Maneet FF - GEETIKA (OLD THREAD 1 - 2011-12) IMP NOTE PG 136 - Page 52

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Hey guys...Got busy with few unexpected things...Next post tomorrow morning...😕
Promise you a long update as long as my last update. 😊😳
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Hie Sonali...how are you?
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Originally posted by: Vaidhumom

Hie Sonali...how are you?
Thanks for lovely comment.


m fine dear
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Again a long part...posting now...will do the Editing and corrections later. Thanks for all your support 🤗
PART 26:

He calls Geet. Geet, Dev is left, you can continue with your work. And keeps the phone. Maan...Its better for you to stay away from Geet.

On the other hand...Geet keeps the phone and feels strange...why am I shivering? What's happening to me?

Uff...in between all this, I missed to check with Dev about when he is going to join me. Such an important thing to check with him. Very rarely he visits office and it's nearly impossible to check with him when I am back home. Is Geet ke chakkar main sab bhool gaya.

Geet walks in and Maan still thinks about what Dev found out about him...and tries the maximum to avoid looking at her or get distracted with her presence. Geet finishes with her work and keeps the files back to the respective places. She moves away from that place but her Duppatta gets stuck on one of the indoor plant which has lot of bare branches with few thorns. Her Duppatta completely stuck on it and she struggles to remove it without tearing the material. She removes one end of the Duppatta and the other end gets stuck in another end.

Maan slowly turns towards Geet and finds her struggling with her Duppatta. He initially didn't want to help her out...but she was taking such a long time that he goes ahead to help her. He brings his hand on her Duppata to help her remove it. She didn't happen to see him coming close to her ...during this process she happens to touch his hand softly and shocked to see him next to her. They both lost in each other's eyes...her hand still on his hand for quite some time.

They both snap out of their eye lock and Geet takes her hand off his hand when the reality strikes them. Maan takes out her duppatta off that bare plant and slowly puts the duppatta back on her shoulder when Dev comes back...

Dev got to see something unusual...Maan and Geet are shocked to see him back. Bro...woh sorry, main knock karna bhool gaya...didn't want to disturb you... I just came to check with you on something...You seem to be busy with your...he keeps quite and smirks...😈 its ok, will come back later.😉

What? Why later?😲

Not later? Ok...will come tomorrow then.

Why tomorrow?

Not even tomorrow? Tik hain...let me know when you are done with your important task so that I can come and meet you...Till then, enjoy... 😉 he smirks at both of them and leaves from that place.

Maan and Geet look at each other all shocked 😲

Dev...ruk jao...I mean, I need to talk to you now.

Dev doesn't seem to respond.

Yeh Dev ko kya ho gaya hain?

Geet shots an angry look at Maan.😡

What have you told your brother about me?😡

Ab issse kya ho gaya hain?

What was your brother saying? 😡

I myself don't know what was he saying.🤢

Do you think I dont know anything? You have told him something about me and he was indicating to that...wonder what you have told him...and see...what all he was saying...Bhagawane...chi chi...

Maan pins her on the wall...CHUP BILKUL CHUP keeping his index finger on her lips. Geet is lost with the soft touch of his finger on her lips and he is mesmerised with the feel of her soft lips. both lost again in each other's eyes for a longer time till his phone rings.

Before taking the call...Better stop thinking unwanted things and concentrate on your work. We have better things to worry about...Hmm?

Even though she nods her head and happens to leave from there, she still looks lost in some other world...not convinced with this DEV character.

Geet came back to her desk... It was not Maan Sir's fault at all? Why the hell he would talk about me to his brother...But...What was that Dev telling... "Didn't want to disturb you" what did he mean?...chi chi... Meera did a good thing to have slapped this idiot. 😡

Maan sir is correct, it's better to concentrate on work...I have so many important things to do.

Maan finishes the call...and just thinks what ever happened...Its not her fault to think like that. After all, whatever Dev spoke was absolute rubbish...wonder what happened to him. He has been really spoiled and pampered to have gone down this level. Now, I feel that who ever slapped him today did a good thing by doing so.😡

In the evening...

Pinky-Geet's res...

Pinky and Geet reach home all tired and exhausted.

Meera walks in with her luggage.

Hey Meera...

The trio get into a friendly hug.🤗

Sorry yaar, couldn't talk to you much during office hours. Hope it was not difficult to trace the location.

Hey no...not at all. Yash is too familiar with Delhi So, no worries.

The trio freshen up and have a get together

Oye Geet...Today after seeing the dashing Maan Singh Khurana in real, I was so so lost in him yaar...Geet...I am Mad-Jealous about you... You are reporting to the most most hottest person and no reaction in you what so ever.

Geet remains quite...She is thinking about that incident happened today, how the Deer Devil asked her to keep quite by keeping his index finger on her lips.😍

GEEET...Where are you? 😲

Hun? What happened?

E lo...Patha nahin kya hoga is ladki ka...she doesnt even know what we were talking.

So, how is it working with him?

Who?

Dhak Dhak 😍

Oh you mean, Deer Devil...Hmm...tik hain😕

What? Deer Devil...aur what Tik hain?😕

Aur Main kya kahoon yaar?

Dont you ever feel to keep getting into his cabin with some or the other strange reasons...just to get a glimpse of him?😍

Pinky Giggles.

Geet is not interested to talk further on this topic. Meera Madam...Peecha chodo...Aur kuch baath karthe hain na yaar. Why dont you talk about Yash?

Pinky joins...haan yaar...apne boss ke bare main bhi tho batao...how is he? How is it working with him.

Woh...what shall I say..main jahan jaathi hoon, namoone hi palle padthe hain.

Woh tho badda flirt hain...Kaam kum aur mera peecha jyadha kartha rahtha hain.

Geet Giggles...Pinky...yeh Meera ka speciality hain...jo iska peecha padtha hain, usse kabhi pasand nahin karegi...All those who follow her fall under "Flirt" bracket. 😆

And Then...who invites her for dinner...will get one tight slap...🤣referring to what happened today.

GEET ki bachi...Tehar ja...abhi mazza chakathi hoon...😡and Meera tries to catch hold of her and Geet hides behind Pinky.

Arre Arre...Geet ne eise kya kah diya jis se tum itni gussa ho rahi ho?

GEET tells what ever happend in office today and Pinky rolls out with laughter.

Arre Wah Meera...you slapped that Dev...You have real guts yaar!🤣

Meera makes a baby face.

Really...You both make a wonderful pair...One slaps the younger brother and the other slaps...OUCH 🥱

Geet pinches Pinky indicating her to STOP...🥱

What were you saying?
Pinky clears her throat...main kah rahi thi...challo khana khathe hain...bhook lagi hain yaar...I didnt munch anything for the last one hour😕

In the kitchen...Geet apologises to Pinky...Sorry dear...Meera doesnt know about that unusual meeting with Maan sir and I slapped him...isliye main ne tumhen pinch kiiya...SORRY...bohuth choat lagi?

Pinky pinches Geet back...bas itna sa dard hua...winks and smiles😉

OUCH...Geet first looks angrily at Pinky and slowly both laugh out louder. 😆

They both arrange the dinner table...The dinner was arranged with all Meera's favourates.

The trio enjoy their dinner talking about their school days which they spend together...a flawless life filled with joy and optimism. A life filled with true innocence...not aware of the cruel world around nothing...nothing else mattered at that time...

Pinky...why didnt you continue with your college studies? We all missed you so much during our college days you know.

Pinky was sad...What to do...that's what life holds for me. Remember my mom's sudden death, just few days after the 12th exams...Myself and papa didn't feel like staying back in Bangalore after that and we decided to come back to Delhi to stay in this ancestral property. That's it. Papa suggested me to continue my education...but I lost interest after losing my mom. Pinky has tears in her eyes.😭

Sorry yaar...I didn't mean to hurt you.

Meera and Geet console her...Its ok yaar...Actually, feeling nice after sharing the burden of my mind with you people. 😊

Aur Geet...I am so happy to see you back to your jovial best...I was missing this Geet so so much for the last 7-8 months. Wonder what happened...you got into a shell and you almost stopped interacting with all your friends...all you were bothered about is only studies studies and studies...you didn't even take part in any extracurricular activities happened during last few months of our college life...Why Geet? What had happened? You have been denying this but must answer now...C'mon tell me.

Pinky is about to give an answer...Geet holds her hand under the table so that Meera doesnt happen to see...gesturing Pinky not to say anything about her past to Meera.

Woh kya hain na Meera, remember my Grandmother had passed away? She was my inspiration and even I got into that depression after loosing her. Also, the last promise I had given her was that I will excel in my studies...that's why I was concentrating only on studies...nothing else mattered to me.

Lo kar lo baat...One of my friend left her studies due to the depression following her mother's death...and the other one turned to be a book worm after her Grandmother's death...Kya friends hain mere...totally lost in an EMOTIONAL World...and Meera pats both Pinky and Geet on their shoulder.

Challo...baathen hothe rahenge...Pehle khana khalethe hain.

At KM...

The entire family at dinner table

Bro...you wanted to talk something important with me in office...lets talk it out after dinner...is it ok?

Maan looks lost...All he could remember now is the feel of her soft lips on his index finger.😍

BRO

HUN..😲

Main keh raha tha ke...😳

Dev...I need to talk to you. Meet me after dinner

Dev, Daadi, NT smile inwardly...thinking what's wrong with Maan...Annie is too young to understand all this...she is busy enjoying her dinner.

Just after finishing dinner, Maan gets a call from Mr. Ravi from Hegde and Sons

Hello Mr. Khurana...how do you do?

I'm fine and You?

Great

Sorry to disturb you. I will be leaving back to Mysore tomorrow at 12:30 PM. Had to preplan my trip due to some emergency. Is it possible for you to finish with the project designing and handover to me before I leave.

Will get it done Mr. Ravi.

Shall I pass by your office around 11:00 PM and collect the completed designs?

Sure...3 portions are already done...the 4th one is the only thing pending. Will get into that task right away.

Thank You Mr. Khurana

Maan cuts the call

I have to call Geet and get this final designing done...no other choice.

Maan enters Daadi's room just to talk to her for some time.

Daadi is busy enjoying old and classical hindi songs on TV.

Wah wah purane gaanon ki baat hi kuch aur hain...

The song currently aired is from the movie NAVRANG.

Maan tries Geet's mobile but there is no answer. He doesn't know Geet's res number. He immediately calls Aadi and takes from him.

Simultaneously in Pinky-Geet's res...

The trio busy munching dinner...

The phone rings...Geet takes the call

Hello Rita hain ma'm?

Wrong number and she keep the phone...

The phone rings again

Hello...Rita hain ma'm?

I told you its a wrong number...😡

Challo...lets make it a right number...if not Rita, you are there na...😉

She bangs the phone...JERK

What happened?

Some idiot trying to find some Rita and when I said Wrong number, he is trying to play pranks with me...😡

Yeh Dilli hain meri jaan...Its so common for guys to flirt over the phone...

Acha...yeh baat hain...next time when he calls, will give him such gaalis in Tamil...that he will remember his ancestors.

Haan Geet...Idea bura nahin hain...he might have heard all Gaalis in Hindi which he is used of...I am sure he will get lost in an Alian world after hearing Tamil Gaalis from you.

WOW...Have to accept it...Whenever Geet starts giving tamil flavoured Gaalis, Ache Achon ki chutti ho jaathi hain...You know Pinky...Geet ki Gaalis door door tak mashoor hain.

Acha...Chal...lets record in mobile when she starts giving tamil Gaalis. Eise Anmol shabd baar baar sunne ko kahan milenge yaar?

Haan pinky...bada maza aayega

Par yeh phone kyon nahin baj raha...😕

The phone rings...

Phone baja...jaldi se record karo...eise moke baar baar nahin milthe.😉

Geet takes the call and without allowing the other person to talk...

Eruma Maadu... Nai...Azhuku Panni...Porikki...Porambokku...Manasula enna periya Manmadannu nenaipo? Dhairiyam irrunda en munnadi vaada...Innoru darava inga phone panninayo, Policekitta pottu kuduthuduven jakradhai (You buffalo, Dog, Ugly Pig...rogue...useless fellow...You think you are a king/rajkumar? Come in front of me if you have guts... I will hand over you to police if you dare calling here again...mind it. )

and she slams the phone.

At KM...

Maan takes his mobile out of his ears and looks at it as if this is the first ever time he is getting to see the mobile in his life.😆

Daadima is still busy enjoying Navrang Song...

Arre Ja Re Hatt Natkat...Naa Chhoo Re Meraa Ghoonghat
Palat ke doongi aaj tujhe gaali re...Mujhe samjho na tum bholi bhaali re

(Hey you...get lost...dont touch my Ghoonghat...will start telling Abusive words...Dont think I am Innocent Girl and will not do so)

Maan is already fuming with Anger...😡This Song was definetly adding more fuel to it...😆

Aaya holi kaa tyohar, Udde Rang Kee Bauchhaar
Tu hain naar nakharedaar matwali re
Aaj Meethi Lage hain terri gaali re

(The Holi festival is here spreading colours...and you are a mischievous but a mind-blowing girl ...Today, Even your Abusive words sounds SWEET to me)

Link to this song on youtube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tbFeb0vllJs
Aaj Meethi lage hain terri gaali Re
...Wah wah kya gaana hain...Daadi lost in this song

Aaj Meethi lage hain terri gaali...My Foot...and he is about to leave from there when Daadi holds his hand...

Kya hua Maan bete...

Kuch nahin daadima...kissi ka dimag kharab ho gaya hain...ussi ko tik karne jar raha hoon...and he leaves from Daadi's room

Yeh Maan bhi na...Always in a angry mood...

Simultaniously at Pinky's res...

Geet slams the phone...

Wah Wah...kya gaaliyan di hain...ab translate bhi kar do...

Hmmm...kya kya kaha tha main ne...I said, buffalo, dog, ugly pig...

The trio roll out with laughter with her translation🤣

But why so many animals names?😲

C'mon yaar..how do I know how this idiot looks...That's why I gave a combination of 3-4 animals...Says innocently and Pinky and Meera again Roll out with laughter

The phone rings again...

This guy is impossible...he is not satisfied with so many Gaalis...Let me teach him a lesson once again...

She takes the phone and about to start with second batch of gaalis...

Before you start again...understand that its me who is on the line...Maan Singh Khurana

Geet Stands rooted where she is standing near the phone...there is pin drop silence. Meera-Pinky eagerly waiting for the second batch of Gaalis...

Geet..Kya hua? Shurru kar na...in a hissing manner

Today, you have crossed all your limits Geet...You started shouting at me without listening to me...On that day you were giving all apologies and with that, I was assuming you have changed but...

Geet cuts the call.

She cut the call? She cut the call of Maan Singh Khurana!

Kya hua Geet?

Geet gulps her saliva...looks all shocked.

Woh...Woh...call from my boss...both this time and the last time...🤢

Pinky-Meera look at each other...Not able to comment any thing...

So...all those Gaalies were aired in ears of Maan Singh Khurana?

Geet Nods "Yes" helplessly

Oh no...Geet...Tumhara aur Dilli ka saat bas yahan tak ka tha

Arre Dumbo...let her call back na..He might have called this time as there is something important.

I will not call him back...he will kill me.

Geet...relax...you will end up getting into more problems if you dont call him back. Challo...call him...we will wait outside.

Meera and Pinky leave from the place.

Phone pannina kashtam...pannatiyum kashtam...Eppovum indha maan boothathukitta naan maatindu muzhikaren...Ennoda Velai kandippa pochu...Irundaalum phone panni parkarean...Bhagawaane Kaapathu (There is a problem if I call him back or even if I dont call him back...Always, I get cought with this Deer Devil in such a way that I dont get words to express...My job is gone for sure...but still let me talk to him and see...Babaji help)

She calls him back on Maan's mobile...

Listen You...😡

I'm Sorry...I'm very very very very SORRY😕

If I would have known its you...I would have corrected myself and would have told "Vella Panni" (White Pig)...she bites her tongue and closes her eyes tightly...What am I saying? Bhagawane...enaku paithiyam pidichuruchu (Babaji...I have gone mad)

What?

I mean...I didnt know its you..Just before you called me, A rouge was trying to flirt with me over phone...all those Abusive words were for that guy not for you...Once again...I am really sorry🤢

Oh Geet...stop it.😡

SSsir..Believe me...I those words are not for you

Will you keep quite now.

Geet keeps her finger on her lips and keeps quite.

GEET...GEET...are you there?

Sir...I'm keeping quite

Now listen to me...

He narrated Mr. Ravi's call and what they discussed...

So, you have to come to my home now and we both need to complete this project work...

What...to your home...no way...Sir...How can I go to a stranger's house?

What? I am your boss, so do what I say

Sir..I will die..but never go to a guy's home like this..Chi Chi..

GEET...Maan clinches his fist..OK...now listen to me carefully...we have to finish this project designing today so, let's meet at office...NOW.

Sir...but...this time..

I said NOW..and cuts the call.

Geet looks at the phone and still not convinced...but has to obey her boss's orders. Is there any other choice?

Precap: Maneet all alone at office.😉

Edited by Vaidhumom - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful part!!!

loved it ...awesome!!!

What had happened with Geet???

con soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
wats the secret abt her past...
so their attraction part has started...
since dev not involved in geet past...i am wondering how things r gonna move...
pl cont soon...
hey wud love to hv dadi-geet moment
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome yaar...loved it so much !!!
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Awesome Graphic #17😊

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