I finally read all the parts which I missed and even reread some of them
and now I really don't know what to comment
all the updates were outstanding...marvellous...any word of appretiation would be an understatement...and I really mean it
you are simply superb👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
I want to say something about the stripping scene first...
when before leaving for your exam u said that maan will be before geet and that too without the mask and the meeting would be totally unpredictable...well I actually thought a lot about the meeting...yahan tak ki I even imagined their meet in a grocery shop...I know that is really silly but at that time I was just trying to figure out the situation...but now when I read that part...I want to say just one thing...it was indeed unpredictable😲😲😆...but a beautifully written scene...the song was amazing the entire feel was awesome...hats off to you for that👏👏
and now the birthday scene...it was breath taking...and I want to add here that the way geet jumped on maan to kiss him was what I really thought should happen after so much of frustration she had bottled up inside for not able to meet him...so there you was predictable...lol..
anyways in short everything was lovely
each and every scene was very nicely written
you rocked girl...!!!
are yaar I forgot to add the siggie is awesome...really I kept staring at it like a fool untill my bro came and I closed the window in a rush😆
love you lot and a big big hug for you for the wonderful updates🤗
anupam
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