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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting
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i rushed through my final thinking u must have had updated by now....but u havent :(
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wont be long.. just updated remo.. now this one
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OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG em soooooooooooo happpiieeeeeeeeee...!!!!


I loveeeeeeeee this FF, its starting is GREATTTTT....!!!!👏👏

awesome Update..!!😳

wow MAAN have sended her to the city.👍🏼...so he CHANGED awl the khandani riwayat and awl...awesome...!!!

Yea leap and that toO of 10 yearssssssss *phew*😲😲
twist...hope it'll be a good one..!!!!😃


status saying UPDATING..so how long???🥱
and please don't sleep on your leppi..lol.
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Posted: 14 years ago
atleast Maan felt guilty of his deeds
luved d updates
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago





...Siski'
Part 3


JUst want to say a special thank you...
i hope i do justice to this ff...

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR ALL
THE LOVE & SUPPORT


SORRY for short one.. will update long 2mx

xxx

double update :)😳



After 10 years...


BOMBAY...


She sat there quietly. Airport. She was due back to mumbi today. Seeing her so called husband. Tears... For past 10 years thats what she have been doing. Crying. Crying endlessly... A silent cry...

Some one taps on her shoulder... Geet jumps... It was maan... & her 9 years old daughter... Miraz.

Mir "mamma!" geet smiles & hugs her tight. She have missed her so much... More then anything. Maan smiles & gives her forehead a kiss. Geet still felt the shiver with his touch... They never came close since that day... After that night... Maan found out geet was pregnant. That left both shaken... She probably was the youngest mother of her generation... They had to hide... Hide to give birth to this child. Geet nearly lost her life after that but she survived... She wanted to die... Why she survived she wondered. She is 21 now. A well grown mature girl.. Mature but the fear of her childhood still there. Fear of something will wrong happen haunted her for past 10 years... After giving birth to miraz maan brought her to mumbi. He was helpful. Geet would never neglate that. Very.. After she gain the understanding of this world... She respected maan in every way. But the sillent cry was still there. Her heart still shivered with the chill... Her body shakes when she is near him...


Maan alone brought up miraz... Her every need... I wasn't allowed to tell anyone about my life. I had to respect maan & my child safety... What would my child go through in school if they knew what her mother went through... What about her friends... What about this girls mental stability... & maan.. He would have been behind bar... Then who would have looked after us? Back to that village again... Another child marriage... Another life ruined...


Miraz was busy wrighting something on the notepad.

Maan " how was your journey?"

Geet "good!"

Maan "when are you going back?"

Geet " next week!"

Maan " are you planning to stay here at all?"

Geet "no! I was thinking take miraz with me!... Your family will be here soon..." geet stops. Maan knew exactly what she meant!

Maan "I have no intention to stay with them either... I am think to move to bombay as well!"

Geet " alright... I think we need to buy a bigger house then!"

Maan " yes.. I already have thought about it! I am looking!"

Geet nodes...

Miraz " maama! Pappa! Does that mean I have to change school?"

Geet " ha beta. New school. New friend!"

Miraz "uff!"

Maan "don't worry... You will settle there very well!"

Miraz " yes but..."

Geet "its for our own good."

Miraz nodes...


They arrive at there house. Geet didnt like it. Thats why she never comes... Only reason she comes back to see miraz & maan. He wanted to finish study. Complete everything... Then they will work on there relationship... But who knows what happens... Geets fear & anger was only the beginning...


Miraz "mama do you know.. Me & pappa made ur fav!"

Geet "acca!" she looks at maan... "what have you cooked?"

Maan "nothing much... Everything you like"

Geet laughs historically... Something maan or miraz never understood... If maan ever try to do anything nice for her.. She will alway smock it... Geet wasn't a happy go lucky person!... Her childhood fear wasn't handled well at all... & after having miraz... Her health seems to become wars & wars day by day.

Maan & geet have seen many dr... Of course they couldn't say she had a child at the age of 12... But her ill health was visible...

Maan "did you take all of your medication on time?"

Geet nodes.

Maan "we have dr appointment soon... Next week I think!"

Geet "pata hi!"

Maan "I hope this time they will be able to catch whats the main problem..."

Geet "whats the point of treatment? Waste of money!"

Maan " GEET!" he snaps...


3 arrives at home... There so called home... Nun have any intention... As maans all bother & cousin living here.. With there respective GF! When miraz was 3 years old maan moved out. They only came to see everyone & take some of there belonging... Nun seems to be interested but only few.. Who just envied geets & maans relationship. He is the only one in the family who looked after his wife & child with great care'






next- Part 4 page 46


the real girls disease is real' & i am researching in to it'

she had it soon as she had the baby'

i will try my best to explain every details like "My dark lover"

xxx


Thanks for all the love & support'

please do leave me comments & like button to motivate

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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i AM FIRST
wonderful part..
I liked th way u r shaping the story!!!
I am loving ur writing more knowing the plight of the actualy lady!!!😭😭😭
great work dear👏👏👏
BTW i sandwiched ur update😉..finally..uff
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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wonderful part..
I liked th way u r shaping the story!!!
I am loving ur writing more knowing the plight of the actualy lady!!!😭😭😭
great work dear👏👏👏
BTW i sandwiched ur update😉..finally..uff

thanks :D

i am not really sure whats her husband was like… but all i can say.. he was one of the most disguting person ever…
its human nature if they do one wrong this first time.. they wanted to do it again..
i changed maan as with all the restriction…
i can make all sick sick..
but far as i am concern he is sick..
& i hate him.. i am sure its rare to find a diamond like maan in this ff… very rare.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesum luved it
Maan is so understanding
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update keya.....omg geet had a child at 12..........

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