|Piya- Who am I?| OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: Anamika1570

Hey! This is awesome! Keep writing... You have it in you...

Originally posted by: Icecreamx

Beautifuly penned down!

You know what the strangest part is? No, not that I'm growing an extra pair of teeth but the fact that none of the two worlds accepts me.

^^

How cathchy n true...none of the worlds accepts Pia...neaither Abhay actually, he has been in world of the dead, but even there he is a stranger. *sigh* these two lonely souls.

As for the show i hope the scenario will be somthing like, these symptoms slowly goes away with the second and third moon passing, as its to soon for the turning for Pias charcters, but in the end of course the option to become one will be there as she has already been bitten once.

But a cure from the superiors is also possible.

loved this line

'The only time I feel like myself is when I'm with him'

Originally posted by: Ritzie

You were RIGHT - You are so much like Abhay, always blaming yourself for others mistakes. 😆. I think Poco, rightly called you Buddhu as you are one😆. Arre yaar, if I misunderstood the projection of what the end means for Pia was to end the life and not the relationship with Abhay, then it is ME not you. 😆

And for Abhay - (see even I create confusions), I meant Abhay won't want this kind of Pia but he will want this for Pia. Okay, if this meant that Pia is not becoming a Vampire then Abhay will want Pia to choose it.

And no your version of Pia is not different. Your Pia is independent and unselfish. She analyses her situation and takes her decisions. She thinks of others before her.

And I love you too😳 You are an amazing writer.

Originally posted by: -Hello-

Beautifully written!! its at least good that she knowns whats happeining to her in your OS. Seeing her lost and confused without knowing anything abt it on the show is painfull:(

'The only time I feel like myself is when I'm with him'

^^*sigh*

Originally posted by: amail1601

Awwwwww! That was beautiful!!

You've brought out the confusion in her mind really well - how she is forever trapped between two worlds, not because one is forcing her to choose the other, but because they both are rejecting her. How it feels to be rejected....to not fit in anywhere....to want something so much, and yet suffer for it, and then when you are sooo close to getting it, it rejects you...to be pushed away and to be made to change so drastically that you don't know yourself anymore.......

*sighs* You're a brilliant writer Anu!

*hugs*

first of all Anu, amazingly written 👏....all thoughts and fears of Pia very beautifully expressed 😊