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Posted: 14 years ago
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Your ff is good you should go on
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Posted: 14 years ago
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u must make its !! i want to see piya and abhay marriage with small vampire kids .and do PM me after to make ur 1st FF update ..i will wait 4 it .

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aromal

u must make its !! i want to see piya and abhay marriage with small vampire kids .and do PM me after to make ur 1st FF update ..i will wait 4 it .


Abhay and Piya will have a baby, but what what gender do u want? or do u want twins?? i can edit it?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: syria2014


Abhay and Piya will have a baby, but what what gender do u want? or do u want twins?? Or do u just want child that will be either a boy or girl? let me know. before i post it

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: syria2014

Guys, I have a FF which I have written in a free time. I just need to type it. It's not be good as poco , kaa7eela, matmango , or akansha. so bear with me. i just wanted to write to lighten up the air here. I am tried of all the rohna, and dohna and pyek here. my ff will be mix of humour and seriousness. it's gonna cover 8 chapter, and if u want more just tell me as i go and upload it. it's gone through abhiya marriage to her being pregnancy. pregnancy track is hilariously with little bit of seriousness. 😆. i hope i get a support on this. please let me know if u guys think i should go ahead with it.and if u guys think it's good idea. i will have the 2 chapters uploaded by today. 😳.i need your support. i promise to make it best , and give it a best shot . 😳

Ladies giving birth to human child is so painful toh apni pia ke vampire baacho ke saath kya haalat hogi😲😲
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG!!! AbhIya after marriage and kids too!!!🥳

I am super excited to read it. I love reading FFs. Please pm me when you update. And please don't get angry with me if I will be late commenting there. 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Character Sketch
Raichand Family
Piya: She loves Abhay to death. She can be stubborn , and possessive when it comes to Abhya. She is finally together with Abhay after going through so many hardships.
Abhay: The heart and soul of this FF. Piya is his life, and everything begins and ends with Piya. They both are the cutest , adorable.

Chand: Has come to accept Piya and Panchi as his bahus.

Haseena: She is just happy to see her 2 sons happy, and have found love. Together Hassena, Panchi, and Piya can keep the Raichands mans on their toes.

Sid: Loves Panchi very much!! He is a changed man, and is thankful he found Panchi because she helped him redeem from his sins.Loves to tease Panchi ,and have little cute fight with her.

Panchi- Abhay's Bhabhi . Sid's wife. The elder bahu of the house. Married, and became a vampire to be with Sid. She sometimes get irritated when Sid teases her, and but in the end but laugh at stupid noke jokes they throw at each other.
Rathore Family
Misha and Kabir: After Piya rejected him, and went with Abhay. He fell for Misha. Love her more then anything in the world. Misha is married to him. They both love each other.
The Dobriyals
Madhu and Arnab- Proud parents of 3 girls. They are just happy Misha, and Panchi have accepted Piya, and forgiven Arnab.

Ruhi, Angad- Adorable Couple!! Married!! Ruhi is pregnant with Twins.

T- Well, she ended of marrying a rich, old guy.😆

Rumi- The essence of this FF. and story. Abhay 's distant cousin

Edited by syria2014 - 14 years ago
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Chapter 1: The Proposal Part 1

Take a deep breath Abhay said to himself. Calm Down!!1 You are just acting like a child. Abhay reminded himself!! Abhay had never been so nervous in his life. Today was the greatest day of his life . He was finally going to ask permission to marry Piya (the love of his life, and angel who has brought light in to his life). She was the reason he was for his existence. Piya!! just thinking of her name always brought a smile to once his frown face. Her loved her more than anything in his life, and the extent of love he had for her could not be measured. Abhay pondered how in the hell did he get so lucky to have such an angel in his life. Piya was that way. Anybody could easily for her . Her pure innocence, her beauty, her simplicity, and her nature of sacrificing herself for other people's happiness just made everybody adore, and love her. The superiors had given a warning if Piya was not turned with in a year, they would both suffer consequences. He did not want piya to be pressured and be turned. Piya had assured Abhay , she was ready and she would be willing to go through it, if it meant be together with forever. Abhay always knew he always wanted to spend an eternity with piya, but he knew it was always impossible him being a dead walking soul,and her being a human. But when the superior had given their verdict , and decision, Abhay had decided he was going to seal the deal and make piya his. He wanted a throw such a lavish wedding that the whole town and vampire society would know the place Piya had in his life. He smiled at thought of this. The surprise , and everything had been planned. Abhay could not help but ponder the extent of journey both Piya had to suffer and surmount to fight for their love, and be together. People are right all good things do come to end, and his and piya's love was heading for a fresh new chapter in their life. He could wait to ask Piya to marry him ,and see her walk down the aisle.So many things had changed within these few months. Sid had a change of heart, and found redemption in Panchi. Panchi had decided to become a vampire, and be with Sid forever. Abhay was truly happy that his brother had changed, and had found love in Panchi. Abhay could sense the happiness that his brother felt, and he knew Sid's new profound was real this time. Sid and
Panchi had been married for nearly six months now. He truly could not help admire these 2. Misha had moved on from Shaurya, and married Kabir. Piya wish was to see her first two older sister get married then she wanted to settle down. He knew that was her biggest wish.Suddenly, he heard a familiar noise in the living room. He saw Panchi and Sid aruging.
Abhay: Guys!! what this all commotion about? Abhay said looking at the jeweleries laid out in front of the living room table.

Panchi: Abhay tell him Piya will like this as her wedding gift.

Sid: No my love!! She will like this one!! Sid said pouting at Panchi

Panchi: Shut up Sid!! That puppy dog face won't work with me!!

Sid: It always does my love!! u can't help, but for my good looks!!!

Panchi: Arrogant ass**

Sid: What did u just say my love to your darling husband?

Panchi- I just saying my darling husband since when u became so interested in jeweleries?

Sid: Since, I my idiot brother finally realized to make Piya's his, and I am going to be the best man. God!! you waited long for this little brother . And , I am sure Piya will like this he said holding the diamond necklace, and I am her soon to be her brother in law

Panchi: I am her sister, and we have connection. I am sure she will like mine!!!

Sid: The war is on my dear!!! let's see who wins!! May the best man wins.

Abhay: Enough guys!!! U guys are arguing here, and I am going insane whether you guys completed the task i gave you!!!

Sid: Don't worry little brother when I start something, I finish it unlike ur bhabhi here. He said teasing Panchi

Panchi: Heehee!!! Panchi said angrily, and walked away. Sid, since ur so interested making fun of me, I am sure you will enjoy me not talking you for the whole dat. Panchi angrily walks away.
Sid: My brother!! A advice when u get married remember no matter what happens u have to stand up u rights in front of wife/
Abhay : Stop giving me lecture, and please see the preparations.

Sid: Yes sir!!! Laughing Sid walks away.
more coming up. chap 1 includes the whole proposal ,and more it's long . so bear with me.






Edited by syria2014 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey dear !!!!!!!!!!!
eagerly waiting for u too continue
do pm me
nyce part !!!!!!!!!
realyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
looking forward to it
Edited by charmingkiller - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: charmingkiller

hey dear !!!!!!!!!!!

eagerly waiting for u too continue
do pm me
nyce part !!!!!!!!!
realyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
looking forward to it


thank u so much. i will have 2 chapters updated by tomorrow. and i am working on a movie ,a wedding movie. it's gonna be filled with pics, and a song. and how exactly abhiya wedding will look like.😳
Edited by syria2014 - 14 years ago

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