Maneet FF - GEETIKA (OLD THREAD 1 - 2011-12) IMP NOTE PG 136 - Page 84

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome!
loved the dhaba scene!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Dearies..🤗

Thank You all for liking my update and for your wonderful comments. Have been extremely busy with some family issues...and hence sorry for my late posting. 😕

Even I may take time to give a next update....Wish you all understand

Posting Part 36...Dont know why...I wanted to give much better update but I couldnt...hope you all like it and excuse any mistake

Part 36:

Oh...Ok daadi...I will leave right away...see you again soon

Bye bete...hmm...I am sure Maan must be waiting for her somewhere down this hill...Ganeshji...What I think must be true...😉

The rain started catching up speed and it started pouring heavily

Oh this rain...its better I get downstairs as early as possible. Geet is stepping down the stairs in full speed. The stairs were covered with transperent green glass roof top..hence luckily she is not getting drenched while getting down the stairs...but the last few steps touching the ground level were full of water and slippery. Geet didn't realise that it and she ran over it...slipped and about to fall down on the ground when someone runs to her and grabs her by her waist. During this process, she happens to hit her head on his chest and holds both her hand on his shoulder with a tight grip...Both got into "Semi-hug" position feeling each other's breath.she somehow guessed who it is and she moves a little back to look at his face and both have a eye lock. His hand still holding on to her waist...Rain drops falling on them but they are still lost in each other...don't know why.

Both snap out immediately when they realise they are in a public place. Still raining heavily

Sir..

Get into the car...quick

The car was parked few feet away. Geet couldnt walk as one of her feet got twisted. She tried to walk but couldnt. Maan liftes her instantly...Oops..she didnt expect this at all... and how could people around miss such a sight...She doesnt know how to react one one hand she is feeling embarrassed and feeling ticklish with his touch... An Eyelock again not to miss.

Bhagawane...(Babaji) why the more I try to stay away from him, the more we end up banging on each other...why are you doing this to me? I don't want to get into any thought that doesn't have a future.

He could feel her loud heartbeat as both her hand covers around his neck for a balance. Her breath falling on his chest...Its a strange feeling altogether...He simply admires her face as every rain drop falling on her face...he is again looking into those deep eyes which he avoids to see to the maximum level (but fails) as he feels that it wants to tell him million things...of course he mistakes it to be an illusion.

He brings her down when they near the car and they happen to take the respective seats. And the drive starts. Geet sooths her feet by rubbing it with her hand.

Sir...You are still here?

He initially didn't know what to answer...Woh...I had a document to be delivered just close by. Its just a walkable distance. I just finished with it and got to see you when I get back here.

See...I told you its going to rain heavily...I would have got you dropped at your home...But you never listened.

Was it so important to come down to this temple with so many risks...you don't know what happens when it rains this heavily, you don't get taxi, the water gets higher than the ground level...

Ayyooo Bhagawane...Enna Aachu ivaruku. Mazhaiyai Mudal darava parararo? ( Hey Babaji...what happened to him? Is he seeing rain for the first time?)

And see...you were about to fall and thank God I was there otherwise, you would have come to office with 10 stitches on your face

10 STITCHES😲...Sir...you are talking as if its not rain but its a Tsunami

What?

I just came for the darshan which I regularly do and rain is something natural...we just cannot stop what we are doing, where we are going because its raining...and being rainy season, its simply not possible to just remain in your own place because of that.

OK...let me ask you one thing...will you stop working or will you stop us to come to office because its raining heavily...will you accept it as an excuse for not coming to office? I am sure you will not..If we get scared of these natural factors, then it becomes difficult to carry on with our daily routines...That's why I try to enjoy living with it than fearing it.

Maan looks at her for a sec.

And luckily, you were there today to help me out of this rain and saved me from falling...But I will get into such tricky situations again and again in my life and I need to face it all alone...and not everytime I can expect that you will come and help me (In a way she is giving an answer to her restless mind)

He again looks at her...

Am I correct sir?

Maan didnt understand whether to tell YES or NO...

The car stops near Geet's home.

Sir...Would you like to join for a cup of coffee? Its just a guesture from her side

No ...I have to go

once again Thank You for everything...See you tomorrow...Bye...with a smile

He just gives a slight smile and leaves
Geet gets in to find Pinky was already there.

Oye Geet...Kahan thi yaar? (Where were you?)...And you played in Rain?

Do you remember, Me and Maan Sir had to attend a meeting...It got too late by the time the meeting finished and hence sir dropped me here.

You had something to eat?

Yeah..I had at "Simply South"...also convinced Maan sir to join...

Oye Geet...kya bolrahi hai? (what are you saying?) Maan Sir Aur Simply South...Impossible

Why?

Its good place for yours and my standards but not for Maan Sir's...For his status, he would prefer high standard eat outs...

But he did join me and also seemed to enjoy the food there.

Hmm...It may be a coincidence...Or maybe he preferred to join you at Simply South, rather than taking you to his regular eat outs and fell small in front of people over there...What can be said about the high class people?

No Pinky...its not true...First he offered me to join him for lunch at Fish & Chips...but you know I am a pure vegetarian...I couldn't even getinto that restaurant and that's when I suggested him Simply South

Whatever...Maan sir and all other people belonging to his category are very different from we middle class people by all terms and aspects. Anyways... Your hair and cloths are still wet. You change and I will get coffee ready for you.

Geet is lost again...As if she got a strong answer for the questions raising in her mind...Its so true...Pinky is correct...so much differences in the lifestyle, culture, habits and what not...I should stop thinking about all this...It will lead to NOWHERE...

Maan stops his car on the way...Still raining.

He felt like standing out in rain for some time...Didnt know why he was feeling this...He recalled the entire incidents for the day...he did all what he never did or does...WHY? Why did I agree to all what she said today...Me and vegetarian food and that too at a South Indian restaurant...how could I ever imagine in my life? And why did I wait for her near that temple...Over and above all, he hates rain and he is now enjoying it...Why am I not getting any answer?

Arre Bhai...Aap tho bheegi billi jaise bheege huye hain...Annie Laughs ( You look as if you are drenched cat)

He gives a glare at her

Maan Bete...What happened?

Did Geet meet him again? I am sure they would have...Wonder what followed😉

Nothing Daadima...The car got repaired and I got struck in rain that's it.

What happened? You should have called me I would have sent another car. Now go change yourself..you will catch cold or even fever

Dev and NT pass by Maan...Are bro...aap kab se bearish ka mazaa lene lage? (Since when you started enjoying rain?)

Dev...How many times to tell you..Think before you talk...anyways...my car stopped in middle of the road and it was raining...That's how I got drenched.

Dev-NT look at each other and smile.

Maan changes and joins the family at the dinner table. Maan is completely lost in another world.

Maan bete...Today I have got all your favourite for dinner...Tandoori Fish, palak gosht...

Daadima...I dont want to have all this...

But Maan...these are your favourites

Daadima...I dont feel like eating these. Vegetarian main kya bana hain (What vegetarian food is available?)

Daadi is shocked to listen to this...Maan and Vegetarian...especially during dinner...huh..what am I listening? Daadi turned to vegetarian eating long time back. She offers to share.

Maan...I have got Shahi Paneer, Aloo-Palak and vegetable biryani for myself..you can share it with me if you want

Hmm

Dev-NT look at Daadima for an answer for what's going on.

Bro...You are not having your favourite food for dinner...All fine na

Ya Dev...Its just that I am bored of eating non-veg food again and again.

Dev smiles inwardly as he is really not convinced with his bro's answer.

Daadi is so happy to see these changes in him. She always believed that Maan's hot temper is due to excessive consumption of Non-Veg.

Precap: "Enough is Enough...I will not change myself at any cost"

Will send PMS later 😳

Edited by Vaidhumom - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
me 1st yahhh!!!!!!! . will read n comment soon after .
awesome update. luved d changes in Maan. Eating Vegetarian food is not his cup-of-tea.
As i am a vegetarian myself n i hate d smell of non-veg food i understand Geet's behaviour. But Maan eating veg is really a drastic change . Thnx 4 d pm.
Edited by maanluvsgeet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow simply awesome slowly their feelings are growing for each other
continue soon dear waiting for more
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome yaar,...loved it so much !!!
maan and vegetarian !!
yeh pinky be na , always confusing geet ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
they getting confused with their feelings and their diff lifestyle is definitely a barrier...
but maan giving up non veg wah bhai wah...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awesome part love to see him changing i am too pure vegii and love vegi food
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Posted: 14 years ago
She always believed that Maan's hot temper is due to excessive consumption of Non-Veg ...🤣 🤣 🤣Kya baath hai di ...its really true???😆

Bechara Maan ...Geet ne kya banadiya😆


When did MSK started to lie???😆 Its against his principles😆😆 ...ek din mein kitna jhoot😲😆

loved the update ...awesome!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
maan eating veg. wow maan babu is changed. thnx to geet madam. dadi eating veg briyani, aloo palak n shahi paneer. wow ,,,,,, me tooo feeling hungry???
Edited by ammu5 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awesome part di...
loved it...
both r confused... enjoying it...
n mainly maan is changing n vegeterian food... OMG...
di plss continue soon... waiting 4 ur updates...😊
n thanks 4 giving an awesome update...

jyothi



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