MOHABBATEIN-KaSh~~SaJan~~TaAnu FF!!! - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
Part 1 is awesome !!!!!
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loved it cont soon dear n thnx for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update, cant wait tp read sajan's part

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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
awsomeee updt dear..
keep it up..
continuee soonn
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#85
Awesome updt..
lovely part..
do cont soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
Ohk let me take a breath 3 best couples together.
Awesome dude just an awesome FF.plll do cont soon and im personally a TaAnu fan so a request to you dont make their part too sad.plll
Snd as far as KaSh & SaJan parts are concerned they are awesome tooo.
And a small request plll add me to your PM list
Your FF rox👏
Update asap
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
tht was nice yaar gunjan kuch zayda rudeee nahiii ho gi in this ff
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Part-4

ar=sirr??? app?? ap humari kaisee madat karenge??

m=wohh sab tum log mujhpar choddooo..bass ek baat ha..tum logoko mera sath dena ha..aur ha...himmat wala banna ha..theek ha????

s=manzurrr ha sirr... sab manzurr ha..

an=sirr..parr..apkoo koi musibaat to nahi hogii na?????

m=are nahi baba..tum sab mere lie mere chotee bhai jaisee hoo...too...bara bhai hokee..itna to karhi saktaa hu na..

ar=sirr...!! thannkkk..u sirrr!!!...

m=accha too..jaisaa ma kehtaa huu...wasa karte rahooo..par ha anurag..tumhare lie..sabse pehle...tum uss ladkike bareme..pata karke mujhe dooo...naam kya ha???

an=sir..uske bareme..mujhe sirf..yehi pata ha..ke uska naam taani ha..aur kuch nahii..

m=to tumhara thora mushkil hosakta ha...

an=sir..uske bareme..humare hostel ko watchman uncle..ha..woh kaka jante ha... ma unse baat karnehi wala tha...

s=are wahh..to tu khara kyu ha..abhi sab sogaye honge..tu jake..unsee bata kar..ja anu..

an=ok..im goingg...

anurag leaves...

ar=sirr ma??????

s=aur ma???????
m=tum logokaa bandabasstt bass hochukaa ha...

anurag comes to the gate..

an=kaka...apse baat karni thi..

ka==beta...abhi nahii...raatkoo..tumse baat karunga..abhi thora mushkil ha..

an=ji theek ha kaaka...ma ajaunga..kuch zaruriii baat ha..isiliye..

ka=koi baat nahiii...

anurag was going back to the room.he saw arman n samrat...also coming..

anu=tum dono kaha jaraha ha???

ar=are...mayank sir..pata nahi..kya karne wale ha...woh shashank sir se baat karne gaye ha..

an=whatt?? marwane gaye ha kyaa?????

s=lagta to wahi ha..chalo dekhte ha...

all three...came to shashanks cabin..n stood outside..after sometime.. mayank came out..

m=tum teeno yaha jasusii karrahehoo????

ar=sir..apne kya kia?? kya karne wale ha??

m=mujhe jo karna tha..woh mane kardiya...abhii..tum teenoki bari ha..

three of them were confused..n looked at eachother...

m=ma samjhata hu...btw armaann... tumhe dance ata hana??

ar=ha sir...dancing..is my passion...par kyu??

m=aur samrat tumhe kya ata ha???

s=i cann...play a guitar well..

m=greattt...aur anurag???

an=sirr...wase mujhe gana ya dancing utna accha nahi ata ha..par i can do tutionyy...

m=wohh bhi acchha ha...

ar=par sir plan kya ha???

m=plan yeh ha ke...mane mr shashank se..permission liya ha..ke tumlog dopaher ko college hourrs ke baad..raatke 10.30 baje takk... bahar part time job karsakte ho..chahe woh kuch bhi..hoo..aur to aur..inter college dance competition me part hi lesakte hoo..

the three of them got it...

an=matlab..ab college se bahar janekaa...tickett mill gaya...

ar=sirr...

s=u rockkk sirrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

At night…anurag came to the cottage..

An=kaka…ma ajau????

k-are beta ajaooo….tumhe yaha ate hue kisine dekha to nahi na??

an=nahi kaha..kisine nahi dekha…

k=betho beta..kaho..kya janna ha?? Kya puchna tha???

An=kaha…yeh..taani kaun ha?? Kya ha..matlab..ke mujhe uske bareme jaana ha…

K=taani beta…who to bari pyaari ladki ha…shashank sir ki..choti beti ha….

An=woh..kya karti ha??? Matlab college me parti ha ya??

K=nahi beta…uski to shadi hochuki ha..

An=kya???????????? Shadi hochuki ha..par kaka..usse dekkar to lagtahi nahi..balki jabhibi mane use dekha ha..woh humesha….white..ya kuch…

K=kyuki..uska pati abhi is duniya me nahi raha..

An=kya??????????

K=2 saal hochuke ha….. jab uski shadi te hui thii…shashank sir ne apne ek bohot acche dost ke betese taani ki shadi kit hi.unke dost to chalbase the..par ladkeki maa zinda ha...ladka bohot his nek aur shareef tha…. Army officer tha...taani ka ek accha dost bhi tha.. shadi bohot dhum dham se hui thii….shadi ke sare rasmo riwaz jab khatam hue…to phone aya..ke border par atanvadione hamla kia ha….. to bhari mehmil me…bina dulhaan ko ghar liye…chala gaya..mandap se duty pe.. tani ne kuch nahi kaha..aur nahi rokna chaha…. Kuch dinotak..dono ne sirf phone par hi bate ki.. ek mahine baad…jab taani ka janamdin tha..to bhari mehmil me.. borders kuch army officers.. aur uske pati ke dost… ek lash leke aye..jo uske pati ki thii….bohot se officers zakmi hue the..aur kuch logon daam torr diya tha…unemese ek uska pati thi….kuch mahine laggaye taani ko ye sadma bardasht karneme… jab who samajhgayiii..ke uska pati ab kabhi nahi ane waala ha..to usne zindagi me age barneka socha…. Lekin…taani ki.. saas is sadme ko bardasht nahi karpayi.. jisdin apne beteke lash dekhii..usdin pehla heart attack aya…aur dusri bar jab taani ko safed saree me dekha…attack aya… doctor ne kaha ha..ke unki dimag ki halat theek nahi ha…bistar se utneke kabil nahi ha… isiliye taani ne... phirse suhagan ki tarah rehne laggayi,…kyuki uski maa abhi coma me ha.aur usne apne apse wada kia ha..jabtak who unhe theek nahi karegii..woh esehi rahegiii….. shasshank ne usse kitni baar ghar wapas laneko chaha..par usne mana kardiya… wooh wasehi rehna chahti ha..jaisa uskii maa chahti ha..bohot dukh jhela ha bechari ne…. umaar bhi to zyada nahi ha…shashank ne kahi baar uski dusri shadi karwani chahii..par nahii…nahi mantii… esi ha taani….kabhi kabhi yaha ati rehtii ha….itni acchi ladkii…aur uske sath itna bura hua…..

An=ab aur bura nahi hogaa…ab wohh phirse pehleki tarah hasegi…bolegii… usse yeh karnahi parega…apne lie nahi..to baki sabkeeliye…..

The next morning..

Girls college….

Shilpa was practicing dance…when her madam calls her…

Sh=mam…apne bulaya?????

Madam=yes shilpa..come in..

Shilpa comes in..n the second when she enters the room..she wass..

Sh=tum!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Armaan was standing infront of her…n smiling..

Sh=tum..stupud..idiot..besharam… phirse…girls college ke andaar??? Sharam nahi atii????

Madam=shilpa..yeh kya tareeka ha kisise baat karneka???

Ar=its ok..mama..shayed..inko..mujhse koi problem ha..

Sh=just shut up..ok??? mam..ap isse nahi jantii..yeh..ek…besharammm aur …

Madam-enough is enough shilpa….!! Tum kuch bhi bole jarahihoo….yeh Mumbai ke sabse best boys college gurukul me parta ha..aur…mere kehnepar..wahake…professor mr mayank Sharma ne isse yaha bheja ha..

Sh=mam…jo ho..ye ek….battamizz ladka ha…aur tum… us din to bare..smart..banrahethe..aur aj achanakk sap kyu sugh gaya????

Ar=shilpa..mane kya kia ha???

Sh-uu….tumhe to maa!!!

Madam=shilpa..behave urself…tum chup karooo..samjhi??

Sh=sorry mam…..

Madam=ab meri baat tum dhyan se sunoo…ye armaan malik ha….. ek bohot accha dancer..aur mane uska dance audition leneke baad yeh faisla kia ha..ke is baar jo inter college dance competition hone wala ha..usme…armaan hi tumhara partner hoga!!

Sh=whattt???????????????????????????

Scene shifts to samrat….

He had got a job in a music school..to teach the little boys n girls… play the guitar…

S=hellooo..bacchooo…ma apko ajse guitar sikhaunga..theek ha/?? Ap mujhe sir nahi..samrat bhaiya bulayiyega..theek ha??? Accha chaloo..apna apna…naam bataoo..taki ma apko apke naamse bula saku…

Samrat had a great time...with the kids..also a chance to look for gunjan..as the music school was in the same place..were the last time..he had seen gunjan…

It was lunch time..samrat went to a caf nearby the music school..n was having his lunch..when he saw a car..stopping..infront of the caf…n a girl came out of the car….n she was gunjan..

G=goddd!! Thisss..stupidd carrr!!

S=omgg!!! Gunjiee…I mean..chashmish…..

G=yee…car na….lagta ha…new car kharidni paregiii….iska tyre…ab ma kya karuu?? Mechanic kaha ha??????

Gunjan came to the caf..n went to the reception..

G=excuse me…meri car ka tyre punctured hochuka ha…. Ap plz…kisi mechanic ko bulaasakte ha?? Mujhe nahi pata…garage kaha ha..

Boy=theek ha ha..mam…ap wait kijiyee….

Gunjan sat on a table meanwhile..n ordered a coffee…samrat was very much happy as now he had a chance to talk to her….

S=ma usse baat karu to kaisee?????kaise usse jake hi kahu???? Areee..ha…yaad aya.. uski photo us din mere pass reh gayiii….ma usse lotana bhul gaya..chal samrat shuru hoja….

Samrat went to her..gunjan was busy doing her makeup….when she sees samrat standing infront of her…

G=yes???

S=hi.,…

G=hii..tum kaun hoo??? Mane tumhe pehchana nahii…

S=ab..woh..usdin..tumhari gari ke samne…ma..woh…

G=accha ha….tum..yaha yahabhi mere peeche agayee????

S=are nahi..ma..tumhe ye dene aya tha…

He gave her the photo..seeing her parents pic…gunjan opened her bag….but didn't find it..

G=thanks..tumhe ye kahase mila?????

S=who..usdin…road pe..

G=goshh..thank u so muchhh….mere mom dad ki photo…thanks..

S=welcome….

Gunjan was again fixing her makeup..samrat was standing there..

G=tum abtak gaye nahii???

S=tumse ek baat puchu??

G=kya???

S=tum bhushan uncle ki beti ho???

G=bhushan uncle?? Whos that???

S=are…apne papa ka naam nahi janti kya????

G=mere papa ka naam bhushan uncle nahi…shashi bhushan tha..samjhe?? aur by the way..tum yeh kyu puch rahehoo??

S=woh….tumhare dad..aur mere dad..frendzz the..aur…ma..aur tum..

G=listen…agar tum yeh kehna chahtee ho…ke ma aur tum bachpan me frendzz the..then im sorry..mujhe kuch yaad nahi ha..

S=mera naam samrat ha…samrat shergill..ma….

G=are…mane kaha na….past past hota ha..aur present present… aur ma present me jeeti hu..mere past me kya hua..mujhe kuch nahi pata…aur wwoh to mera bachpan tha… to mujhe kaise kuch yaad hoga..listen….. plzz…mujhse merii bachpan..ya childhood ke bareme kuch nahi puchna..ok??????

Boy=mam..apki gari theek ha..

G=thanks…..n u..bye..n thanks anyway….

Gunjan left from there…samrat felt a bit bad.

S=chashmish mujhe pehle lagta tha..ke tum thori badal jaogii..aj pata chala…tum thori nahii..tum bilkul badal gayi hooo….

Arsh

Sh=mam….yeh mera dance partner???

Madam=yes…n this is my final decisison…

Sh=par mam…har saal ma solo dance kartii hu..aur jeet ti bhi huu..phir….is baar..

Madam=shilpa..no more discussions..agar tumne armaan ke sath dance nahi kia …ya armaan ko majbur kia..ke who ye dance na kare…to ma tumhe dancing ke leader se bahar kardungiii..samjhi?????

Sh=mam..plzz….no…..

Madam=agar no…to jaisa ma kehrahihu..wasa karna paregi..n armaan wish u both all the best…

Madam left from there..shilpa looked at armaan angrily…armaan winked at her..

Sh=apnii..stupid wli image ko..aur barbar mat karooo…ye mat samajhne..ke mujhe tumhare sath dance karneme…koi interest ha..ma sirff..apne lie..apni leadership keliye..aur ha apne college keliye karrahihuuu..

Ar=aur ma..tumhare lie..tumhare sath rehnekeliye..

Sh=whattt?? Ur nutsss!!!

Ar=nooo…im not nuts..actually baat yeh ha ke,…. Tumhe pehli nazarr me dekhtehii..mujhe tumme interest hogaya..to..

Sh=pehli..aur akhri baat tumhe clear karrahihu..ma koiii cheese nahi hu..interest walii..aur tum jaisokoo.,.accheese jantii hu..so plzz…..mere sath koshish bhi mat karna..samjhe????
armaan came close to her…n holded her hand..shilpa was a bit confused..her angry expression changed…

Ar=aur agar yeh interest…. Pyaar wala interest hua too????

Shilpa was surprised..his eeyes weren't flirty..but serious..the room was filled with silence… they were looking at eachother..shilpas cell rang..she freed her hand from him..n left the room..armaan smiled..

Ar=arman ka jaduu..chal raha ha…zyada der nahi lagegii….

TaAnu

Anurag was standing..in the bus stand..he was going to meet samrat after completing his tuitions….he was waiting for the bus..when on the opposite side..of the road..he sees a little girl fell down…as a car hit her….anurag ran to her….he picked the girl in his arms..

An=beta..kya hua?? Chot laggayii…

Her head was bleeding….

An=shit..kitna khun behchuka ha..iske sath kaun ha???? Iski mom kaha ha??

Just then a girl came n sat beside anu..holding the childs hand..anurag looked at her n was surprised….it was tani..

T=kuhu…beta..kya hua?? Apko….chot kaise agayii??

Anurag was shocked..it was taanis child..

An=ye apki..

Taani looked at him…..she also recongnized him..but at that time..she was tensed about kuhu…

Ta=dekhiye..plzz..meri madat kijiyee isse hospital lejaneme…..

An=ha..chaliye..

City hospital

Taani n anurag r standing outside the ot….taani is very tensed…just then the doctor comes out..

Ta=doctor…kuhu kaise ha?????

D=shes fine…ap usse milsakte ha….

Ta=theek ha……

They go inside..n sees her sitting…

Ta=kuhu..betaa…..

Taani hugs her..anurag also comes in..he thinks kuhu is taanis daughter….

Ta=ap theek hona???

K=ma theek hu……

Ta=apne to mujhe dara diya tha..agar apko kuch hojata too???
anurag comes to them…

K=-thank u uncle…apne mujhe apni godh me uthaya tha na…

Anurag smiles…

An=ur welcome beta..aur humesha yaad rakhna..apni mummy ka hath ese beech rasteme nahi chodna chahiye..

K=ye meri maa nahi ha..yeh meri taani chaachi ha..

Anurag looks at taani…

An=ye apki beti nahi ha???

T=ji nahiii…yeh meri…bhabi ki beti ha…

Just then another girl entersd

T=ananya di..

An=kuhuu..beta…taani isse chot kaise ayii??

T=di..ap shant hojaooo…kuhu abhi theek ha….

An=yeh kaun ha/???

T=di..yeh…

K=mummy..ye wahi uncle ha..jinhone mujhe save kia…

An=ap..

Anu=ji..woh….actually mane dekha..ke ye niche gir gayi..to ma bas..

An=apka…booth bohot shukriya….thank u so mucchhh….meri bacchi ki jaan apnee bachayii ha…thank u…

Anu=ji..theek ha..koi baat nahi…

Nurse-excuse me..ap mese bacchi ki maa kaun ha/???

An=ma hu..

Nurse=ap reception me…jake form fill up kardijiye…

An=theek ha….taani ma abhi ayi.,..

T=ji…..

Taani looks at anurag…

T=thank u….

Anu=ur welcome……wase..us din..ap…

T=usdin keliye..im sorry…ma thora ghabra gayi thi…too..

Anu=its okk….wase…mane ek baar aur bhi apko road par dekha tha….apse baat karna chahta tha par…

T=ohh...wase ap waha kya karrahehte..????

An=ji..ma gurukul ka student hu..par part time job keliye tution schools me application dene gaya tha..

T=tution schools?????

Anu=ji..ma…

T=ap bacchoko ghar me parha sakte ha??????
an=ji..ha..kyu?????

K=uncle…ap mujhe paraogee???

An=beta..apkoo????

T=ji ha….actually di aur ma bohot dinose…kuhu keliye ek acchi tution teacher dhund rahe the..aur app…

An(in mind)=thank u mayank sir..apke ek idea ne too…mujhe taani ke ghar tak ka rasta dediya..thank u sir..

T=ap kya soch rahehtee???

An=ma kabse auu??????

T=kalse…thank u thank u so much..

Taani was very much happy..she hugged kuhu..anu also smiled..seeing her so happy…

K=chale chhachiii???mamma kaha ha..

Kuhu dragged her from there..taani turned around..n looked at anu…..anu also looked at her…taani left from there…

Anu=are…iske chakkar me..ma to address lena hi bhul gaya..anu tu na..ek stupid ha…!!!!!!

Precap:

SAJAN

S=itni late night ko disco se akele aogiii..aur wo bhi in kaprome.e..ladke to attract hongehi na????

G=im sorry..thanks…..

ARSH

Sh=tum kabhi timese nahi asakte na????

Ar=aj pehla din ha./.tum eese bolrahihu..jaise…kitni bar late hochuka huu..

Sh=yes..pehli din hi latee…kaam ke mamleme…punctual hona sikhoo..samjhe?????

TAANU

T=ap bohot acche insaan ha….

Anu=thanks..to kya ma itna accha hu..ke..apke samne..dosti ka hath bara sakuu????

T=ji??? Dostii?????

HEY GUYS..I NO..IVE UPDATED AFTER A LONG TIME...IM NOW IN CLASS 10..FINAL.. SO THERES A LOT LOT...PRESSURE OF STUDIES...STILL I MANAGED TO UPDATE..A LONG ONE... GUYS FROM NOW ON..ILLL BE A LITTLE IRREGULAR.. BUT WILL WRITE THE FF;S WHEN ILL GET TIME..N PLZZ DO PM ME..

DO COMMENT..N PRESS LIKE..THANKS..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
awesome updt maisha...luvd it so much..felt bad fr samrta...awesome...
and i understand dear even i m in class 10th so i understand ur condition...we will wait..do cont. soon
ambika
Posted: 14 years ago
#90
nice update.pleas continue soon.thanks for pm.

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