Jeevansathi (RTMC ff) Pt 12 in Pg 54

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Khushi Grover

@Amor.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#451

awesome part

loved the description

continue soon wanna read sid n avan's relation after dadibua's entry

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

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Posted: 13 years ago

#452

Thanx for such a lovely nd romantic update.

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glossyglassy

@glossyglassy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#453

Another awesome update!!

How do u manage to write better each time??.

Arjun...wow..whata twist

Avani-Sid staring session was so romantic

And when she blushes...it's so cute

Arjun-Sid convo was very funny

Dadi bua...hmm

Mount everest...haha..dat line was hilarious!!

I'm sure Avani unka bhi dil jeet legi

I hope Dadi bua ki entry se dono aur kareeb aaye

Plz update soon

Thx for PM

Lov u...

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disha

@disha15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#454

OMG!such an epic update! 😍

First off,woh arjun tha? 😛 lol i was so sure it wud be anamika 🤣

Sid toh gaya 😉 avani ki aankhon mein har do minute dooba rehta hai 🤣 ye pyaar nahi toh aur kya hai 😛

Loved the avani-siddharth romantic scenes <3

Ye daadibua kyun aa rahi hai? 😕 mujhe inke iraade kuch theek nahi lag rahe agar sid-avani ke bech mein aayi na woh..toh mujhse bura aur koi nahi hoga 😡

Loved the update darling! 😳

Edited by disha15 - 13 years ago

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Bells.E.cullen

@Bells.E.cullen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#455

very nice update
first of all thnx alot 4 d update...
mindblowing update
i also thought dat the person will b mummy ji
but it was arjun
mast bnda hai arjun
n avni n sid ka eyelock...
luved it how sid was so lost in avni...
some unknown feelings which he never felt wid shagun also...
avni's shy...
wooow...
sooo sweet...
dont worry abhi to bht c feelings pdi hain...
chlo mummy ji ye incidence sun k kafi sukun mila... bechari bht tensed rhti hain sid ko lekr...
luved arjun's dialogues...
ab ye dadibua kahan se aa gyi...
arjun n priya ki baaton se to hitler ki dadi lg rhi hai...
dont know bechari avni ka kya hoga...
hope dadibua sid n avni ko pass hi laye door na bhej de...
koi bhrosa nhi... hr story mein dadibua type log hi luv birds ko door krte hain...
wish 4 d best...
anamika is such a luving mother-in-law/ mother...
thnx alot 4 d pm...
n sorry 4 d late comment...

Edited by Bells.E.cullen - 13 years ago

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sweetnandu

@sweetnandu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#456

interesting update..

pls do update soon..

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Dhanvi

@Freethinker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#457

loved it...that was simply amazing...i must say even i lov twists and turns...😉...wonderful work... waiting for the next part...

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dhwanimehta23

@dhwanimehta23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#458

nice update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊😊😊

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shruja

@shruja

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#459

thanks for update n pm
sorry for late comment!!
awesome update!!
so u again twisted our guess!!
but i loved this twist too
could saw a caring frnd in arjun!!
and scence between sid n avi was so cute & romantic
description was very beautiful!!
now who is dadibua? u scared us too!!
hope she will help to make relations of sid n avi more close

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#460

awesome...amazing...
sid n avni ankhon hi ankhon main yun...lovely scene...n loved the family convo...n new entry...lo a gai...hittler dadimaa
hope she will be a bridge for avni n sid's relation
sry for short comment...mob se itna hi type ho sakta h...otherwise ek lamba comment deti
update soon
luv u :-)

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