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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: MaanEET_FAN

ok me going...

wil come aftr some time!...

Warning for Reet: chorne vali nahi hoon mai ye FF chahe kitne hi teasers dedo.. chahe kitna hi late kar lo... u hav to give an update!...😆
coz i m not sanjay singhaniya of ghajhni.. bt rancho of 3idiots...😈😳

update soon yar...

I am with u priya
reet we don't suffer from any short terms so u better update😈
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: basicquestion1


oyeee i'm a one fine fighter for men's rights. no male bashing😆
i've nvr seen a bad guy in my life. it's filled with one heck of amazing list of men...n very few sweet girls🤣


plzz forward some names from ur list to me...I have really not come across a guy who is not a jerk😡
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shining_moon

plzz forward some names from ur list to me...I have really not come across a guy who is not a jerk😡


that's hilarious...i'm guessing that's y i always end up having a fight with random girls. it's so easy for all the girls to call men jerks and i just can't on any level relate to that. i was very close to all my male cousins n yes i played cricket n basketball with them but they wud let me have a sneak at "pretty women" 😆 so we were both equally doing favors to eachother. they wud pass a kleenex whn needed...then my bst friend is a guy that i so randomly met on a street one day. he saved me from sumthing ...it's the sweetest interaction one can ever get in their life. then comes my luv life..very simple but very bizarre too. so yeah..do i need to mention dad, brother, and uncles and brothers in law ...
and now my father in law...ahhh c the list keeps on going on.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: basicquestion1


that's hilarious...i'm guessing that's y i always end up having a fight with random girls. it's so easy for all the girls to call men jerks and i just can't on any level relate to that. i was very close to all my male cousins n yes i played cricket n basketball with them but they wud let me have a sneak at "pretty women" 😆 so we were both equally doing favors to eachother. they wud pass a kleenex whn needed...then my bst friend is a guy that i so randomly met on a street one day. he saved me from sumthing ...it's the sweetest interaction one can ever get in their life. then comes my luv life..very simple but very bizarre too. so yeah..do i need to mention dad, brother, and uncles and brothers in law ...
and now my father in law...ahhh c the list keeps on going on.

u r really lucky to have such wonderful people around u...n as I have said before most of them r jerks not all though I have not met the nicer ones...n yes my dad n bro r exceptions as they r family...so they do love me...but apart from them rest r just the same
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shining_moon

u r really lucky to have such wonderful people around u...n as I have said before most of them r jerks not all though I have not met the nicer ones...n yes my dad n bro r exceptions as they r family...so they do love me...but apart from them rest r just the same

don't worry..u only need one to change u'r perspective.😆 wish u all the luck if u already not hitched.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey guys is reet updating today😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ arzoo ...experience talking haan ??? @ all - update done waiting for last check !
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Posted: 14 years ago
yup..yup yup..atleast 85 % of my all happy memories can b associated with the other specie. as u said...kabhi neem neem..kabhi sakth sakht

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Posted: 14 years ago
part- whatevr i dont remember

Geet the speaker !

After slamming the door on his face ...i rushed to aadi's car ...not wanting to tolerate his jabs for another moment ..! he was so rude ..god damn it ,..!!

I mounted on the front seat of aadi's jeep ...and took a long breath to control my anger and irritation ...

I felt aadi glancing at me...but uttered nothing ...!instead switched on the ignition key ...and the next accelerator groaned...

I sighed... no endearment ...no greeting ..nothing...!! aadi must be still mad on me...but I m still unable to understand why it is...

I looked at the rear view mirror...

There he is... why is he standing out of the car... does he want to reach me...? I didn't understand ... I bent on the mirror to look at him ...he was holding something ...i squinted my eyes

Oh ...i guess I know ...!

I leaned back ...! yes I left the ring there ...cause it's the way he might feel that doesn't keep importance to me...

I watched him ...waited for him to shout ...but he didn't ...in stead he was staring at his finger which might held the ring ...

I watched him turning smaller and smaller ...i stared at the mirror until his last sign wiped...

I closed my eyes... and sighed...

I will never understand him ... he will always be the puzzle for me...

I can understand if he is angry with me for the ring ...if I had been in his place then I would have reacted much more... but he still thinks of my protection ... I guess he will never stop caring for me...

But in no way I m going to forgive him for this ...he didn't even ask me what happened ...oh like he can know everything happening in my life ...uh ..! for once he could have allowed me to give a single explanation ...but no ...his ego will be damaged na ... if he shows interest in this ... it would be obvious he is prying in my relationship status...! and that would mean a lot of other things too...!!!

Damn it ..!!

I clenched my teeth !! such a hypocrite ...!

I know he feels for me...damn ...just why cant he spell it for the love of god ...!!

Most importantly what is the need of going to that nasty pub again ...! wasn't he satisfied enough torturing me...!!

But He announced it before we fought about the ring ...! so in no way he was going to goa because of this shit !

Darn love ...!!

What to do with me...?

As if I care ...!

Go and dance with silly bimbos ...!! but just get off my head ...! I slammed my fist on the door...

Aadi glared at me... and I cursed myself...certainly he wonk like if I use his car to show my anger on !!...I sighed...!

Thank god ...he didn't ask me anything ...!

I noticed aadi from corner my eyes... he was driving like a robot ...!like made only to drive the car ...! my dirjee used to drive in this way before we lost the car ..! like anything can happen in the middle of the road at any moment ...he did never let go the speedometer cross 40 km /hour..

Talk about dirjee...made me remember him...oh god ...! this maan sigh khurana made me forget my all relationship ..!! jerk ..!! I cursed ...may be a little louder than I thought !!

What did u say ...aadi squinted his eyes...

mmm...nothing that can interest you ..uh ...can I borrow your phone ...? I politely asked ...

no ...! his brief and stern reply came...

what ...?? it was my turn to get surprised...

I said NO ...!! he repeated..!! clear and louder...!

I was astounded at his cold tone ..!

Aadi ...i need to call my dirjee...!! I need to know hows he doing !

He is fine ! at his own home ..i checked ..! he was brief again ..!

Whats wrong with him ...? I couldn't understand ..! but if he is behaving in this way ...i m not going to spit honey on him ...!!

Aadi can I please borrow your phone ...! I put my plea in a rather irritated and firmer tone ...!!

Aadi changed the gear and pressed the accelerator harder ...!!

I said your dirjee is absolutely fine ..i myself sent him home ..though he didn't know who

Was he hurt ...? my anxious voice cut him abruptly !

He looked at me sensing the urgency in my voice ...

No ...he was not ...!! their target was only you ...!

Oh ...!! pujaa?? She was hurt ...badly ...it was bleeding ..i saw her wounded ..oh my god...! how can I forget ...! guilt was drowning me...! I covered my mouth by my hands ..!

Relax ...it was a small cut on her leg ...the paramedics had taken care of her ...

Are u sure ...!! I was not ready to believe him ..

He rolled his eyes...!! but didn't say anything ..

I hope she is ...i mumbled...!! how can I just forget about them ...

The boss of yours makes my head spin around whenever he meets me ...i groaned balling my fist ..!

Only if he was here ...i would have ...i would have ...killed him ???

Aadi drove on ...!

How is dev ...??

Aadii didn't reply ...i watched him to clench his teeth ! whats wrong ...? he drove on like he hadn't hear my voice ..

Aadi how is dev ...? I asked again ...!

I didn't find it necessary to take care of your fiancee...! he replied nonchalantly ...

Not again ...!! I moaned in despair...! but decided to ignore the term ...

Aadi I just asked is he okay ..or the goons have targeted him too...

Your boss has a good tight security than you ...aadi uttered with the same nonchalance ...i sighed ..guessing he wouldn't reveal more,...as far dev was concerned ..i knew aadi was right ...! a government lawyer gets the best security for protection ...as well these types of incidents are not new from him ...

Aadi for the last time I requesting you can I please have the phone ..?

What for ...? you have all the necessary information... he snapped back ..!

Aadi for the love of god stop being this inconsiderate ...!! I need to call home ...and I m pretty sure your boss wouldn't mind me doing this ...

And lastly let me tell you ..i m coming with you in my own will ...go and confirm that from your arrogant boss...!! my voice raised not able to control anymore...

Whats wrong with this people ...they jumps into the conclusion and treats me like a bloody prisoner !!!

FINE ...!! he retorted and threw his phone on my lap ..!

I was disgusted at his behavior ! but didn't say a word ...!!

Somehow I guessed the irritation is towards dev ! but what is it to do with him ...! I don't understand at all ...their sudden antipathy to me !

Okay ...i understand maan's ...that hypocrite !urgh ..! but whats wrong with ...!! I scrunched my nose ...

Then the thing struck me...ohhh...how can I forget ...chief breaths aadi breaths ... chief holds it ..aadi holds it ...!! lord ...!!

his master's voice ...!...I groaned ...!!

Aadi narrowed his eyes at me.,... and I plastered a smile at him cheekily ..!! ...before punching my home number in his phone ...!!

Hello dirjee...its me.. geet ...!!

Geet puttar ..where are you ...how are you ...geet ..why aren't you home ...geet you there ... geet why aren't you saying something ?? my dirjee's anxious voice blew at me as he picked the phone after a single ring ...!

Dirjee...relax...give me a scope to talk na...i complained ...

Ohh beta...i m so worried...

You were dirjee...not now..i m absolutely fine ...!! tell me are you okay ?? dirjee you are fine na ...? I couldn't hold the eagerness off my voice ...!

Yes beta I m fine ...but where are you ..?

Dirjee...i m safe and sound ...tell me hows puja ...!

She is okay now ...probably resting at her own home ...but beta ...why didn't you come home ...?

Dirjee ..i cant come home now..before I could say more dirjee stopped me..

Beta ...dev was very much worried about you ...i don't know whats happening ..but somebody has attacked him too last night ... I don't know why they came...before dev's guard could catch them ...they fled away ..

I know dirjee ..why they had come ..

You know ...? oh ...! listen beta ..come home ..dev is very much worried about you ...i will just call him and let him know you are fine /.

NO...!!! no ...! you are not going to do anything sort of that ...!! I almost yelled ... stiffened in my seat ...

Hearing my sudden yell aadi turned toawards me...but I ignored and kept talking ..

Dirjee...listen ...you are not going to tell dev that I had called you ...please listen to me...dont let him know anything about me...

But beta hows that possible ..he is your fiancee... he is concerned ab

Dirjee...there are reasons ...i cant explain everything to you now...but as of now I would suggest you to maintain distance from him cause...whatever happening because of our work ...so it would be better for your safety that you stay away from all this ...!

Ohh ..okay ...! but I still don't understand why don't you once call him and let him know that you are okay !..

..dirjee was not at all convinced ...

I can not dirjee... and trust me ..this wont harm him anyway ... I will come back and have a talk with him ...but till then I don't want him to know anything about him ...

But beta...he has already involved police and everybody after you ...

I moaned in despair...!!

Dirjee...i have been saved by a police only ...! okay I will see what I can do ...but you don't get involved...it might cost ...uh ...i wasn't able to finish ..that I m scared of my dirjee's safety..!

I understand beta ...a voice came over after a long pause...you are worried about my safety ..!

Yes dirjee... please stay away from all this things ..! i sighed ..!

Okay ...i will do that ...and keep in contact with me...

I will dirjee... do not worry ..! I will be fine !

Bahe guru de khalsa ...bahe guru de fateh ..! I heard him murmur the prayer ..before we hung up ..

The drive was absolutely silent after that ... none of us exchanged another single word after that ...

My thoughts drifted towards maan ...!

He was not this rude from a long time ... the more I tried to keep my anger constant with him ...the surge of dejection seeped in ...

He had his reasons to be angry with me...but at least he could hear me out ...

It shouldn't have happened ...

What I did entirely wrong ...!

I had got this feeling something is wrong about dev's behavior ...but I ignored busy in my own miseries ...i missed the blooming problem ...

I closed my eyes and sequenced the events all together !...

That was the first day of all these when me and dev was having dinner together ...

Flashback ...

So ...do you like it ..? he asked stirring the float observing geet keenly across the table ...who was busy gobbling the spoon full of ice cream ..

I loved the dinner ...and specially the desert ! ...she uttered with a mouth full of rum and raisin ice cream with maple sauce on it ...i blindly love your choice ...!! Yummy...!! u know the absolute way to please a lady ...! she warmly complimented dev ...

Now That's a compliment !

Dev smiled admiringly at her Kiddish face... you know geet ...my mom used to say I am good for nothing a dry boy ...who has his world confined within law...I guessed I don't do much good when it comes to ladies.. she keeps on saying if this continues I will remain a bachelor all my life...but feeling good that my choice could please a lady !

Oh dev ...! that's absolutely a wrong conception of yours...you do everything from heart and that makes me conclude you will make a good husband ... !

Do you really feel so ...?

Of course dev ...! no doubt in that ...geet remarked putting down the spoon on the table !

I sighed ..and remembered when the next time the matter came in our conversation ...!

Why are you so lost dev ? anything wrong ..?

Hmm... yes...oh no ...nothing ..! he quickly averted the question ...

Come on dev ...you can share it with me...umm...if not I m prying in your personal matters ...

Hey ..nothing is like that ...you are my friend geet ...dont talk like that ...actually I m musing over a thought ...that I should settle down now ...

Whoa...!! that's great !!do you like someone ..

Uh ...eh ...dev gulped... I guess I do ...!

Wow ...!! that's something ...!! ...so who's the lucky girl dev ...and errr...you selected the girl and never told me about it ...i m offended ...geet made a mock anger face ..crossing the hands on her chest !

Are you serious ...!! dev's immediate response came ...

Ofcourse I m ...someone has become your so close that you have started keeping things from me...hmmm...i m afraid you have to compensate it ...geet winked at him ...

Compensate ...oh yeah ...dev sounded confused...uh ..you are jealous ..?

What ..? why would I be jealous ...a surprised geet remarked ...

Sir ...judge has arrived in the court ...its the time the person intervened and their conversation stopped there ...!

I wish we have completed the discussion ... that actually never took place between us ,...

There would have no misinterpretation like today ... the day when dev asked me that he is feeling nervous to propose the girl I had assured him that no-one can reject a kind hearted gentleman like him ...i should not have said that ...i never thought I was the girl all this during ,...

Even he had shared this with dirjee...the day when I had found him talking with my dirjee in my home ... I suspected something is wrong ...cause their awkward position of sitting ...dev was kneeling in front of my dirjee sat on the couch ...i asked them about their matter of discussion ...but dirjee said he has come here to take proposing tips for his gal ...stupid me...i believed them and snapped out the eerie thought in my head of something wrong going on...i wish I didn't ..!rather cleared out my confusions ...

But somehow deep inside I wanted to avoid further problems as it was enough in my complicated life ...my escapist mind conducted me ...

...and even when the day he has asked me to accompany him to the jewelers to pick up some gifts for his family and would be fiance I didn't mind helping at all ..i was grateful to dev for supporting me throughout my career ...he was a great friend ...and I did when he for the first time asked for my help ... I didn't doubt ...i wish I had doubted ...and pondered over ...

But hell...! I was so preoccupied with chief's confusing avatars ..! he is entangled in my life in every possible way ...and today after so long distance ..he just walked past of me...

I tried not to mourn over that stupid who left me for some stupidest reason ...i guess...

He would come back ...wouldn't he... this time too ...neither I asked ..nor he told ...

Will he come back ..?? at all ?

It had been 2 hours since I entered den ...for the 2nd time in my life ...

I had been offered breakfast by sunaina ..but I denied ...i was not feeling like to eat anything ... i was sitting on the bed of room I previously stayed ...

Aadi was on his silent mode ...after that argument in the car we didn't talk ... he is treating me like he never knew me before...okay ...if he doesn't want to talk and sort out the matters I m too not interested ...i grumbled adamantly ...!...

But how long ...how long m I going to wait here ...and for what ..for whom ...?

He didn't care at all...could he feel how badly I wanted to talk with him ..? I don't know why do I feel so insecure without him ...every time it felt like I will never be able to meet him again ...i hated this feelings it scared the hell out of me...

I don't know if I was supposed to wait for him ...if he would be coming back at all...i m tired waiting ...! wait for him ...his love ...his talk ..and all n everything about him ... !

I don't want to cry ...i am tired crying too...the hollowness in my stomach ..uh m feeling horrible ...

I hated being alone ...cause every time I was alone I craved for him ...i had a nagging feeling each time he left me that he will not meet me again ...
he was like a disease disseminating through my soul...and I could do nothing about it ...except letting him engulf my remaining senses ...

Love is a malignant cancer ...! I sighed...

probably going outside and talking with the others would help dissolving this lump in my throat ...!! I rose and walked out of my room ... I watched the three to sit casually and talk between themselves ... rishi wasn't there from the very morning ..

Hey ...! yash called out as he saw me sneaking in the dining ...!

Hi ..! I mouthed hesitantly

...he greeted me with a warm smile ...

That made me near him and sat over ...how's mahi and your son doing ...i gleefully asked ...i adored the couple last time I saw them together with the tiny baby cuddling in mah's lap ...

You know what mahi had never looked so beautiful now she looks holding her son in her arms ... ...sunaina remarked...to which yash blushed grinning wide...a happy father ...!

I smiled warmly at sunaina who returned it sneaking a glance over aadi ...i understood and turned to yash ...so how they are ...? I again asked ...

They all are doing good...said a very enthusiastic yash ...and soon we got engrossed in his eventful life which were mostly filled with his little son ...!

I had noticed sunaina and aadi to walk away from there ...but tried not to notice... cause it did hurt me ...!

But how long I could chat with yash ...soon we felt short of words and after sometime sunaina had something very serious to discuss with him ...so he too walked away ...

I came back in my room ...sensing I can not be the part of their discussion anymore...

Some more hours passed ..i nibbled the lunch sitting in my room ..i had decided not to join them ...since two other members are not comfortable with me... I was feeling left out ...and angry

Knowingly he has left me here ...what kind of treatment is this ...? would anybody answer me...i tried counting the trees outside the window ...then even tried following a track of ants in the garden ...i tapped my foot disgusted with the silence ... but time was passing very slow ...

My self-confidence was giving up ... i was tired and helplessly suffocated with their silent treatment ... often felt like going up and ask --- at least tell me what did I do so wrong to be treated like this ...

Okay I can understand aadi's behavior ...he is a little too much devoted to his master ...but su...at least she could have a little chat with me ... the hello from her was a mechanical one ...and rest of the gestures...it wasn't that she wasn't talking with me at all...she was...like would you like some tea ...would u have more vegetable ..or may be ..would you take a nap ...or just ...do you need something ...?

Slowly all my answers were becoming negative ...

It was almost afternoon ...

Tired me slumped on the bed... and tried closing my eyes ...

I couldn't hide it anymore ...i was missing him terribly ...! I didn't want to stay here without him ... but I hoped he would come once ...but didn't know if he will come at all...

I hugged the pillow tight to my chest !before I could shut the moan escaped...

Come back please...! let me explain...!

Slowly with time I was getting this idea ..before if he had even a plan to come back to see me...he would not do that anymore ... why would he come to meet someone else's fiancee ...

Always this gap ...the lack of communication had been a trouble for us...

I was losing hope .. if he doesn't come back at all...then again that life that indefinite wait ...after this misunderstanding !..

I cant afford ...i just cant ... I have to talk to him ...i got up and headed to aadi ...

Who was busy on laptop and simultaneous calls ...i waited quite a long time to finish his calls ...and then approached him ...

I want to talk to maan ...please dial his number ...

Aadi was terribly shocked hearing that ...

What the hell ...!! he checked the surrounding in a panicked face ...

None is here .!!...i informed knowing whats going on in his head..

How do you know his name ...!! he exclaimed still not over with the shock ...!

I let out a small smile ...!

May be he trusts me more than you do ...! I softly said and added... I know a lot ... !

Don't take his name ...

I know ...but I did cause none is here ...sunaina busy in kitchen and yash helping out ...i was happy that finally aadi was breaking into a conversation ...

Whatever ...!! he shrugged coldly proving me wrong ...i cant call him whatever you want you have t...he was muttering while resuming back to his work when i cut him abruptly /...

...

Oh please cut the crap ...! I need to talk to him ...and I will talk to him ...! do you get it !! I almost shouted not able to bear his constant negative answers ...

I was irritated with his silly behavior ...whatever it is between me and maan ...why is aadi behaving so stupid ...it was not expected from him ..not at all...i thought he understands how much I love him ... okay ..i know I have not said that to him ...but how can he just take single handed conclusion about something he doesn't know at all...

Aadi was flabbergasted at my sudden outburst ...! he just stared at me ...

Cut the staring session and call him ..

He has asked not to call him while he is at goa ... aadi tried reasoning ..but I was too mad to hear him ...his forbidding aadi to call added fuel to my anger !

Ohh really ...!! to hell with his do and donts..! I want to talk to him and that's it ...!!! I exclaimed in defiant tone with hands on my hips ...

But you are not getting my point ...! he has

I don't want to aadi ... I will handle him myself ...you just dial his number ...!

He sighed and took out his mobile ...after punching the number he glanced at me for the final time before hitting the call button ...

~*~*~*~*~

Hey guru ...!! did ya fix that ...that deal of Mashu ...! what does the pig want..?

Rheo ...! man !! don't get hyper !! u know what u need ...!! a long glass of screw driver ...! and m gonna make that for you !!

No tell me what's his new demand to close the case...

Did I tell you how sexy u look with light shining in your bald head when it turns red at ur huffing puffing ...!! guru smirked ...! well mashu had called for you ..asking if he can do anything more for you ...!!!

Rheo chuckled at his response...and shook his head ..!! u r such a dog guru ...!!

That is what his Guru is ...cool headed crook ... he can handle anything and everything !!..

Here ...!! have it and chill out ... ! guru handed him the cocktail ..and himself took the seat next to him ...

So what did ya plan about the next deal with manjar ..!

Uh ... I m not sure ...bob held his hand up his hands up from the deal ...oh god ..this freaking love !! he wants to quit business ...! can u imagine that ...!! that to because of a woman ...oh god how freaking insane one can be ...rheo exclaimed frustrated with probably doom of his blossoming business ...as one of his very dependable partner took his hands off from their business ...for the sake of his newly wed wife ...soon gonna be a proud mother ..

Chill man ..!! you take thing too serious ..! everything will be fine !..

How can everything go fine guru ...! especially when the custom crews has tightened the vigilance ...

Aha..! tightened it ..not blocked it my baldy !!

You are talking like you are gonna pass the ecstasy below their nose...! rheo snapped with the tense look on his face ...!

Guru gave him a meaningful chuckle with blink of an eye ..!

Oh boy ..! don't tell me...!! rheo slammed down the drink on the table ..!

I didn't say anything either !

You ?

Me ..!!

Oh boy I love you ...!!

Eeeks ...keep your hands off rheo ...! u look sexy ...not you are actually !!...get off mee...u are choking meee...ohh ... guru shrieked with the mocking angry tone when rheo pounced on him to engulf him in a bear hug ...!

But are you sure you can do that ...seriously tell me...!! rheo asked after releasing him from the hug ...putting his arm on guru's shoulder...

Did I ever fail you ?

Uh ... u owe me something guru ...tell me how much do you want ...

Did I ever fail you ?

Uh ... u owe me something guru ...tell me how much do you want ...

Think again baldy ..!! I might get you wrecked ...

In other words you can make my swish account take a leap...! he smirked !

Both of them broke in mirth ...!!

None of them notice a shadow gawking at the camaraderie they shared ...

bas***d ! he uttered through his teeth !

Because of this blue eyed boy of rheo ...he was left out in the business he had himself grown up ...at least he thought so ...

He was in search of a single loop hole ..! and he will have this hazel eyed monster forever below his heels !

Suddenly a part of conversation caught his attention !

But rheo ... I really need to discuss something with you ...!!

What is it boy ...!!

What's taleb up to ...!i mean rheo he is gonna create a big mess because of that girl- shaheen !.. do you know what he has done ..he has messed up again with the cops ... how will we run our business like this rheo ...!

Hmm..i know guru ...but what will he do ...along with that girl shaheen 21 other girls are involved ...all are rawsome mahn !!. matter of lotta money ..! and that son of a bitch dev malhotra and his little rant ! rheo gritted his teeth ...

Immediately Guru looked away uncomfortably ...!

Don't worry guru ...we will settle everything ! ACP shashank has almost settled the matter for us ...that public prosecutor was grumbling ,...but the lady penguin has managed to escape ...uh she was a close shot ...! if we could have her we didn't have to hit on her boss...! he is a big catch ! that woman giving too much trouble ...! one we get our hands on her ...will teach her the lesion of lifetime ...the bitch dared to sneak in my pub ...

Rheo groaned fiercely ...!!

Relax baldy ...get your blood pressure checked ...! why do you keep on getting hyper all the time ...?

Rheo sighed...and remarked again ...they are saying a sikh chap came and beat them black blue ! when after they followed them ...they just vanished in the thin air...they said ...probably the chap was a police ...his attitude said so ...

Maan held his breath within ...!!

then let out a small laugh ...seems like u have maintaining a gang of lousy fools ! they just did let them go ...whoa...! if this is your company ..i doubt what will they do for you in an actual emergency ..!

Ahh guru ...u are there ...!! I m sure I can count on you ..!

Are you that sure baldy ..! may be you are trusting me a little too much !!

Boy !! u r such a dog ...!! rheo exclaimed whacking him playfully on his arm ...before both of them breaking into another round of laughter ...

Chalo lets go to the club ...!! archie would be there any moment ...lets get the deal ...after that you gotta rock the night ...long time you havenot played anything man ! gotto sing tonight ...! oh boy I really envy you when those sexy legs dance to your tunes...

Baldy are you sure ...you envy me ... not them ...???. guru winked meaning fully ...!!

You son of a bitch ... I m straight ...how many times do I have to tell you that ...!! rheo snorted !!

lol baldy ! I will doubt every time you will say ...come on lets go ...!!

at that moment maan's phone vibrated in his waist pocket ...

u go rheo ...i will catch u up soon ..gotta tune my guitar ! he excused...!

ahh ..okay ..! see u in the club ..!

what is it what made you call ...

uh ...its important .. aadi muttered

better be,...!!...he said angrily ...! as he had strictly asked aadi not to call today as rheo will be with him thick and thin ..

its geet ...!! aadi spoke ..

followed by an awnkawrd silence on next side...

what about her ... he finally asked...

uh ..actually she made me call you ..she wants to talk to you ...!

aadi don't give her the phone...hello aadi ...aadi ...i don't want to talk to her ...aadi ...hello aadi listen ...what the hell ...dont give her the phone aadi ...he groaned !!

but all he could listen a hustling sound ...and no voice of his ...

hello ... he murmured again realizing the other end calmer ...!

the other end was silent ...

aadi just shut her up ..i don't have time for her fuss goddamn it !...his irritated voice flew over the phone ... as he spoke without realsing who was there at the other part of the phone...

thanx ...a very familiar syrupy voice choked uttering the word ,...

hello ...!! oh heaven !!! the realization struck him as the line went dead ...!

it was her ... shit ..!! he shut his eyes with curse to himself...!!

I did it again ...! he mumbled ...

Guru ...the foreigners have come the deal is waiting for u to set ...! a guy informed a lost guru ..!

Hmmm...let go ! he pushed the phone in his pocket and headed for the pub ...where a deal of 11 crores drug was about to take place ...!

Guru who was apparently as smooth as ever managed the whole deal and made it fixed was really not in his self...

Maan leaned back to watch rheo and the other party toasting the drinks for their business ...his mind flew away miles behind ...

The clogged shallow breathing ...

the stun mixed with hurt in her voice...

"thanks" ...that's the only word she had uttered.. ...

He was not able to keep her out of his mind any more...from very morning he has kept himself too busy to remember her...desperately he worked harder ,..not to remember the shine of the ring ...not to remember her pleadings ...not to let himself re-judge the matter .. just not to let the guilt surge in his mind...everybody failed to notice the forlorn look in guru 's eyes when he broke in fits of laughter with them ...

He didn't want to recall the best night of his life he left behind ...the warm hands snaked his neck...the dove hidden in his chest ... the long kiss...the sweet breath fanning on his face ...the delicate fingers entwining with his fingers... the brimming eyes shining in moonlight !

Don't go please...!!

He shuddered ... and took a deep breath !...

He glanced at rheo ...who was blindly in faith with him ...didn't know the customs will never release the drugs as per maan planned...rheo was having a argument with archie about himself...archie wanted guru to work for him ...and rheo wasn't ready to leave guru ...

Maan smirked ..! foolish men ..!! both of you gonna sink so deep you would never be able to swim !

He picked up his glass from the table ...and sipped ...to drift off in the moments he had left behind ..

If she loves me so why did she do that ...he wasn't able to understand what's happening ...what to believe and what not ...?

The metal ring or the language her silent eyes had ...??

The engagement or the love of her touch had...??

The social dogma or her fervent kisses that searched for him in his lips ...??

Her begging eyes or his ego ...??

He sighed ...

He couldn't understand what her inconsistent words meant...

I will tell I was not listening ..

I didn't do anything ...

Please don't talk like that ...

You are responsible for everything ...!

What do they mean ...she just spoken her heart out a few hours before that ...how can she do that after getting engaged... there must be something I m missing ...! why would she crave for me if she belonged to somebody else...its not just today I felt the love in her eyes...

He remembered how she was craving to hold him back when he went to wish her ...

In her every words always it was unmistakable she loved him ...

He remembered his awfully rude words at her ...her last words ..her last demand ...i wont let you go ...

Was she at all acting ...her eyes were not ...they were as usual filled with love for me ...

Then whats wrong ...!

Oh I can only know that if I talk to her ...i hadn't give her any scope at all...

I was too rude with her ..and that too on her birthday ,...how could I utter just those words ...

She had called me...and again I broke her heart ...i didn't even bother to listen to her ...

Why love is so complicated...? why my love is so complicated..

Why m I not able to breath ...

Why do I feel the air moist in her tears ...?

Why does she affect me like this ..

I just cant get over enough her...

Why do I hurt her...knowing it will slowly kill me to death ...

Who does she hurt me knowing she will be in no peace...

Hey guru ...play a song for us ...come on buddy ...!!

Maan's chains of thoughts broke when the blonde pushed him ...indicating towards the podium ...

Not today archie ...! may be next time ...!

Yo guru ...!! no next time business brother ...!! its now or never ...the rule of our life ...rheo shrieked awkwardly which clearly indicated his drunken state ...

Come on boy play something ...archie pushed...

He will archie...don worry ...!! rheo announced confidently ...

Guru couldn't afford to let him down ...not in front of outsiders at least ...and at least not before his plan...

A waiter handed him the guitar ...

He glanced at the crowd...already excited seeing the guitar resting on his thigh ...!!

He eyed the hippie girls hopping to cheer ...her voice echoed in his mind .

..you are not going ...! uh ..i wont let u go ...the half naked girls ...!!

He let out a small indulging laugh ...

Oh geet ,...! u r crazy !

Don't you know I m yours ...forever ...!!

He tested the guitar by checking the chords absently ...and stroke it with his experienced fingers ...which flew on the chords like feather ... he closed his eyes ...and played the guitar random...not able to decide what he will play ...!!

Click it honey ! I so damn love the song ...!! he rocks !!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p7iK6oQ0lUY

The moment next the entire pub was in pindrop silence ...as he gently stroked the chord getting into the tune ...!! like he mastered the music to hypnotize every one present there ...!!

The music was bizarre ...carried an awkward air around it ...when his whispered sexily in his rich baritone voice... yu huuu ...yu huuu...!! yu huuu ...yuhhuuu

The drummers was not able to follow him first ...but then he lifted him thumb and winked ...indicated them to start and follow his chords...he is gonna rock the nerves of every one present here ...

Cause he wants everyone to get drunk and lose control ...

Drink babe..!! drink a more little that you do ...!! he moaned ...

The girls hissed pulling off their jackets ...!!

Rheo and his hang hitched the breath in as the He played the guitar with his eyes closed when a pair of big innocent eyes flashed in front of his eyes...and he jerked open his eyes ... and sang with the rich baritone voice he ever had ...the molten gold like voice was making even non drinkers drunk ...

lasses gyrated their hips as the song gushed through their vein like the sudden rush of morphine ! while maan tapped his snicker on the ground feeling the song in his brain

I know you want me
I made it obvious that I want you too
So put it on me
Let's remove the space between me and you
Now rock your body


Chicks were losing control ...moving their body to his tunes...

The pub was getting flooded with alcohol ...

People were drinking like they never did before...

He sang in the huskiest voice he had ...if voice could arouse one he had that in him ...

He was slowly poisoning everyone with the drug in his voice...

Damn I like the way that you move
So give it to me
'Cause I already know
What you wanna do

He winked at the girls ... and played it louder ...while pushing off the guitar ...and stand up ...holding tight the mike between his hands and walked through the listeners ...!!

The girls jumped crazily to touch him ...but ducking he fled away back to rheo ...who was going bonkers over the girls followed guru to their table ...

Rheo winked at guru ...to which he just shrugged and pulled a girl and helped her getting up on the table in front of rheo ...

Here's the situation
Been to every nation
Nobody's ever made me feel
the way that you do
You know my motivation
Give in my reputation
He bent down on the girl and sang seductively ...

And when she leaned on him to touch him ...he stepped back and winked...making the girl moan ...

Please excuse me I don't mean to be rude!!

Laughing he turned back ...waved his hand to the other girls ...who came forward

But he stepped back...

But tonight I'm loving you
Oh you know
That tonight I'm loving you
Oh you know
That tonight I'm loving you
Oh you know
That tonight I'm loving you
Oh you know
That tonight I'm loving you
oh you know

Singing ...spitting drug in the air ...he walked back to the podium ...!!...holding the mike in his left hand and the right hand running through his silky soft brown long hairs ...his hazel eyes flickered remembering a face ...who had kept it buried in her legs throbbing in silent cry ...! and he knew that ...

You're so damn pretty
If I had a type then baby it would be you
I know you're ready
If I never lied then baby
You'd be the truth

He sang remembering her kiss ...her holding him back to her ...in fear of losing forever ...he smiled in content as the innocence of his eyes flickers back ...the drummer raised his brows asking whats wrong as his voice grew more and more romantic ..tingling the hidden appeal ...awakening the demons in every human ...

He watched rheo and archi to pull down the girls on their lap...

He smiled and sang ...

Here's the situation
Been to every nation
Nobody's ever made me feel the way that you do
You know my motivation
Given my reputation
Please excuse me I don't mean to be rude

He smugly smirked at the girls winking at them ...who was going mad to touch him ...feel him ...brush their body with each beats ...pull him in a sensual lap dance ...seduce the hunk !

But tonight I'm loving you
Oh you know
That tonight I'm loving you
Oh you know
That tonight I'm loving you
Oh you know
That tonight I'm loving you
Oh you know
That tonight I'm loving you
oh you know

He shook his head singing at them ...indicating each of them that he loves each one of them when his heart knew who had his heart ...

And he increased the pace of the song ...coming down between the girls...intoxicating the crowd ...by his sexy moves and sensuality he was spreading in the air...taking control ...

he danced crazily around the table of rheo Singing in Latin hip hop ...in which the girls joined him ,...

Tonight I'm gonna do
Everything that I want with you
Everything That you need
Everything that you want
I wanna honey
I wanna stunt with you


the girls crazily ran to him ...to cling to him ...he seductively smiled ...ducked and hopped on another side...rhwo and rest of part came forward to have a girl in their arms...the girl who were already high clung to them in stead of guru who slipped away from them...


From the window to the wall
Gotta give you my all
Winter and the Summertime
When I get you on the springs
I'mma make you fall

He glanced all over the pub ...people dancing crazily ...drinking like their life depending on it ...he smirked...!! this guys can be handled so easily ... the lead casino player DINO started filling it up for the lost guru who was busy checking out his prays ..giving indications to waiter ...maan was tired... he glanced at the back door...he had his car parked behind ...and the key in his pocket ...!!

He hoped they gets drunk too much ...making it easy for him ...! he heard dino to fill in ...

He smiled thankfully ...and clutched the key in his pocket ... slowly moving back ...

You got that body
That make me wanna
Get up on the floor
Just to see you dance
And love the way
You Shake that ass
Turn around
And let me see them pants


Guru ...i never knew you can kill by your voice...the drummer winked at him as he was about to put the mike down beside him ...

He replied smiling through eyes ...its the way you take me dude...!!

Heyy gurrruuu...dontt stoppp you lazzyyy dog ...rheo slurred ...go on boy ...!! archi suddenly bellowed fully drunk ...!!

Guru cursed seeing the crazy old guys behaving like drunk teens ...he picked the mike and continued singing ...!


You're stuck with me
I'm stuck with you
Let's find something to do
Please excuse me
I don't mean to be rude

Guru and dino sang together ...

But tonight I'm loving you
Oh you know
That tonight I'm loving you
Oh you know
That tonight I'm loving you
Oh you know
That tonight I'm loving you
Oh you know
That tonight I'm loving you

That tonight I'm loving you

He hummed the lines repeatedly until he noticed the crowd to loose control !

He was about to jump down from the pub when again archie blocked his way ...

Rheo man ...you have a sexy thing in your stock ...dont stop boy ...come on ...another song ..!

Guru cursed the drunk blonde...he cant run away till they are in their senses...

He heaved a sigh and stepped back ...

He was in no mood to sing another hip hop song ...!

He was not ready to sing another ...

His mind was running out ...

his time was running out ...

he need to go ...need to go ...go back ...!! where he belonged to ...

his love was hurt ...

his love was on wait ...for him ...

he glanced at the party ...so many faces...so many heads ...but he knew most of them had left the heart far behind ... buried in their past ...

but he cant... surrounded by pigs he has to sing to make them drunk ...fulfill their wishes ...

the drummers were continuing playing some regular track ...waiting for him to start ...he looked at dino ...and ushered him to join the podium ...

he pushed the guitar in his hands ...and turned back to scan the pub ...there in a distant table rheo trying to slip his hand inside a girls skirt...who was laughing hysterically ...

maan turned his face away in disgust ...

wouldn't I be able to make the plan act ...??????oh geet ...please forgive me honey !

he didn't want to be here ... he changed the hand and clutched the mike in his right hand ...!!

plz click !

Driving through the night,
Tears are running down my face,
I start to realise, all the things that i once said,
I promised you the world
It's nothing more than you deserve
It's killing me inside, to know I put you through this hell,

The poor girl and her filled eyes were calling him ... her tiny hands clutching his arm ...dont go please...!!

He sang with all his heart ...making the air fill heavy with his sexy voice again ...

What if I cant go ...his heart sink at the thought ...

Oh how desperately I wanna pull her in the bone crushing hug ...and kiss her breathless ...mumble sweet nothings in her ears ...!!

he felt helpless ...and tied .!

Take away my heart,
It doesn't wanna work any more
I never meant to make you cry...

He abruptly stopped as his throat choked ...touching the mike to his forehead ...

Dino glanced at him and filled for him ...in louder pace ...

He glanced thankfully at him ...and joined him to sing in chorus ...!! who asked him through eyes is everything allright !!..he just shrugged half heartedly ...!!

California calling 20 miles to go,
And i don't, i don't know,
Should i turn around or should i leave you alone?
No i don't, i don' t know
I don't know,
No i don't know...

Ah ah ah ah,
Ah ah ah ah,

I'm on the road and it feels so cold outside,
It's driving me insane, to know how much you hurt tonight,
Take away my heart, it doesn't wanna work no more,
I never meant to make you cry

He took a deep breath ... and glanced around ...everybody was dancing crazy ...rheo can not be seen ...archie busy making a girl drink from his glass...

You take control dino ...he switched off the mike ...and showed thumbs up at dino ...

Who had no choice than continue singing ...before he could ask guru or stop him ...he was gone ...

The car groaned through the dangerous curves of goa highway ...the stereo played breaking the silence of the night into pieces ...

California calling 20 miles to go,
And i don't, i don't know,
Should i turn around or should i leave you alone?
No i don't, i don' t know
I don't know,
No i don't know...

Ah ah ah ah,
Ah ah ah ah,

California calling 20 miles to go,
And i don't, i don't know,
Should i turn around or should i leave you alone?
No i don't, i don' t know
I don't know,
No i don't know...

Ah ah ah ah,
Ah ah ah ah,

He smiled imagining how shocked geet will be seeing him ...!!

He hummed with Enrique ... ducking dodging speeding through the dark snake like hilly highway to mumbai ...

California calling 20 miles to go,
And i don't, i don't know,
Shod i turn around or shod i leave you alone?
No i don't, i don' t know
I don't know,
No i don't know...

Gotta keep on moving on,
Gotta keep on moving on,
Gotta keep on moving on,
California calling, California calling,
Gotta keep on moving on,
Gotta keep on moving on,
Gotta keep on moving on,
California calling, California calling,

A sleepy eyed aadi groaned at the repeated doorbells...

Uh ...who's the bloody hell ...! he growled before unbolting the door...

Your bloody boss...! a groan retorted !

Sir...!! you are here ...!!

Sleep wiped off from his eyes as his eyes widened seeing maan at the door,...!!

Maan didn't answer him ...and pushing him got inside...

Yeah ..seems like you are not much happy seeing me ... he answered throwing the car key on the sofa ...!

Uh ...i don't mean that ...but aren't you supposed to

Stay at goa...he finished...actually ..ahem ...uh ...i needed my laptop ...i forgot it here last evening ...

But sir...you could ask me to reach it to you ...aadi narrowed his eyes as they followed maan inside...

Uh ..yeah ...actually I didn't want to trouble you guys ...!

I see...aadi murmured as he checked maan to open the fridge and gulp down chilled water ...

U wanna have dinner ...aadi uttered measuring him from corner of his eyes...

Haan ...?? oh dinner...uh ...may be...uh ...okay uh i m hungry ...!!... he mumbled glancing at the closed door which belonged to geet's room ..

I will help myself you go to sleep ...maan gestured aadi to go back to bed...

No problem sir..i will serve it ...saying aadi headed kitchen without giving him any scope to answer...

Maan followed him to the kitchen ...

And watched aadi filling the bowls ... maan walked ahead and checked the foods...

Taking a bowl he filled some rajma in it while aadi had his back to him busy in microwave ...

Sir here it is ... aadi forwarded the plate and stopped midway ...

Rajma ...since when you started liking rajma ...??

Maan hurriedly put the bowl down on the table which was about to slip off his hands ...

...i ...i should practice eating every sort of food ..you know ...he lied through his teeth .. trying to sound cool and casual ...

Oh really ...thats great ...aadi remarked with a grin lingering on his lips ...

What ..?

What ..? aadi retorted back ...

Why don't you go to sleep ...if you are finished checking me out ...an irritated maan retorted ..i guess I can manage the rest ..!

Oh yes ...and I m pretty sure you can ...!! aadi chuckled ...

Maan cocked his brow at his tone ... ...to which aadi replied ..i mean the food ..???

Hmmm...maan muttered... so good night ...!

Ahh ..good night sir ...! aadi stepped back still checking him out ...

Oh I thought I should tell you ...you have your laptop on that side ...u know ...your room ...aadi indicated the opposite side of geet's room where actually maan's room was...

I know that aadi ...do you need something else to inform me ...maan gritted his teeth getting his hints ...!!

No ...no ...not at all...!! aadi shook his head faster and walked out ...

Huh ...! maan sighed a breath of relief and arranged the plate and bowls on a tray ...

As he headed to a particular door...

I guess you forgot the way chief ...!! the voice made him stop on his track ...!

Urgh ...!! why aren't you off to sleep ...!

Oh oh ...i was just ...taking care of my boss you know aadi tried to sound an obedient slave ...!!

whatver ...!! bloody spy ...maan muttered under his breath ...

sir..??
uh ...he cleared throat ! ..i was ...oh ...actually ... uh ... I ...maan was running short of excuses ...

You are right ...she didn't have the dinner ...after you shared the little phone talk ...aadi commented and walked off not wanting to embarrass his boss anymore...

He was happy and contended ...

Finally ...chief had the spark back in his eyes...

Only one person in earth could make him feel that ...!

Geet ...!

Maan sigh khurana didn't need anyone to know that his geet hadn't have a meal after he bashed her ...

He didn't need anyone to inform him she has cried all night ...!

He entered the room ... tiptoed ...placing the tray on the table ...he neared the bed... and the sight made his heart skip the beat ...

Geet dozing curling like a fur ball... curly brown tresses left open tumbled across the white satin sheet ...wearing a white shirt of his ...and sunaina's trouser ...

He smiled affectionately gaping the girl sleeping facing her back to him ... hugging a pillow tight ...

Sitting by her he bent on her...

A old drop of tear still lingering on the brim of her nose...he rubbed it off gently ...stroked back her slightly curled hairs tumbling on her shounder framing the moonlit face ...

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Gori Teri Aankhen Kahe
Raat Bhar Sooyi Nahi
Chanda Dekhe Chupke Kahi
Aur Taare Jaante Hain Sabhi

He lovingly caressed her thick soft hairs ...running his fingers through them ...he leaned on her ...and bury his face in her hairs ...taking the sweet enthralling scent of her open hairs...

He caressed her arm ...stroking gently ...and tenderly pulled her ...making her face him ...

He stroked back the tiny lock falling on her closed eye...tucking the loose lock behind her ear he bent down to kiss her forehead ...

She squirmed a little at the touch his warm lips on her skin ... frowned a little ...but didn't wake up ... pouted her lips ...

He admired the innocence of world ...

Nothing can be more beautiful ... than his love...

He stroked his finger lovingly on her forehead ...slowly coming down ... she scrunched her nose...frowning deeper ...

He smiled seeing her cute frown ...

Sweetheart ...get up ... he whispered in her ear ...

She squirmed at the touch of warm air in her ears ...

Ummm...moaning she tried turn her face and hug the pillow again ...

no baby...open your eyes... he murmured pulling her back ...

honey...come on get up ... he pulled her closer ...

the closeness of the sudden familiar voice coming out of her dream ...made her open her eyes ...

she opened her big brown emerald eyes slowly to find the masked face bending on her ...

it took a little time to adjust her mind ...understand it was not another dream ...

he was there ...!

flabbergasted she jerked up ...when he pushed her back ...engulfing her in his chest ...gently brushing his knuckles on her face ...sending thousand butterflies in her stomach ... caressing her with loving eyes...

...

Gori Teri Aankhen Kahe
Raat Bhar Sooyi Nahi
Chanda Dekhe Chupke Kahi
Aur Taare Jaante Hain Sabhi


Ke Kisne Dil Le Liya
Kisko Dil De Diya
Yeh Dil Ka Lagana Koi Jaanta Nahi
Gori Teri Aankhen Kahe
Raat Bhar Sooyi Nahi

She remembered his previous words... his rude behavior... and the sudden warm caring eyes...her eyes welled up at his gesture...

Why have you come ...? go...!! leave me alone ...she tried pushing him back ...her voice chocked uttering the words...

No... he shook his head slowly ...letting her know he has come back...he has forgiven her...without any explanation ...

His heart knew she was his ...her every breath was for him ...he bent on her face ...and gazed beautiful face from a few mms away ...brushing his finger sensuously and soothingly ...

A drop escaped from corner of her eye...which he didn't let roll on ... bending down he brushed his lips tasting the salty drop on his lips... and lingered there for few moments to let his nose brush on her cheek ... lips rubbing sensuously ..

Geet shivered at the fervor of his lips ...

Dil Mein Teri Yaad Basi
Tu Samjhe Ga Nahi
Jo Hain Mere Paas Hai Tera
Mera Kuch Nahi
Kyun Aankhiya Chupao
Kyun Tujhko Satao
Dil Tod Ke Tera
Mein Kya Pao
Bol Piya Bol Piya Bol
Piya Bol Piya Bol Piyaaa Bol

He gapped a little to gawk the reaction on her face...she slowly parted her eyes to find the smile playing on his sensuous lips...which still had her tear drop on it ...

He licked his lip ...letting her know how he tasted her ...

She felt blood gushing to her face ...

You look sexy in my shirt ...!! he whispered huskily ...

She looked away ...not wanting him to notice how he was arousing her...

She was mad on him...he didn't want talk with her this evening ...she must show the anger ...!! he is not affecting me...i m not going to step in his ploy ...she muttered in her mind ...!

she wriggled to escape from his arms...tried pushing him off...

when he bent lower on her...brushing her body by his taut chest ... that was teasing her senses.. feeling her own softness pressed by his strong manlihood ...

caused her stop wriggling ...!

Aate Jaate Mausam Jaise
Lagte The Sabhi
Humne Bhi To Manga Rab Se
Apna Bhi Koi
Duniya Se Bachao
Palko Mein Chupao
Dil Jeet Ke Tera
Sab Ko Batao
Sun Gori Sun Gori Sun Gori Sun
Sun Gori Sun Gori Sun

What are thinking baby ...? hmmm...? don't you know I can hear your heart beats ...he slightly stroked his finger on her chest pulling her shirt off a little ...brushing his finger on her exposed skin ...

Making her gasp for breath ... as his finger set fire on her senses ... his intense eyes caught her gaze ... lips parted in stun ...quavering as his eyes blue in desire were gazing her full lips ...

suddenly he chuckled naughtily ...

She was livid at his chuckle ...he knew...damn it ...he can still get the feeling of the effect his has on me...!!

You know what ..uh ...just get off me... geet wiggled her forefinger at him ...her another hand was in his grip ...

He bit the finger pointed infront of his mouth !

ignoring her warning totally he spoke ..

Did I tell you how sensuous you look when your cheeks turn crimson ...

Is this anger ...or blush ...?? he winked irking her more...

Argghhh ...!! she groaned ...but before she could say more he scooped her up in his arms and lifted from the bed...

What are you doing ...leave me...i said leave me

While maan paid no heed at her constant kickboxing practice...

He easily plunked himself on the bed resting his back on the board while his arms carefully embraced her making her seat on his lap ...

Don't you think you should moan a little low... he winked at her before pulling the food tray closer ...

Shut up ...just shut up ..she groaned helplessly tied in his arms ...

Now come on .. open your mouth ... he reached the spoon full of rice and rajma towards her ...

Leave me I said...and I m not going to eat anything...?

Why ...? keeping fast for me??

He sniggered ...

Argh ... you are such a...

Jerk ..?? he finished her search ...

Thank you madam... now open your mouth ...

No ..i wont ...i will see how can you force me... she pursed her lips tighter...

I wont ...he drawled ...you will yourself open your mouth honey ...

What ...?

He just chuckled...

Abhi bhi keh raha hu ...kha lo ...muh kholo ...

She shook her head adamantly ...

He chuckled at her defiance ...we will see babe ...!!

She was little shocked when he did nothing after that ...she was sure he will give up soon ..cause in no way he can make her open her mouth ...

Boy was she wrong ...?

He gawked her face that lingered a smug attitude... he shook his head ..

He slowly released her from the other hand was holding her on her lap ...glad she was going to get up ...when he pulled his leg ..bending his knee...causing her fall on his chest ...

She was about to groan when She felt a hand making way in her shirt...slowly creeping upward ...

She was shocked ,...petrified as his hand crawled rubbing the spine on the bare skin of her back ... sending thousand feelings to her ... the sweet throbbing pain was spreading through her body ... pulsating in her veins

He tried not to show any effect that he was having as his palm caressed warm silky skin of hers...fingers slipped through the butter soft skin ...slowly making way upwards ... the feelings of her skin had that tingling sensation in his nerves...

her softness pressed on his strong chest ...the linens were too thin to stop the heat transmitting from her skin ... he held the breath within as the sensation taking over ...increasing the urge to pull her closer and do lot of things that his mind doesnt want to think...
she was unaware of what she was doing to his body ...!
he was trying hard to maintain the wicked grin on the lips ...when his heart went in a frenzy !

She gasped as his hand stroked the skin below the hook of her bra... the sweet numb sensation was driving her crazy ... the sinking feelings surpassing her senses... as she felt his thumb slipping inside the hook to open it ...

Please...i will eat ... her voice shook fuzzily ... when her fingers dug the skin of his arm...making him stem the breath within...

That's better babe ...!! .he managed to speak easing his dried throat ...

He took his hand out and pulled her closer ...!!

Now come on ...dont fuss...and eat like a good girl ... he desperately wanted to shake off the fuzzy feelings from his head ...

She didn't dare to oppose anymore...obediently swallowed the morsel of rajma chawl ... he kept on feeding her carefully ... after a few morsels...

Why did you scold me at afternoon ... she complained stopping his hand midair ...

Cause ...rheo was just beside me... !

Rheo or the girls ...!! she squinted her eyes...

Oh come on sweetheart ...we decided to drop the matter ...didn't we ...? he sighed exasperated

Don't you sweet heart me...she spoke snatching the spoon from his hand ...

Areeh ...!! what are you doing ...he tried to grab it back when she took the plate too and kept away from his reach ...

First talk with me... she ordered...

Okay fine ... carry on ...! he leaned back knowing he has to give in her demand

U used the word fuss...?? what did I do ...? she pouted her lips ... maan couldnt help but felt like pulling her cheeks ...but she was too in mood to risk that !

Oh honey ...i was little agitated with rheo ...and u know if I get caught ...they know guru ..not maan ...

That's all your excuse... she groaned ...definitely its to do with the girls ..!

Oh for the love of the god ...geet ...! trust me.. there was no girl ...he was pinned by her narrowed eyes...

Trust and you ...? never ...!! she pushed the plate back on his hand ...

Okay fine...!! ...now eat ...he tried snatching the spoon from her hand ...

When she pushed his chest back and asked ...why do you sound so exasperated whenever I ask about those girls...

Cause I m ...! ohh a jealous girl is so dangerous ...!!

Hey hey ,...i m not jealous ...!!

Oh really ...he pulled her head towards him ...

No I m not ...!! now have the food yourself ... pushing off his hand she pushed the spoon in his mouth ...!

I love way you lie ...he gave a wicked smile with mouth full of rajma chawl ...the thing he hated most ...

Shut up and swallow ...she commanded...

After a few bites he snatched away the plate and spoon ...and placed it on the table ...

Bari aayi mujhe order karne wali ...

Saying he grabbed her and turned her down ...on the bed...himself resting on her top ...

Haan to ... she tried to speak baffled by sudden proximity ...!!

Toh kya ..? he whispered huskily leaning on her ears ...brushing her ear lobe with his lips ...

Toh...she repeated after him ...completely lost what she was saying ... closing her eyes as his warm fervent breaths fanned on her face ...

Toh ...?? he drawled rubbing his lips on her cheek ...

She clutched his shirt tightly as his hand played with the button of her shirt on her naval ...

To ... she whispered his ear as he bent down to rub his nose on the crook of her nape...

His heart thudded louder ...as her fruity scent mingled with his manliness ... he slowly brushing his lips on her skin moved higher to touch her lips... ..fervor increasing every passed moments...his hands unbuttoned the one on her naval ...slowly and sensuously slipping inside...to touch her bare naval...making patterns on her skin ...

Rubbing his warm moist lips on her cheeks he headed to her mouth ... when she titlted her head up to feel him more...

But suddenly He pulled away slowly and watched her ...

The Eyes closed in anticipation ...lips trembling slightly ...her fingers clutched the pocket of his shirt ... waiting for his lips to claim her own ...waiting for the heat he will transmit through his mouth ...

Why is your voice shaking baby ...!! what happened to my wild cat ...? why do I find a timid kitten here ?...

His wicked snigger made her eyes open in jerk ...! the kiss never came ...as he was mocking at her ...

Mad at his stupid prank ...she raised her fist to hit him ...

Laughing he caught her hand and pinned her down ...

Still laughing like a mad experiencing what effect he had on her ...when geet freed her other hand from a crazy laughing maan and pulled away his mask in a sudden jerk ...!

What are you doing ...? the laugh instantly zipped...

He glanced at the door to ensure if it was closed...

Checking you out honey ..!!.

she seductively drawled while brushing her finger on his face ...making the last smile off his face ... he was compelled to close his eyes to feel the sensuality talking on his skin ...

He held his breath within his teeth as her fingers stroked the firm jaw line ... gently going down and opening the first button of his shirt ...

He was driving crazy as she lifted herself from the bed and kissed on his cheek ... rubbing her lips a little she kissed on his nape...bending down with her finger freed his shirt from the buttons

Geet ...!! an anticipating moan escaped ... when geet tossed back on the bed keeping maan fixed midair...

Oh .you wicked lady ,...!! he groaned opening eyes as he felt the sudden miss of the warmth on him ...

Now it was her turn to break on fits of mirth ...

He lovingly watched her shake with the laughter and run out of breath ...tired she pressed her head on his chest still trembling with the laugh ...

He closed her in his chest by pulling into a tight hug ...!! bless himself with the love of his life !

Gori Teri Aankhen Kahe
Jaane Anjaane Mein Kahin
Chanda Ne Bhi Dekha Nahi
Aur Taaro Ne Bhi Jaana Nahi
Ke Tune Mujhe Dil Diya
Mera Dil De Diya
Mera Jeene Ka Bahana
Koi Aur Nahi

Gori Teri Aanken
hmmph...!! done babes ! so what would you say about the update ...? sorry honey i was tired of rona dhona ...so made it little different ! hope u like it !
at the last part geet was mad on him when he was the only wrong ...she didnt try to reason ...here she was wrong - she got engaged to dev ...so she thought and pondered over maan's reaction ...angry but not hatred ...maan livid ...but not sustained as he knew he was awsully rude ..which was wrong ...when a person realizes his own wrong he is bound to think and ponder back
@saba - no ..they didnt notice...have you seen someone lost in love ...pehle pehla peyar ...their eyes seem normal ...but just a little far away look ...dev mistook it thinking she is being dreamy about their future...would explain it when dev's pov will come..
the ring fiasco is yet not solved ...lot to come ...wait up sweets !
but i strongly belive ..if there is love there doesnt need a conversation or explanation ..in bintere too i emphasized on this point ..here will try saying teh same... and yeah ... about mrs malhotra ..leave it on time and me,,...:) winks ,..dont take tension enjoy the flow ...
@to all i always tell u never finish reading it until i write hit the like button ...maaneet 09 u missed the last part !
@all ...dear i hope u like the update ...if u hav to ask some thing or bash me feel free...cause m all urs...was lil tired...
precap----- a lot of romance ! and troubles ..mixed package !
hey i just realised its the longest update ever ... 11459 words ...gosh i write so much !!
darn me ! listen up readers i need thread full of comments even if this is all crap ...cause i dont feel like to write if you dont boost me...i feel its not worthy enough !
hit the like button if u like it !
i didnt put up the original video of enrique tonight m loving you cause its way too adult for the kids...but i didnt get the changed lyrics ...honey u might find at the end lyrics are not matching ...thats not a mistake ..i deliberately changed the song ..but i needed the lyrics too ... didnt get it ..hope people wont go deeper in the lines ...cheers !
Edited by maanmeet_Reet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yayyy
k now i am going to read

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alright now for the real comment... god i am soo estupida that i didnt realize realize u were updating more... in tasha's words, SILLY ME😃

OMG reet sooo many things happening simultaneously yet every single thing has been handled with grace. as a writer it is really difficult to concentrate on even one particular incident while keeping in track of emotions, reactions, etc n here u are writing away parallel incidents while beautifully keeping track of each emotion each character goes through. kudos for that!
now coming to the update it self. i must say it was a BIG ROLLER COASTER RIDE! one minute i was crying the next minute i was angry n the very next second i was jumping up and down with joy!
Geet and Maan's POV really gave a good insight about what they are going through since they seldom voice their real emotions and thoughts. but like u said people in love dont really have to voice their emotions to the partner but i feel little miscommunication during early stages of love are like sprouting of weeds on a barren field and before u know it they would be growing everywhere. early stages of love represent a barren field having no yield whatsoever thus it needs to be taken care of really carefully for the fear of weed growth. but once the field is occupied in full fledged growth there is no room for weeds. yes they can definitely grow even on fields filled with greenery but the chances are much lesser because there is someone constantly to pull them out as soon as they grow than on empty fields that are not taken care of. i feel geet n maan need to be aware of each other's POV at least a little. anyways that is purely my opinion (more like bak bak) and i do not mean any offense to ur point of view on love. i love the way u r taking the story 🤗 and please do not take my bak bak seriously 😃

incorporation of songs were simply superb every line reflected maan's feelings towards geet i just hope he can some day let her know how exactly he feels about her. the feeding scene was chooo cute. geet ordering maan to eat the food he hates 😆 i could totally imagine her doing this to him 😉 but the cherry on the top was geet giving a taste of his own medicine back... wah kya baat hai hamari sherni to kamaal kar ditta it reminded me of the epi where geet tries to seduce maan in the bathroon 😆 jodi to aisi honi chahiye. complimenting each other not synching with each other.

i dont know if u ever have felt this but u know the feeling in ur stomach that makes ur toes curl while driving on a hilly road or even a roller coaster ride right when it goes up and down quickly? its a kind of (GOOD) pit feeling (i dont know if i am getting my point across😕) anyways the point is that kind of feeling is a good feeling that always makes me smile. whenever i am sulking around a drive around hilly roads (lucky me i live near a hilly region 😃) to feel better. and guess what now i dont need to drive around every single time i read ur updates i get that EXACT same feeling in my stomach that makes me smile 😊 so please keep up the lovely good work n do continue to write!
Edited by Maaneet_09 - 14 years ago

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