Maneet FF - GEETIKA (OLD THREAD 1 - 2011-12) IMP NOTE PG 136 - Page 47

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey any updates now ??
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb!
lol!...finally adi was able to save himself from both maan and dadi😆
last part was funny!...maan will the head of a deer!...just imagine!...lmao!...🤣
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mrk_1

hey any updates now ??

Hey...tomorrow for sure...😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loving the wonderful bonding btwn Geet n dadiman. Oh even he dis Dev is in trouble. Why is he always in trouble. Well does Dev is connected with Geet's past. I mean the six mths back story? Is it going to be same like in serial. ooh no plz. dont do tat to geet. Why does Annie sounds like Maan. I think she inherit maan's attitude. She need to socialize, mayb geet's frenship can change her. Imagine even annie behaves like geet at KM.. Pity maan's situation. oh my Lakshmi I really love the pic in part23. It looks damn funny. Poor adi felo he need to do so many task apart being working wif maan. Thank god geet n dadima didnt bump into each other. Adi manage to save his job. Maan saw cartoon pic n yet didnt scold geet.I wish to see those drawing. Loved the sarcastic reply dadima gave to sasha. Thx for all those wonderful comments. Plz update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ajenn

Loving the wonderful bonding btwn Geet n dadiman. Oh even he dis Dev is in trouble. Why is he always in trouble. Well does Dev is connected with Geet's past. I mean the six mths back story? Is it going to be same like in serial. ooh no plz. dont do tat to geet. Why does Annie sounds like Maan. I think she inherit maan's attitude. She need to socialize, mayb geet's frenship can change her. Imagine even annie behaves like geet at KM.. Pity maan's situation. oh my Lakshmi I really love the pic in part23. It looks damn funny. Poor adi felo he need to do so many task apart being working wif maan. Thank god geet n dadima didnt bump into each other. Adi manage to save his job. Maan saw cartoon pic n yet didnt scold geet.I wish to see those drawing. Loved the sarcastic reply dadima gave to sasha. Thx for all those wonderful comments. Plz update soon.

Thanks dear...😳
Dev is in trouble...you will get your answers if there is Dev's connection with Geet's past, wait for next one or two updates. To get a clue...read quitely and understand, Dev-Geet convo over the telephone -
Part 14-page 39.
Loved your comments...Really encourages me.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hie Everyone...Thanks for your wonderful comments.🤗
Busy for last two days. Added the lyrics for the song posted in last part.
Part 24:

Geet...I never knew that you are too too good in drawing cartoon charectors and animals...especially deers... 😈 he smirks and leaves a confused, nervous and speechless Geet behind blinking with her eyes wide open.😲😕🤢

Maan comes back to his cabin and just smiles thinking about his own picture. What is this? I actually wanted to schold and warn her for what she drew about me...but what happened? What changed me after I entered into her cabin? I praised her in return? What is this? This is not ME. Why I change when I see her? Need to teach this "Madrasan" (How most of the North Indians call a Chennaiete/girl from Chennai) a lesson...but how?

Geet almost fell on her chair after Maan left from her cabin and kept on thinking about what she just heard...she is all angry and upset with her own kiddish act which has turned to be a blunder now. Pochu.. Ellam pochu... Bhagawane...edhu nadakakoodadho adhu nadanduruthu (Every thing is gone...Babaji...What should have not happened has happened). She walks restlessly within her cabin and giving glance at Maan thro the blinds every now and then...Geet...you are an well educated idiot...your talent has to be appreciated, firstly, you draw a wonderful cartoon picture about your boss and you also proudly wrote "My Boss" beneth it and on top of that you forgot your notebook at your boss desk...wow...big applause to you. 😡 Thank god that she was about to write "MY BOSS-A DEER DEVIL" but later decided to keep it as simple as "MY BOSS"...and that's the only intelligent thing she did. 😆

And this Deer Devil, No manners what so ever. How can he open someone else's note book just like that and that too a girl's note book. 😡 Ippo yaar poi bosskitta sandai podamudiyum? (Now who can fight with the boss?) She slowly gazes into her boss's cabin thro the blinds. Maan seems to be busy with his laptop. Actually he has been sensing restlessness in her and smiling inwardly but trying not to show it. She remains puzzled for sometime and then concentrates on her blue print drawing which she had assured to show it to him in one hour time. She has arranged the blueprint neatly on the drawing board and just started drawing following the method explained by Maan.

Sharp by the end of an hour, Geet gets a call

Come to my cabin with the blue print you have started drawing...I want to check if you are doing it correct this time. He keeps the phone.

Sure sir...She keeps the phone. Bhagawane...Avar moonjila eppadi mushikiradhu? Kaapathu (Babaji...how will I face him? Help!)

She knocks his cabin door and comes in with her blue print. She is handing over the blue print to him but her hand is shivering to a core. She is trying to support with other hand as well but its not helping. Maan is inwardly enjoying every bit of it. He knows what is bothering her.

Ss...Ss...Ssir Bl...Blue print.

Geet...I have been observing you are interacting a lot with Aadi these days and as a result you are stammering like him?😡

Oh no, is he indicating me helping Aadi? Now I understand why Aadi is so scared of this Devil...also, I have noted that Aadi stammers only in front of boss.

Geet gulps...Sir...I am not stammering...see, I am talking clearly...She gives a fake idiotic smile. 😃

Maan takes the blue print from her hand and opens it...GEET...what is this? You again got the old print which I rejected this morning...Where is the new one? Dhyan kahan rehtha hain tumhara?😡

Ss..sir...Sss...Sorry I will just get it for you.

She goes back to her cabin, She searches everywhere but not finding the blue print...finally, she gets to see her blue print on the board and hits her head with her right hand. She had left her drawing as it is and she got so confused with Maan's call that she took the old one with her again.

Bhagawane...Innaiku ennanamo nadakudhu 😕(Babaji...what all happening today)...I am sure to loose my job today.🤢

Back to Maan's cabin. The new blue print is in front of him.

What is this? Only so much drawing done in one hour? If we work in this slow pace, then this project will complete only after 25 years.

How am I suppose to mention that I was busy helping Aadi. I barely had 15 minutes...what can I do in that time? Infact...No excuses works infront of this Deer Devil.

What are you thinking now?

Sir...I am still learning this blue print drawing. please give me some more time.😕
Geet...understand the value of time...Anyways its lunch break now. Continue with your drawing after lunch...I will check your drawing in Evening and I need a clear drawing by evening...And no wasting time for what so ever...Hmm?

Evening around 5:45...Geet still involved in her drawing when Maan walks in to her cabin.

Hmm...good start. Much better than what you made this morning. Now that you know the rules to follow for blue print drawing, I Expect you to further improve on this.

Bagawane...Nandri...(Babaji...thanks) My job seems to be safe now. Why not? Who else will agree to work with this Deer Devil. It will be a challenge to find my replacement if he asks me to leave...That's GEETIKA...I am proud of you my dear.😉

Now give some rest to cartoon and animal drawings and concentrate more on this...Hmm??

She gulps her salaiva...and Maan turns to leave and a wicked smile on his face after he turns.

Geet Murmurs not aware that its been loud enough for Maan...Next time, I will make a bigger drawing of him and stick it at the entrance of the office so that everyone can see...You Deer Devil 😡

Maan hears it and turns back to her...What did you say?

Sir...nothing...I was just asking you...its getting 6:00...can I leave?

Sure...carry on...And I am sure that if I didn't leave you, you will draw a bigger drawing of mine and stick it at the entrance of the office...Hmm?

She remains shocked for a while with her mouth open and he is looking at her folding his hand and with a mischievious smirk😈

She comes back to her senses, takes her bag and leaves by looking here and there and avoiding to look at him till she pass by him and smiles after she passes him. Maan turns looks at her from the time she takes her bag and leaves from her cabin till the time she paases him and smiles at her restlessness.

Almost 15 days later...

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15 days to have passed just like a blik of an eye as it turned to be busy period for both Maan and Geet.

Geet has gained more experience with her office work...and most importantly, she has learnt how to handle her boss. She shares excellent work relationship with Aadi and Pinky. The three go very well together.

She has been regularly visiting her University. She has been given dates for her project submission and unit test which will add up to her semistar exams scoring. Her faculty is helping her with it.

Geet been to Ganesh Temple only once or twice during these 15 days and that's the only time she has met Daadi. She has been actively interacting with her Appa-Amma and her sister Rajji...her brother never in the picture. Even he never bothers to call her.

Maan...with his routines with his office work and engrossed in key projects. Definetly finds Geet is of a good help to him...but MSK attitude comes on his way to admit it.

The Mysore project work...3 different phases have been successfully completed. Maneet is busy working on the 4th and the last one.👏

Maneet have bonded very well when it comes to work...Apart from that their personal feelings and hidden desires remains as a mistry for their own self belief. Many a times they face it and denies it...and trying their level best for not getting carried away with their own state of mind. Lets see for how long.😉

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Its a Sunday. Daadi, Maan and Annie are eagerly waiting to receive Dev and Nayantara. They reached KM sharp at 12:00 PM

Daadi Arranges for Aarti before they both get into the manscon. Dev-NT, Take blessings from Daadi and hugs Annie.

Maan and Dev get into a friendly hug. Maan maintains distance with NT. Also, he strongly believes that NT is the one who is responsible for Dev's such condition. Dev is a irresponsible guy but NT didn't take any initiative to bring in true sence of responsibility in him.

Daadi had arranged Dev-NT's room to be cleaned and Maintained by Nakul. They both get fresh.

arround 1:00 PM, the entire family gets together for lunch.

Dev and NT seem to be quite than usual.

Kya baat hain Dev-NT, why you people are so quite?

Dev is about to comment and NT interfares...Ji Daadi...its just that we are tired with the long journey...that's why.

Daadi is worried. She can understand their tiredness...but to this level that they are not talking anything even not interested to know what has been happening here. Atleast enquire with Annie about her studies and about her recent school activities.

Maan finishes with his lunch. Daadima, have to leave now. Have some work pending at office.

Dev, lets meet at Dinner again. Take enough rest for today and...Do come to office tomorrow. Office Adress maloom hain na? That was a taunt...

NT looked puzzled at Maan...What does he mean?

Bro...Are you kidding? How am I suppose to forget our office location? Will surely visit office tomorrow.

Maan pats on Dev's shoulder and leaves.

Dev-NT exchange some glances.

Dev beta...dekha...Aaj Sunday ka dhin bhi Maan ko fursat nahin. Today, he is been here till lunch just because you both are back today...otherwise, even on a Sunday, he leaves to office immediately after breakfast...Now that you are here, do join our family business and give in your share of responsibility.

Dev just smiles at her. Dadima shakes her head with a grin...Kya karoon main is Dev ka? How to bring in the sense of responsibility in him? I am not happy to see Maan struggling all alone.

Later at Dev-NT Room...

Darling...Are you really so tired? Why were'nt you talking during Lunch?

Oh yah...Now, me being quite is also bothering you. Were'nt you quite as well? Why didn't you answer Dadima's question?

Oh darling? Why are you getting angry now? What am I suppose to talk and how could I when you were so quite.

NT gives a evil filled smile which clearly says that she is not convinced.

Comming to Daadima, I didn't answer her as you are not interested in me joining hands with Bro.

That was long time ago when the situation was different. As per the current situation, you should join Badde Veerji and you have not left to decide on any other choice...So, for time being, you need to atleast act that you are with him. And Make Daadima feel that you are equally responsible as your Badde Veerji. Till now, everyone has been thinking that you are not only irresponsible but useless. Kya kah rahe thhe Aap ke Badde Veerji? Office ka address maloom hain na? He thinks he has done a big thing by transferring that money to us and now he is ordering you to join Khurana Construction?

You know very well...we would have been behind bars if Bro was not there.

We have equal rights on the family property...hence he has not done a charity on us by transferring that money.

NT, you know that Bro has always wanted me to contribute equally in the business operations. That's what he meant even today.

That's what I have been fighting with you right from the day we have got married. I wanted to take your share of money and start your own business...but you have been taking money invested only in Gambling...nothing else. You continued the same in Canada. Even though you were serious about business this time, you invested the major portion of the loan in Gambling. Then from where the hell we will make money? We tried to solve the problem on our own and it let to more problems.

Now, I dont want any more problems...Do what I say, its better for you and me that you join hands with Bade Veerji. Will take slow steps from here till we get the authority in our hands.😈

Precap: Dev in Khurana Construction.

Edited by Vaidhumom - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice...
glad to see that maan and geet are getting along with each other pretty nicely!
i hate NT!...😡
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
loved maaneet interactions...
finally v got some negative characters in it...
so no change of characters for dev and nt...
just eager to know if dev knows geet and u told me i will get my ans in the following updates...
so eagerly waiting for it now...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Glad too maaneet are getting along to better. Here comes the entry of vili n villain. I missed NT 🤢
Lakshmi i reread the part14 but i got no clue bout their connection 😕 It just seems like he tried flirting with Geet. So me just going to patiently wait for ur next updates. 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome

so dev n nt are same evil minded and my doubts are somehow getting clear about them.

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