

geet understood that maan didn't slept last night

geet got very upset...

maan: bolo mobile kaisa laga?

geet: aap raath ko saya nahi na?(with anger)

maan takenback with sudden change in geet behavior

maan: geet...tumhe kaise patha...

geet: woh baath chodiye...kyun nahi soya raath ko...boliye maan...apna sehath se zyaada kaunsa kaam tha aapko...

maan: agar tum jaisa biwi ho tho...neend ayega kaise?

geet: mazaak math kariye maan...bathayiye kyun nahi soya aap raath ko...

maan was silent...geet started thinking...

geet: kya iss phone ki wajah se tho nahin?

maan winked at geet...geet now understood ...she became angry...

geet: rakhiya aapka phone aapke paas...mujhe nahi chahiye...yeh kaisa pagal pan hey...ek phone keliye raath poora jaag ke rehna...aapka health kya hoga...aur ab apko office janahey...aapko kithna stress hoga...kyu maan...kyun aap mujhe sathana chahthe hey...agar aap mujhe phone karreedhna chahthey the...aaj shyam kho bhi kar sakthe the na...magar nahi...

geet got up from bed and stood near the window...fuming at maan

maan smiled at geet words...slowly approached her...and hugged her from behind...


geet: chodiye maan...

maan turned geet towards him...

maan: haan geet paagal pan hi hey...kya karu tere iss khobsoorthi mujhe pagal kar raha hey...har waqt bas tunmhi nazar arahi ho...kya karu...aaj ki subha mere liye bahuth special...hey...isliye aaj mein sabse pehle tumhare awwaz sunna chahtha ...agar mein kal raath phone nahi liya...tho aaj sabse pehle tumhara awaaz kaise suntha...bolo...teri awaaz sunne ki bina mein ek pal bhi nahi rehsaktha hu geet...aur sawal hey health.ka..jab sanjeevani jaise tum mere saath ho...mera health ko kuch nahi hoga...geet...agar ab bhi tumhe lagtha hey ki mein ne galath kiya...tho tumhari jho bhi sazaa hey mujhe manzoor hey...

geet totally forgot her anger by those words...she was simply lost in those words...without saying anything she hugged him...

geet: aap bade badmaash ho...(smiling)

maan: woh tho hu...chalo...gussa tho gaya hey na...

geet: lekin dubara aisa nahi hona chahiye...

maan: ji madam...aur phone kaisa laga

geet: bahuth achcha...bilkul aap jaisa...

maan smiled...

they broke from the hug...

geet: maan atleat thodi dher keliye aap so jayiye...mein aapke keliye breakfast bana dethi hu...

maan: lekin mein aaj office nahi jaonga...

geet: teek hey na...a u can take some rest...

maan: geet...pehle poori baath tho sunlo...hum aaj bahar jaa rahe hey...jaldi tayyar ho jao...

geet: bahar jaa rahe hey...kaha?

maan: geet tum kithne questions poochthe ho?

geet: bathayiye na!!!!!!!

maan: tum jao pehle tayyar ho jao...

geet: lekin aapko sona hey na...

without listening to her words...maan pushed her into washroom...

geet: maan...maan

maan: geet...jaldhi...ek ghante mein tayyar ho jao...i will also get ready

After 1 hour

maan got ready and was waiting in hall for geet...geet was taking too long to get ready...

maan: geet aur kithna time logi...jaldhi kar...agar tum jaldhi nahi kiya...mein khudh hi andhar avunga...

maan's words made geet to stratle...

geet: nahi..nahi...mein bas arahi hu

geet cameout of the room in a redsaree...maan stood there frozen after seeing geet...

geet: maan...chale...

but maan was lost in geet's beauty...

geet: maan...maan

maan came back to senses...

maan: geet...tumhe kiss karne ka man kar raha hey...karu kya?

geet turned pink with his words...

maan: bolo geet...karu kya?

said these words maan started moving towards geet...

geet simply closed her eyes...maan held her close to him...and gently kissed her on forehead...geet slowly opened her eyes and smiled at maan...

maan: chale...

geet nodded saying "yes"

maan took out his jeep...

geet: maan yeh program aap kal hi banaya kya?

maan: nahi geet...aaj subha mujhe yaad aaya

geet: ab tho bathayiye hum kaha jaa rahey hey?

maan: maa ke paas...

to be continued...




Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice update
loved it so sweet maan..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it loadzz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update. wow maan is progressing in his mission😆 atleast he got forehead kiss. aweee he is taking geet to maa. so sweet of him. waiting for next update😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awww so cute!! Maan is such a perfect husband!! I hope Geet admits soon that she loves him dearly:)

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